Reviews of Book One: Overcoming The Power Within by JdCreates - Webnovel

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Quella_Clinton
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Quella_Clinton
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cLancelot
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Kera_Wood
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Clover_2566
I've only gotten to chapter 5 so far, but I'm enjoying the story so far. There are a few things, though. From what I read, the character designs aren't mentioned in the story at all, so you've really gotta imagine what they look like. I'm also kinda iffy on the antagonist's plan being layer out from the start. I feel like it should have been more mysterious, with context clues leading the reader to draw a conclusion until the big reveal ties it all together. Besides that, the story is going at a pretty good pace, keep this up and improve those things, and it should be good!
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Melik_David
The story seems like this has a lot of potential. Maybe the story could dive deep into the lore of the world and how each character got to where they are now.
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devilDestroyer22
A good story, though there are some grammatical and punctuation errors, the story has a good flow to it, keep it up. I look forward to more chapters in the future.
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Krizzy_By
Just wow, it was so interesting story. Even i only read the first 500 words. i was surely it was a good book. Keep it up writing. I'm also waiting for the next update:)))
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SilentKidd
what a interesting story, keep up the good work and keep going, love the book it's so good and you should get more views congratulations on 2k views
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