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NaoKat
After reading and consulting with others, I'm going to be honest with my own writings (since none bothers to give one). Ignore the other reviews, they are only from review swappings.
Lots of inconsistency. Too many useless descriptions for the characters and the surroundings that impact nothing at all mixed with the essential ones. This causes vital information to be missed since the readers would just skip parts that seemed useless.
A very unstable update.
Found some (embarrassing) plot holes and grammar mistakes (mainly pronouns, causing confusion for the readers).
The world building and background were too strict, numbing and paralyzing the chance of story progression and dynamic flows.
Anti-climatic results from the scenes and pointless scenarios(which is disappointing. Ouch)
The characters are either too useless or too cliche, especially for the protagonists. Lots of reused (bad) tropes from other fictions. Some are too smart and too stupid at the same time.
The genre says fantasy, but where? I see no epic fantasy battles, only quick and boring catfights yielding no important result for the story.
Is this story for you?
As long as you can bear (and anticipate) the negativenesses and enjoy reading western fantasy, perhaps this story could be for you.
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DaoistQl11pjCieL
I have read some chapters and all I wanted to say was, wow! It was a blast! The storyline is interesting! From the first chapter to the next, with each contents and all, I can not! This is such a good work! And I love the verses from the bible❤❤Thank you for creating this story, author! Keep it up!
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Just_a_genius_1D
I really recommend this book! it has great content and grammar is good too. It does contain a lot of information in one go, which sometimes makes it a bit difficult to read because you really have to keep your concentration, but it really is an awesome book!
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Joy_Odafe_9688
this is a very detailed books,the expressions used are also very interesting and the characters are very charming especially axel who seems like a very fun character. I recommend this book for any one looking forward to adventure
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Booklover_
Your story is nice and already doing great so I don't think I need to tell you how good it is. I also like the way you are writing 4 stories at once. it's impressive 😃
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cukie123
5 stars🌟I decided to read the first few chapters for today and then few tomorrow and so on, but no, I was hooked by your writing skills and the way you developed this story is remarkable. I usually read female lead novels but it was the male lead (as far as I read about Alex Skyfall, more to go) this is a great novel with a realism concept at its core. Keep it up Author^^
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Taiwolilly
Wow, just wow. This book deserves all the 5 stars. Your description is top-notch and it gave off a particular feel for me. My genre may not be fantasy but I write the spiritual genre and this book particularly piqued my interest. I really really enjoyed this. I love how reading this made me feel.
This book is good enough to be published on paper. Keep up the good work!❤👍
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TimeTickFast
Definitely I am wanting for more.
I am so impressed with the world-building and plot development.
Wow!
5Stars!
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Dugzaw
I can easily see that this author is a prolific writer just by reading the detailed synopsis. The author has created an entire world, an entire list of important characters, and many other conflicts to unfold. I commend the author for this detailed storyline filled with strong language and vocabulary. Just by reading the prologue about Axel, I was ready to read on. Great work.
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Michael_Gesellchen
This author does a nice job building and developing the world this story is set in. The characters are well developed too. The author paints a vivid picture and does a nice job drawing the reader into this world. [img=recommend]
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Otu_Harriet
Great story line and plot. I love every chapter. This story is well structured and it development is just amazing. Keep writing author cos your imaginations are just unbelievable. Keep it up
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ssf_in_reading
ssfx3yuchens here with a honest review.
A good read, interesting storyline and portrayal of the protagonists of the story. loved exceptionally the part about the pirates.
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Wolf3467
I've only read through chapter one but I do like it and I plan to read more when I have time though I'm writing everyday this week. I do like the world it is in and so far no misspelled words, I sometimes see that when I'm reading books.
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Dekomori49
I have read the AoH, but I think the story was interesting enough. The introduction of the characters are detailed enough (at least for me), and the plot itself is intriguing. It also stands out from the other novels since the author make different MCs.
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Aliza_Jabri
This is an excellent read, the writer has beautifully portrayed every little detail about the characters. Her narration kept me hooked to this book till the latest chapter. I can't wait to read this book further. Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Henrietta_Otu
Great story line and a master piece. I love every chapter of this novel. The author did a great work with the characters and scenes description. It’s so interesting and refreshing to read. I highly recommend this novel to anybody. Good work done author. Thumps up
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HuXein
I’ve read 5 chapter so far,IMO the story is interesting,Then the background setting is Very detailed
Not just that,the writer also tell the story form 3 Different Perspective,and it’s not your average fantasy story since the story has so many depressing scene.
So far so good
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XXXXC
Interesting so far. I have only read the first few chapters, but what should I say? I am hooked. The characters are good. The setting is cool. Great work. Highly recommended.
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BasyoniMazen
Good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Kera_wood
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