Reviews of Road to Laze Around by shaeshang - Webnovel

Despite the grammatical errors, I like the story though I'm in the very early stages. The FL and her family are intriguing there is no "mix up aka drama" that is usually seen with other transmigration/reincarnation novels which is refreshing. Will be reading some more of this story, hence it will be in my library. Continue with your efforts in improving the grammar which is tolerable to some degree.

The story is really good and interesting. At first, it has a light-hearted mood to it like it's just going to be cutesy and such. But then, it got serious when Elizebeth dreamed of the future. So interesting and different from other novels. Good work! ☺️😄

This novel has the perfect balance of fantasy, fluff, mystery and comedy. A nice concept and the characters are developed in a good way. Overall it is a very enjoyable read. Would recommend it 100%.

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I love this story. Please keep writing. The family members are absolutely lovely. Their interactions are so cute. Even the king is also funny and nice so far. Which is rare for a king in transmigration novel.

I love the plot and convo!! Very fresh and special actually! Is there any more similar work like this? Please keep updating and I truly look forward to seeing the following development of the whole story!

Interesting story ! Stable updates so readers aren’t waitinG too loNg for chApters ! Elizabeth is a Strong FL and love her family. Hope author will finish her stOry! Congrats on goIng premium !

Very detailed and rich in dialogue and characters. Each scene is depicted and portrayed extremely well. Each of the events as described from the author invoke emotion and empathy for the characters. Very good job indeed, author.

Hidden treasure found! To think I'd end up getting this hooked! Added it to ny library the moment I read it XD Characters are adorable. Especially our little mc 👀👀 Good Job author! ^^

Pretty interesting concept! I like the insight that it gives to the lives of people of a high status. It’s also very well-written. If you’d like a story that’s fresh and unique, give this one a try!

This story is really nice. I really love Elizabeth... keeping to herself all her inner emotions and showing off her polite and calm character to others. just for that I really loved this book. Author you are doing well. 👍

READ IT READ IT READ IT Important things are said thrice. I am in love with Elizabeth the main lead. She is too good and all the other characters too. It is totally unjustified to try and express this story in words. I am now only 10 chapters in and my expectations have grown to a whole new level. Gonna Binge, You guys should read it too.

This is a hidden GEM! This is a work of art!!!, seriously this novel has everything, Every chapter is" PERFECT" This novel is really interesting and entertaining, I really suggest you to read this. I am patiently patiently waiting for the author to update soon !! Author, you have written such an incredible novel

Novel's plot unique and refreshing. Your synopsis is quite attractive too it can hook any reader quickly. There's no mistake or anything you need to improve. Keep up the great work it was nice to read your work. All the best with your future :)

As a manhua fan, this is amazing. I love everything especially Fl. Plots are fresh and refreshing. And your writing style is AMAZING! especially the beginning, It had already got me hooked. Its such a cute story, overall good job!

Fluff, cute and sweet! I love how the author began the story. The opening sentences were relatable. Lol. The writing is entertaining and most of all its relatable, easy to read. I loved it. Writing style and quality are superb 💕👍🏼 Keep updating author! Your story is amazing! ☺️❤️

The book is awesome. Just excellent. I've not read books recently but this book just caught my attention immediately. Keep it up and never give up author - San!

A really potential story that will hook several comic's lover... a really good plot that doesn't fall ... The characters are also interesting and can make a good development... keep going!!

5-star!!! The book deserves it. This is one of the book I read after a long time and honestly, I am flabbergasted, truly unique storyline and cute cute characters.Fighting to the Author!!!

I like the author writes it since its detailed like it makes the reader visualize where is the setting and especially the feeling of the character, how they talk. It's good :))))) keep writing, author :))

FL has got the spirit. I loved her character, but it is too early for me to tell about characters, as most of em not even teenage. they re all kids. Lets hope they will be a character and make us wonder with their choices in the predicaments. I gave five to all because author-san was really good at quality writing, stability of updates, story development, character design and world background. I hope you even make it better. it is added my library. Fighting!

WOW! Such potential to be one of legends.. I am so impressed with the way that the author sets mood and details of each scenes. Just Amazing! Great weaving of plot development and world-building. You cannot teach this skill because it is just simply an innate talent. And you've got it! Please do not be discouraged at start because I am telling you, you have a great talent in writing! To all readers, give this story a chance! Must-read! 10/10

To the review! The good: I like the overall story. The hints of things past and things to come, the troubled heroine, her interactions with various characters, these all help make the world come alive for me. It's hard not giving away anything of the story itself, but I'm thoroughly enjoying it. The bad: Word choice is a bit strange. As an example, I'm going to re-write your first paragraph here the way I'd have written it. She wiped at drool mindlessly with her tiny palm. It had been such a good rest; this was beyond doubt. After such a good night's sleep, well, someone was in a good mood. It had been a perfect, complete night of rest! Compared to the previous night, she was quite satisfied. It's just little things here and there, but as long as 'the bad' looks it really isn't enough to call it 'bad'. Overall: The only thing that I could find to critique was word choice, as it sounds strange to me. Updates are happening at a steady pace. The story has developed in explosively good ways, over all grammar is good, the story is readable. I enjoy the character designs and how they interact like real people would in that situation. Finally, I'm enjoying the world you've shared with us. Almost perfect marks, I look forward to reading more!

I'm appreciating the story and plot. The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna convulse and feel happy.

MAN! From the very description to the narration, the author has managed to capture my attention. A few grammatical errors but they do not take away from the story and one can easily understand what is happening! Can't wait to see what happens ahead! Good work.

Narration is so good! Story is interesting so far as well! The way you explained the family and each of their traits are tender and warm. Hope to see more of your story!

I’m amaze because you update the six times a week. About the story, the narration is good. That’s all. Keep it up!