Reviews of Sacrifice: Time of Mine by JhiThan_Ser - Webnovel

This story infuriates me. Has to much potential but the author makes an MC stupider than an idiot. Literally gets killed so many times and rewinds time and runs away like a coward. Don’t bother reading. I very rarely ever say that but this is one of those moments.

Well first off the story is horrible. First reason is that it's a harem novel, second is the mc is so childish even when he gets killed twice he still falls for people kidnapping him and saying they'll show him their house, third is the author says it's a harem(All harem novels on this site are garbage and die out) yet the character is so childish that even people who are trying to rob and ransom him wonder if he's a girl and why's he so gullible. All in all this story, just like all other harem novels, is just using the harem tag to wrangle in the teenagers of this site to read this novel while the author just adds in random girls at random times and disregards any actual real relationships and how they work out, people who are polygamous know each girl they're dating can't just come in at any time, I could go on and on about the reason harem tag labels any novel as trash and will be dropped soon but I'd rather talk about how the mc's structure is so annoying to the point where the author is just piggybacking that "He was stuck in time with no one to talk with all his life" while disregarding him dying twice and beating up 1 person and tries to act like he's gonna somehow grow up from getting killed twice and not even retaliating to the point a normal human would when he can stop time and have the ability to kill the attacker. I'm 40 chapters in only because I thought "stopping time is a cool ability and I'm bored enough to read a harem novel" but I was incorrect, the only time he uses it is when he almost dies and he does jacksh*t with it. In all of the books I've read, I'm most disappointed with this. This by far is the most useless novel I've read.

The MC is the biggest beta i have ever seen he is killed time and time again yet at best only slaps someone even when he is tortured he still does nothing. The mc dosen't really grow over time he still remains a beta, really a pity since it seemed promising. There are other things wrong in the story like the total lack of common sense of the others or the lack of IQ

It has a very interesting and cool concept and plot, but…. Most of the important things aside from the plot are poorly explained/difficult to understand. Any term that is key and repeats very often is included in that. The novel starts with mentions of ‘elesk’s and ‘elesp’s which weren’t very clearly explained if they ever were. I only saw that elesk was short for elemental skill, could probably just use skill insead or don’t shorten it at the start. The Power system I’m not a fan of. Eeh = E Dih = D Cee = C Bih = B Ey = A Es = S The rule as to how they are spelt either isn’t consistent or the accent referenced to spell them wasn’t the most widely spread. When it hasn’t been listed but you have three ranks that begin with ‘E’ it makes it very confusing. It is mentioned that it is alphabetic, however I shouldn’t have to say what you have written out loud a few times in order to understand what it means. I do like that it isn’t just done E -> S but not how the author did it. Yeah…. makes me think that the author has E as their favourite letter or something. You then have 5 things that are repeated that all start with E and aren’t explained well. Not to mention the new existence of a rank ‘Eybi’ ??? Where’s the comparison for that? How people get stronger or improve hasn’t been explained well either. The only thing I remember is that people grow into a level based on their bloodline? Nothing else was really mentioned, nor was the mc actually shown asking how to improve. The MC didn’t really ask about anything regarding strength. He just started doing physical training and then technique later on. When the MC is shown to have an element via the assessment but doesn’t do the Body Strengthening that it seems everyone with an element can do it seems stupid.

don't read the five star review ... it will make you eeast our time... the novel is a stupid one ... so far from 20 chapter I can tell this novel is not for everyone this novel is for the new readers..... old reader like us won't like it a bit... seriously a guy who has a time power still can't kill a girl....who tries to kill him.... he could just grab a thing to kill her.... any thing can kill any one as long as you know ....this logic doesn't exist in this novel.... the last not the least the MC is a book warm then how can he dont know that not killng your enemies is showing no mercy to yourself ... the author sure don't know that logic is also very important to a novel.... for does who don't like a stupid op character then dont read this.... it will sure kill your day... my is already killed😑.

This book is one of the few that did an op character right, although it is slow paced it adds to the sort of SUSpense……………………………………………………………….

The character is well done and well developed and the ignorance of him is just the best. I specifically Liked how the character is meeting new people and scenarios to develop into a more less ignorant mc.

can some one please gift me this novel i rlly like it but i dont have enough fp and i dont have money because my age. [img=faceslap]

could someone tell me if you can read the chapters for free? because my hand is not able to put money on the webnovel could you tell me a website to read for free?

Tge idea of the book waspnretry great. But the writing is super bad. Characters are also very badly written and make decisions that make no sense whatsoever. It is like a 5 year old wrote it. Anything can happen out of blue for no reason at all

is this story gay?............................................................................................................................

Although, I am not caught up with the latest chapter I really love how this story is developing but a huge disappointment is the writing quality. Note that i am in the beginning chapters and i am presuming that the quality will get better and I really hope it does. This might just be me nitpicking but great story

A refreshing and intriguing concept. Time abilities are rarely touched upon due to the op nature of them. But this story manages to find a decent balance for such an ability. I'm only about 60 chapters in at this point but I'm greatly enjoying it. Well done.

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awesome story I'm already cought up just waiting for some new chapters, wondering if he will ever meet his father or what would happen if the princess sees him again.

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I’m not gonna lie; I’m hooked. realistic characters who stay try to how they were described. Amazing

please spoiler Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?

Honestly, I love this because its not super amazing but I still want to read the next chapter and I would like to see more and I will donate 10 power stones if you can do a mass release from 5-10 chapters

Hello, obligatory 5-star review by the author here. I think this story will be super fun and exciting. This is for a contest so I hope you will like it so that I can continue this. Thank you!