186Reviews
4.69
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
It's pretty good overall, however, the grammar is honestly atrocious at times. I hope the writing quality gets better, or I might not be able to continue.
🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲
✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
The writing quality is pretty good and the updates are pretty good. The story development has been fun to follow along with, and so far I haven't seen any significant plotholes, and I dare to say I haven't found any, but I might be wrong. The character design is also great, and it catches the personalities of the characters very well, especially how Odin was described in the MCU and comics, as well as some of the more minor characters. And finally the world background... I personally find it's exceptional! Everything fits nicely and it seems to fit nicely into the story, but because of some small or significant changes, such as Loki not having quite as harsh of an upbringing or lack of genuine care (instead of straight-up military training) it's going to be quite a ride seeing where the author is going to take this. (If they update again.)
Reveal Spoiler
the author just doesn't accept criticism, I don't know what's on the minds of these people who think this story is good, sometimes I even think that a part of the readers of the world has some mental problem to find most bad stories good.
I liked it hopefully it doesn't take me to post the chapter again...and clear up a doubt, will you add the events that take place at Marvel? if yes how many caps until you get there?
Buen capitulo amigo, uno de los mejore que disgro espero que lo sigas continuando. Jajajanan si claro malentendido si claro artemis Espero una buen revelaciones en la historia y que cambios aras
Reveal Spoiler
......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Best part about this is prolly the character developement. Everything else is great to but thats just what stands out to me the most tbh so yeah...
Solid start then when the story gets to the meat, the author abandoned it. Looks like he is gone for good too.
- good story - good story - good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story
I liked it, it has a good plot and how the characters developed, or dear author, I would like to know if you are still taking more chapters or have it abandoned so as not to get excited
it is so good that I'm pleading to the author for coming back................................................................................................
I give this story the max score becuase it is something new and intriguing. For once, the mc isn't Spiderman, Venom, or some X-Men guy, and Natasha Romanoff isn't his mindless harem drone after a few chapters. That being said, the story needs some improvement. There are some grammar mistakes and strange sentences, but nothing that is annoying. The author appears to be quite motivated and I hope he improves in the future because he has enough creative talent to write something interesting. This story isn't the best I have seen, but definitely an enjoyable read.
De locos, pero de re locos. Un genio, un re genio. Hola, me llamo relleno, sirvo para poner palabras sinsentido. Tech no me deja, que molesto.
A very good novel. Some spelling mistakes and missing punctuation, but better than most fan fictions. The story progresses slowly, but makes sense and is very interesting to read. I love how the author makes the MC interact with other gods, and that he is loyal to Brynhildr. Can't wait for the author to return and get us up to the MCU timeline and beyond.
Reveal Spoiler
/////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// ///////
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good.........................................................................................................................................................
...................................................................................................................................................
Just bad man.. read a lot of chapters and the writing quality instead of getting better got worse and worse.. Machine translated novels can be read way easier. You can see from from the first glance that the author never proofread his work, not because the grammar is bad.. but because of lots and lota of spelling mistakes and repeated words. Man i did not have a good time reading this
In c ibex infinite cell hibidwb. I don’t have a lot of time to do it I don’t know what to do with the school I don’t know what to do with the school I don’t know what to do with the school I don’t
this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Une histoire originale et captivante, le MC est intéressant et attachant. Le seul bémol est que le novel et arrêté depuis 1 mois... ON ATTEND LA SUITEEEEEEEE
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
(Serious Review and Detailed Review) Hey, I saw that there's a little serious review here, so I thought "why not make one?", and here you go. Valli is a normal Asgardian and a Reincarnated guy from the Modern World. He is not Vali, Odin's son. Some people are still confused as it is right now, but here you go, Valli is a normal Asgardian and not Odin's son, named Vali. MC is reborn 100 years before Thor was born and so older than Thor. As the story goes on and the further we read, every happenings and events felt like "Natural". We can tell that the Author is well versed or just talented in telling stories as the Novel was always from the MC point of view. All the conversations, actions, are Natural and not forced like any other novels out there. I'm not saying all of them, but some of them are. The only downside is the Author's writing. We can already tell from the Synopsis of the story. But, as you can see at the amount of people Voting for this novel getting it as high as Top 5 in the FanFic section, and a Little amount of people complaining about it. I can be sure you will enjoy the story. Personally, I haven't read Marvel, and I can tell you, even though I haven't read it yet, I still enjoy the story. Why? Because of how you can effortlessly understand the story. (Overall Ratings) 2 Chapters a Day! Why not? So, 5 stars for me. Writing quality, sorry Author I have to be honest here, so 4 stars? I'm a little bit prejudiced, but hey, I will take the hate. Story Development. Smooth and Natural. 5 stars for me. Character Design. I'm honestly surprised how they were close or How the Author built the character naturally, befitting their status, so 5 stars. (Like how Odin is an Arrogant King, because he is a King and Powerful God, so why not?) World Background. It is Marvel, 5 Stars. That's all! Comment your thoughts or things I miss out, to have people understand more of the story! 40 Chapters Review (Completed) 100 Chapters Review (Not Complete) ...
It's pretty good overall, however, the grammar is honestly atrocious at times. I hope the writing quality gets better, or I might not be able to continue.
🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲🎲
✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
The writing quality is pretty good and the updates are pretty good. The story development has been fun to follow along with, and so far I haven't seen any significant plotholes, and I dare to say I haven't found any, but I might be wrong. The character design is also great, and it catches the personalities of the characters very well, especially how Odin was described in the MCU and comics, as well as some of the more minor characters. And finally the world background... I personally find it's exceptional! Everything fits nicely and it seems to fit nicely into the story, but because of some small or significant changes, such as Loki not having quite as harsh of an upbringing or lack of genuine care (instead of straight-up military training) it's going to be quite a ride seeing where the author is going to take this. (If they update again.)
Reveal Spoiler the author just doesn't accept criticism, I don't know what's on the minds of these people who think this story is good, sometimes I even think that a part of the readers of the world has some mental problem to find most bad stories good.
I liked it hopefully it doesn't take me to post the chapter again...and clear up a doubt, will you add the events that take place at Marvel? if yes how many caps until you get there?
Buen capitulo amigo, uno de los mejore que disgro espero que lo sigas continuando. Jajajanan si claro malentendido si claro artemis Espero una buen revelaciones en la historia y que cambios aras
Reveal Spoiler ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Best part about this is prolly the character developement. Everything else is great to but thats just what stands out to me the most tbh so yeah...
Solid start then when the story gets to the meat, the author abandoned it. Looks like he is gone for good too.
- good story - good story - good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story- good story - good story
I liked it, it has a good plot and how the characters developed, or dear author, I would like to know if you are still taking more chapters or have it abandoned so as not to get excited
it is so good that I'm pleading to the author for coming back................................................................................................
I give this story the max score becuase it is something new and intriguing. For once, the mc isn't Spiderman, Venom, or some X-Men guy, and Natasha Romanoff isn't his mindless harem drone after a few chapters. That being said, the story needs some improvement. There are some grammar mistakes and strange sentences, but nothing that is annoying. The author appears to be quite motivated and I hope he improves in the future because he has enough creative talent to write something interesting. This story isn't the best I have seen, but definitely an enjoyable read.
De locos, pero de re locos. Un genio, un re genio. Hola, me llamo relleno, sirvo para poner palabras sinsentido. Tech no me deja, que molesto.
A very good novel. Some spelling mistakes and missing punctuation, but better than most fan fictions. The story progresses slowly, but makes sense and is very interesting to read. I love how the author makes the MC interact with other gods, and that he is loyal to Brynhildr. Can't wait for the author to return and get us up to the MCU timeline and beyond.
Reveal Spoiler /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// /////// ///////
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good.........................................................................................................................................................
...................................................................................................................................................
Just bad man.. read a lot of chapters and the writing quality instead of getting better got worse and worse.. Machine translated novels can be read way easier. You can see from from the first glance that the author never proofread his work, not because the grammar is bad.. but because of lots and lota of spelling mistakes and repeated words. Man i did not have a good time reading this
In c ibex infinite cell hibidwb. I don’t have a lot of time to do it I don’t know what to do with the school I don’t know what to do with the school I don’t know what to do with the school I don’t
this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good this shit is good good
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Une histoire originale et captivante, le MC est intéressant et attachant. Le seul bémol est que le novel et arrêté depuis 1 mois... ON ATTEND LA SUITEEEEEEEE
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
(Serious Review and Detailed Review) Hey, I saw that there's a little serious review here, so I thought "why not make one?", and here you go. Valli is a normal Asgardian and a Reincarnated guy from the Modern World. He is not Vali, Odin's son. Some people are still confused as it is right now, but here you go, Valli is a normal Asgardian and not Odin's son, named Vali. MC is reborn 100 years before Thor was born and so older than Thor. As the story goes on and the further we read, every happenings and events felt like "Natural". We can tell that the Author is well versed or just talented in telling stories as the Novel was always from the MC point of view. All the conversations, actions, are Natural and not forced like any other novels out there. I'm not saying all of them, but some of them are. The only downside is the Author's writing. We can already tell from the Synopsis of the story. But, as you can see at the amount of people Voting for this novel getting it as high as Top 5 in the FanFic section, and a Little amount of people complaining about it. I can be sure you will enjoy the story. Personally, I haven't read Marvel, and I can tell you, even though I haven't read it yet, I still enjoy the story. Why? Because of how you can effortlessly understand the story. (Overall Ratings) 2 Chapters a Day! Why not? So, 5 stars for me. Writing quality, sorry Author I have to be honest here, so 4 stars? I'm a little bit prejudiced, but hey, I will take the hate. Story Development. Smooth and Natural. 5 stars for me. Character Design. I'm honestly surprised how they were close or How the Author built the character naturally, befitting their status, so 5 stars. (Like how Odin is an Arrogant King, because he is a King and Powerful God, so why not?) World Background. It is Marvel, 5 Stars. That's all! Comment your thoughts or things I miss out, to have people understand more of the story! 40 Chapters Review (Completed) 100 Chapters Review (Not Complete) ...