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KikiCreative
I love this! I think im addicted! You did a FANTASTIC job! Don't stop! I would highly recommend people read this! and I can't believe I became a simp so fast it's ridiculous
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Kystal88
Storytelling is gripping, and you're automatically siding from the first chapter with MC. Clear determination of who is speaking, without confusion. Easy to read sentences, spelling and grammar are well done. Good job author!
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Nelly_Crilly
Hi, This is Nelly, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on LGBT Fictions. After reading your story "The Black Tome", I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there is so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via nellycrilly@outlook.com, then I should take the opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Nelly
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Whendhie1
I love books with magic and vampires 😁 I would definitely love to keep reading this .Adding it to my library ASAP. Good job author. 👍 👍 👍.
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augustwrites
The story just flows. The writing is very clear and easy to read. A bit dialogue heavy, but I actually prefer that. Pacing is great and you don't get bogged down with descriptions as you would in other fantasy stories. Looking forward to next installments.
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MisterFlare
Phenomenal job on the daily updates, even I can't do that quite yet. The writing quality has a lot of room for improvement, as the first few chapters felt kind like marching through waist deep water. The story itself is pretty gripping and managed to hold my attention though, and the world feels as though it has a lot of history behind it, even if not explicitly stated. The character design. . . Is noticeably absent for the most part. I only just realized but I can't seem to visualize the MC or any of the other characters clearly as I write this. Descriptions of their clothing helps, but so far all I can imagine are faceless mannequins wearing fancy suits of armor or clothes. There's plenty of room for improvement, but as I've only read five chapters, my opinions are subject to change.
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RazorIsSharp
I like how this story started, but I feel like it could use a little more description between some of the dialog. For instance, when he starts fighting Mr. Thai, I'm not quite sure where he is. Anyways, keep up the hard work! More chapters!
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Alpha_Medic
KEEP IT UP! You've got serious literary capabilities, Author, and they shine through your meticulous wordplay and descriptive efforts. The pacing can stand for a bit of improvement, as at some times I skipped an entire paragraph or two in order to keep invested. In general, however, I think you're doing an amazing job, and I look forward to your further work. 10/10, Author!
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sharrnister
Hi Author! Overall, your story is very interesting and I liked how you describe their world background and your writing quality is so good! The character design is one of them who you create so well, Good job so far!
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Bao_Karen
I think it is overall pretty good but I think you need to add a bit more detail to your characters, so the reader can get a better understanding of how the characters look.
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outpost76
It's a pretty good story. I haven't read any other stories about possession but I definitely like this one. I don't have much to say about the MC, he just gives the impression of the typical shounen character The writing style is good and the background seems interesting and isn't shallow so the story has a lot of potential. It'd be amazing if Erebus was less obvious with his manipulation but the author should do what works for him/her
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Jo_J
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Jo_J

Here, on Webnovel are so many of fanasy stories... It's difficut to find something "different", something captivating and fascinating, etc... I think your story has this "catch". It's nice to read it. You've successfully created a different reality. The plot is captivating and characters are expressive. Keep writing!
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_AiRen_
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_AiRen_

Commendable work I must say. Good command over grammars and spellings. Well thought out concept and descriptively designed background, characters sketched out finely. I like your unique style of writing and generating interest in your readers. Good job author!
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Noleafyet
A nice and interesting read. Thank you, dear author! Please keep it up! May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, and even earn more^^.
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AxlesOfFate
Shameless self-review here enjoying the entire writing process and am happy that I am getting so many positive things said about my writing thank you everyone for the time you have spent with my novel. Everything makes a difference. Every read. Every power vote. Every Collection. Every Review. Every Comment. Thank you everyone again and again.
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Bishtf
I really like this book! I'm a sucker for adventure and fantasy books and this one suites my tastes. The first 11 chapters have been so interesting. Am looking forward for the next updates!
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Aella_Stormwind
Really enjoying this story so far. Your writing style is well developed, and your main character is unique and not archetypical. Interesting concept, excited to see where this goes! Keep up the good work.
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Darlene_Virginia
This story has a high potential and the writing quality is very good. Minimal or to no error at all. The characters are designed well. The author has successfully built the world background and the development of the story is smooth. I hope to see many more chapters in the future. Happy writing author!
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Nick_Miller_5749
Excellent story so far! I am following it day by day, and I can't wait to see what's coming next. Each chapter has a way to keep me engaged, and you really get a feel for the world these people live in. Keep up the good work!
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bibiyenini
Okay, another fantasy mixed with this kind of thriller plot! Not to mention the black tome that looks eerie and scary at the same time! Way to go, keep up the good work, author!
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Tony_LaRocca
A fantasy tale of an underdog magical apprentice who finds himself in possession of a powerful, dark tome. Well written, and so far enjoyable. I'm looking forward to what happens next.
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