Just some small criticims author. You tend to overexlain things. For instance, explicitly stating that Shane is an introvert. I feel it is better to show, not tell. Maybe show from Shane’s POV how he is feeling and describe his physical state (ex: sweat, eyes swelling).
I realize this has always been your writing style and you dont need to accomadate just for one reader’s preference. Hopefully it just gives you a different perspective on the writing process.
Thanks for the chapter 😘
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