I'm the author of this fanfic. I was actually quite scared to post it at first but whatever. As a fan of the Naruto franchise I wanted to write a fanfic but at the same time I thought I might butcher it.
Anyway the fanfic is a non harem, so it's only a single pairing. Also don't misunderstand, the mc doesn't have a system, just a status checker to monitor his strength or check the strengths of others.
Just wanna say this is like my third fanfic, but it might not be updated often cuz I still have to write for my other 2 fics. The only reason I wrote this is because I got a sudden Idea that I couldn't get rid of even after a few weeks.
Alright so I wanted to address something.
Some people has been hating on the fact that I nerfed the mc by having his devil fruit abilities run on chakra... But personally I think it makes sense considering the fact that he is in the Naruto world. I don't really care much about it since this book was inspired by the novel 'The Strongest Hokage' which is about someone gaining the abilities of the Gura Gura no mi(whitebeard's devil fruit) in the naruto world. And like my fic, its mc also consumes chakra to use his devil fruit ability.
SO I'm just saying, if you don't like it then this story is not for you but I won't change it. If it's not your preference then by all means drop my story. Besides I am not forcing anyone to read it
aight author out.
I enjoyed reading this until it was dropped. it's not completed like it says on the page, so if you read this be prepared to be upset when it just stops.
honesty is the best policy and I am giving you he greatest honor I could give for being open to feedback some authors just ignore comments (most are bad ) but thnx bro for liatening
I like the novel very much. It is not one piece fanfic. it's a naruto fanfic. So, don't expect OP power from mc or one-piece power style. MC's ability is like suigetsu (sasuke's minion). So, Author go on. Only thing wrong with story is stability of update. But, hopefully author will have enough time to chill from his real life work and write story without any worry. :)
Great novel so far, as long as you don't make the MC completely OP before he even reaches the start of shippuden than I can see this novel having some longevity
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It's really a good story, really like it. I thought the MC would get op in the first 7-8 chapters But it's good that I don't Emotion to the story, and the character atrophies..
All is good just don't stop writing it like you did with ATG fic plssss well also Make Mc bitch slap sasuke for uncountable times and you are all good .
I'm lazy to write anything, so... This novel is coooooooooo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
i give you five star , hopefully you don't make the story full of woman , harem things , such a bullshit ,i don't know why every novel i read will have author bullshitting about sucking nipple ....
honestly its a really good fanfic unlike what some people say better than alot of the trash fanfics out there and i dont think the mc is nerfed he is even quit strong you can say being a high level chunin as a someone who just graduated is really good and as his jonin teacher said he is only lacking experience and with enough experience he can be as strong as any jonin.
but the update stability isn't really good to be honest but i gave it 5 star anyway cause i didnt want to bring down the overall rating cause its already quit low for a fanfic as good as this one honestly alot of people just rate it one star without even reading it and just bring up stupid reasons that doesn't make sense for the rating they gave to try and justify it.
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