Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 11: Trip to Diagon Alley of the book D & O System

Interesting story so far. I really hope you have kent and hermione tell each other the truth, especially Kent needs to know if Dumbles and weasleys can be trusted, what to look out for, and hopefully have hermione teach him stuff before hogwarts

Pleasee mooree !!!!

I can only hope the author won't make the MC buddy up to Harry Potter, expecially if he is still an idiot

Interesting story. Please post more.

Wow, this is so good! This story has great story and potential. Thanks for the chaps author!

prob some purebloods seeing McGonagall escorting them and putting two and two together.

thanks for the update

Minerva McGonagall

Great job!

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter and im loving your story

Thanks for the chapter😊

thanks for the chapter

If its Ebony wood it would be black and not brown

I think he's forgetting that there're pureblood bigotri inbreds

probably those that hate muggle born!

3 stones

thanks for the chapter! 🐙 He is smart enough to know that texts from dreams cant be copied or read and I hope you don't use stupid excuses for otherwise. So the occlumency 100 paged text can't be copied from a dream because one can't read in a dream so he should be able to figure about what's wromg with Hermione.