I mean if I don't give it five stars who will๐คฃ, it a good long novel, Op Mc who is lazy, a lot of side characters with well good character building and a cat girlโ๏ธ
A great novel that does a good job of not setting characters to the side to be forgotten often, despite the larger amount of named characters, also has a pretty good world background to give better understanding.
The only con is that chapters are a little short (but thereโsover 500) and that itโs currently on an indefinite hiatus
Great novel, I was wondering do you have any plans of creating similar novel in naruto world, it would be great to read that
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after reading over 430 chapters i am ready to say i am disappointed with this story.
I feel that the description of environment and characters is missing a lot, honestly until now I don't know what the protagonist looks like, hair color? eye color? skin color? what age? what's he like?.
the personality of the MC is another shot in the foot is how he only cares about making money and not about getting stronger or improving and after a point the story gets boring without significant progression either in the personal aspect or in the world.
Its basically the same as black tech Internet cafeโฆ....................................................................................................
very interesting novel , MC op and wide world building , but the chapters are a bit short but the rest is highly recommended to read
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great novel.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Perfect. Lazy mc, cool side characters, and cool system.
I do want more chapters tho. Its cool where the little kitten is like acting all proud and then he releases his aura and its like meow(insert cute kitty face).
It's quite a long novel so far, but the chapters are relatively short. The characters are all likable as well. My only gripe is some characters are only there for a story arc, then disappear. Such as the City Mayor after the beast horde.
How the hell did the writing quality managed to get 4 and a half? The grammar in this story gave me a headache.
The words placements are weird, the sentence structure often broke the fluid flow and destroy your immersion.
Someone tell me that this will get better so I can decide to continue or drop this novel. I'm only in chapter 5 and already felt like I'm becoming Saitama without the strength.
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Good story, I like what I have seen so far. I'm excited about what will be happening when he starts expanding and more of the world and the grander story is revealed. Grammar is also improving steadily. In the first chapters, there were words missing or larger errors, now there is much less of such things, and the story flows better. I'm heartened to see the author steadily improving in quality. Good job!
really liked .this one
has regural update and nice world background but till waiting for that chewing gum and soda๐๐
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Honestly just read this novel because I was bored and I wasn't expecting much.
But I must say wow, did this exceed my expectations. Although it is true that.grammar and writing could be polished the novel was entering throughout the whole 200+ chapters I have read so far. Plus it's completely free, compared to some novels in which writing quality is the same or worse and still put a pay wall.
All in all definitely recommend, no paywall, intriguing story and although writing needs polishing definitely understandable and flows decently.
P.S author I'm not sure if you have already but if not I would recommend you setting up a pattern if you're not gonna set up premium chapters, just add some benefits that come with supporting you and I'm sure you can make some befitting of your work!
I like it a lot. Its an OP MC but thereโs no harem and unnecessarily idiotic people who come and pick a fight. The man just wants to run his store and his customers will protect his store for him ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Its a fun and easy-going slice of life. Writing quality and all is good. Will recommend๐๐ป
Beautiful novel, op mc, system, shop with pills, equipment, vr (virtual reality for training), and upgrade room. Has a catgirl assistant, plot is great and not too tense and keeps you in wait for next chapter, updating stability is awesome (updated about one chapter every day). Only thing is chapters are really short but really doesnโt change how good the novel is, definitely should read if you are a fan of novels with shop owner op mc with system (or maybe if you just like cat girls :3)
dropped chapter 16 multiple issues with story
1 needing to enter a trial to progress -that isn't cultivation it's idiotic, for a trial in typical cultivation it is only when you are advancing to certain levels not every other fucking day. also rediculous that to enter a trial you need a crystal how the **** does a trial know if you earned the crystal or bought it
2 pricing the price for items that are classed as low is way to high for readers to associate with being low value
3 seems any twat entering store can buy things so far only 2 groups have entered but still spent a few hundred to a thousand gold making gold seem like cabbages
4 the way MC gets items is idotic, a shop needs consistency it be better if MC had a reward that allowed him to buy any product within certain parameters from a catalogue for filling shelves and not a random roulette wheel. could have had the roulette wheel as a secondary option with positibilty of getting a high value object for next to nothing
5. no forms of entertainment, MC is working in a small store he is the boss what's he do all day when no one enters stare at the walls. at least have a few books to read or a way for MC to learn to make things himself to fills his time
Overall an iffy novel, I stopped at ch 43.
There are quite a bit of redundancy and poor writing that really gets in the way of reading. Currency and level system seems poorly planned. Also every crafter in the world seems incompetent as even the worst grade items are better than grandmasters. I guess the main fun about this novel is how the system trash talk the mc.
Grammar and overall sentence structure, is quite poor and broken. The depth or well how well the characters are portrayed is just rubbish at best, the mc has no personality and the overall theme is forced .
The background and world building is just terrible, theres no description on the surrounding or the store. its basically just stringed together dog shit.
The Systrm and Power levels are just poorly planned.
System wise.... the author tries to make it money grubbing and shameless but just comes off as a poor RIP off.
Generic System-Shop kinda Novel with nothing new, same old crooked system, face slapping OP mc, amazed customers, but since I like these kind of tropes. 5 stars from me.
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