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difficult to understand and repetitive paragraphs
basically there is no such thing as an update
there is no improvement in the story
characters one-dimensional
the author's information about naruto is very lacking
I really like the book. I think it adds to the naruto world with like an alternative timeline and I wish the book wasnt dropped. there is a lot more that can be done with the story.
This story started great. It was interesting since he was learning from mito and would be even more interesting if he stayed on this path.
Alas, the author had to do what all other authors do to destroy the story.
He wants all the powerful bloodlines and he get's them as easy as taking the blood from people. I mean, seriously, if it was so easy to gain a bloodline, everyone would have a few of them.
Because of this the Funjutsu becomes forgotten in the next 20 chapters or more ( I do not know since I stopped reading since it become like any other overpowering and boring mc).
Quite a shame, I really like the first 8 chapters... 😢
FUCK!!! I just found this story and it's already dropped PLEASE TELL ME THERE A CHANCE THAT THIS STORY WILL COME BACK ITS SOO GOOD. Damm why you need rewiew so fucking long why
great novel plz don't drop it
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Please comeback we all enjoy this if your taking a mental health break thats fine just please eventually comeback to this i Want to know what happens next the suspense is killing me
Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel.
Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel.
Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel.
Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel.
Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel.
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Overall a really fun read the author really put some thought into the story but the one thing that I wish was that it had a constant flow of Chapters that’s only thing that didn’t make this 5 star
It's a pretty darn good novel with the perfect blend of strength and background. It's way better than the other Naruto fanfics out there and u didn't feel too much into the main storyline of the anime. Don't drop the series, we all support u.
Eagerly waiting for the next update. 👊
its the most fantastic fanfic ever and never dropped it its the best its really great I like the every time I read it and thanks author san this is the best [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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