Reviews of Gilgamesh in MHA by Believers - Webnovel

Too much info dumping every chapter like Auhtor if want the entire class to get down on their knees and suck the mc off then you’re going the right way The mc is so cringe as well and a Gilgamesh wannabe at most. Grammar is bad as well as the interactions

A story where the power of gilgamesh is in the universe of destruction could be beautiful. but as in every fanfic, it swept the main plot because it was so cohesive. but that's not the real problem. I won't be arrogant like mc gilgamesh that was the saying and everyone around him is praising him. The other students in his class are only there to praise him, except for momo and mina. I've read about 30 or 40 mha fanfici. but 90% of it turns into garbage for the same reason. What can I tell you? I do not recommend that you read it.

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It was okay in the beginning, but got worse as time went on. Also don't read this as it is currently, it is undergoing a rewrite. So don't have an opinion on this story for how it is currently, but wait until the rewrite is out.

If you’re here for gilgamesh then get out. this is just someone who looks like gilgamesh and has his powers, Not the wisdom, experience, arrogance etc. He even explained what noble phantasms are to his classmates and his ‘quirks’ weakness and strong-suits. whats worst is nobody questions anythig he does and he claims hes arrogant all he does is say ‘mongrel’ and other stuffs

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the thing about this fanfic I not only is the grammar terrible but like so many people he wants to make the story more realistic and give the mc more of a challenge but that ruins it for me cuz Gilgamesh is mean to be op with no equal except plot armor but like always there is suddenly another character that is so much stronger than the mc and it isn't even correct Angelica is not stronger than Gilgamesh the only reason she was a problem was because of her spell that let's stuff pass through her without that emiya could have easily beat her Gilgamesh didn't need that and he lost against emiya is because of plot armor

Well im quite suprise with the development of adding the base line of fate into the world of MHA since its an alternate timeline from the roulette that he have obtain his power from there must be a nice way to add that and you did author keep it up, nice touch you add different family that are still alive to fight in fate war and also do the story in MHA in your very own view point perspective

grammar/wording feels horrible at times which greatly reduces the story, having grammarly would greatly improve the story overall. there's plenty of comedy to get out of it but it needs proofread

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The writing is on a level close to a xianxa novel and the story development is bad as there's alot of time skips. For a person like me who has read countless Xianxia novels the writing ain't so bad.

Dude reading this really hurts mY brain their are so many easy fixes and so lme hugh mistakes too

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Honestly unreadable with the grammar, you spend more time trying to figure out what the author is saying than reading the story, I had to stop after the first chapter. It's a shame, I quite liked the concept of the story.

if you are reading this then plz don't read this novel I just dropped it when the mc said we have the right to flirt and when midnight and all the girls got wet over his abs that's just cringe is it not plz am begging u don't read this it is cancer. if you could give a zero on the review I would gladly put this novel at a negative zero sadly you can only give one star.

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Couldn’t make it past the first couple chapters. The grammar is horrific and the spelling errors certainly don’t help. Found the concept and the inspiration interesting, but I am seriously done, need to take a painkiller because this literally gave me a headache.

This story is the definition of so bad its good. Like, the only part of the mc that is like gil is that he walks around calling people mongrels. That is his entire personality. The characters are all boring and barely represent their canon selves. Dont even get me started on the writing and grammar. That said, still moderatly enjoyable

The concept is nice and have great potential. Only, the sentences really need some major editing. I hope you can find an editor. 🥰🥰🥰👍👍👍

I personally love the the mixture of the fate series in the MHA world, it brings something different. it would a whole lot better if the grammar wasn’t so bad, it’s the only thing that annoys me about this one. Keep up the work and maybe try to pay attention to grammar. Maybe get a translator/editor or something just to double check. Just my opnion tho lol

bruh it needs a lot of editing won't be capping the story got potential but it's not really readable I honestly think you should find a editor or someone to help you fix the Grammer that's all I got to say really

The grammar is unbearable I tried pushing past the 1st chapter in hopes that it will gradually get better but oh boy oh boy was I wrong, it just continues with horrible grammar where you can hardly understand it at a point, got so frustrated trying to read this crap like just get a editor.