Reviews of Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English) by Memonic - Webnovel

i thought its gonna be a skyrim harry potter crossover and man am i disappointed grammar is bad (almost as bad as mine) and the story is boring (read until chapter 12) mc has nothing interesting but it is harry potter and author tried someting different, failed but he tried

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a very strange novel. dunno why they bother making him a SIOC when he abandons his past identity immediately after assimilating his memories. he acts like a retard on drugs, talks like a pompous loser and nothing interesting happens really. its just a semi smutty novel that makes little sense.

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Well, this isn't really that interesting. I mean, the concept is quite interesting but the way it progressed was trash. +1 stars for the concept or else this is gonna get a 1 star rating

terrible grammar, almost unreadable.

what's up? ? is it dropped or not ? i've had it in my library for about 2 months .... 😂 ........................ ........ .. ...

my only problem with this is fact that POV's keep switching every sentance along with the pronouns of the MC it get really irritating hhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjjjjjj

The grammar bad, but still understandable. Punctuation is nonexistent, he and she gets mixed up every sentence so it's unknown if the MC is a guy or girl until his name is mentioned.

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Author dont know when should use him her!! Very often writing wrong genre and its so messed story. You should rewrite it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dropped??

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It's completely unreadable. Also, his wishes are 90% garbage. For his backstory, he asks for a pureblood family, asks for them all to have died, and asks to look nice ("golden eyes", "white skin"). For his actual wishes, it's even worse Fir his first wish, he wants access to a magical library of some sort, presumably from another fandom. For his second wish, he wants the library to have every book ever written. And for his third wish, which is, by the way, the only halfway decent opinion the MC has expressed to this date, he wants instant mastery.

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Almost unreadable. I had to copy the text of each chapter and fix it myself. Not recommended for the Grammar Nazi, unless you are also a masochist.

Es una buena novela..no la dejes caer..no hay muchas novelas como la tuya que usen el mundo de harry potter para crear historias distintas que no sean alrededor del canon original[img=recommend]

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Hard to read. Surprisingly, the general grammar is better than pure mtl, but sadly that doesn't change the fact that the story is no better in its own categories than the grammar.

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The writing has a lot of errors but you can see the author getting better with the latter chapters. I don’t know how but there is a lot of confusion with the words he and she, and his and her by the author. A really interesting concept but could have been better executed. I think the developments of the story are too fast but overall a good fanfic.

uff it took me a few hours to read it from chapter 1 to the last published xD. -good story regardless of negative comments, I like how it unfolds xD.

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