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4.57

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FreshMelon
Updated! This isn't a review of me praising my work. This is a sort of disclaimer in case readers don't get suddenly disappointed. 1. The MC - Don't try to understand him. Because he has many dynamics to him, it would mislead the readers into thinking that he is 'THAT type of character' when he isn't. His attitude on certain points would also be questioned. Sometimes, he would act out of character. It has been explicitly stated that the story is aware of it. In time, the questions would be answered. 2. Plot too weird and random - As a beginner author, there are scene jumps in the beginning but it would disappear some chapters later. There would be some random events but they aren't closely related to the main plot. 3. Atmosphere - 80% of the second volume is gloomy, not dark. Don't get the wrong impression from the beginning and the synopsis. 4. Pacing - Events happen one after another. But I wouldn't call it fast as if the time is considered, it is slow. The MC doesn't get the time to breathe. This is my response to the well-deserved criticisms. If there are any questions, you can comment. I usually respond to the comments.
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Latest chapter read (153) So far this is a complex novel with an equally complex MC. So if you like a simple MC and a straight forward plot this is not the novel for you. Although there is usually 1 or 2 grammar mistakes per chapter the novel itself is easy to read and understand. As for story development even though the author repeatedly stresses that the story is progressing slowly. From a reader's viewpoint the story is instead progressing very rapidly with different event occuring usually without sufficient build up. And due to the quick pacing several plot holes and inconsistencies occur. In terms of character design I feel as though the author has done a very good job in making a complex and mildly intelligent character with several personality issues. Skipping over update stability I feel as though the most glaring issue in the novel is it's World Background/ World development. This issue is mainly due to two reasons the stories pacing and the addition of other world too early in the story. First of all since the novel is only 153 chapters long at this point the 2nd issue I feel can easily be fixed as the story progress. However, the first issue namely the quick story pacing causes all three worlds to feel more like a PowerPoint slide than an actual world. Now by pacing (to make it clear) I am not criticizing the stories plot. I personally believe the plot is alright. What I am criticizing is how quickly the MC goes from one plot point to another with out sufficient build up to said event. The best example of this is how the MC went to fight the blood gang although the plot was sound, the lack of background of where the MC is, the history of the area ,why the blood gang was even in the area, and how the MC even knows the existence of the tribal area cause the entire scene to be a bit chaotic and confusing. Hopefully as the story continues the author is able to fix most of the issues of the story.
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AscendedOne
(Chap 202) I only started reading this novel because I saw this in my daily recommendation and I would say that I am not disappointed... ------ This novel is perfect for me since it is filled with an mc whose character is chaotic -- definitely not a good guy ------ So mc is this guy who lives in a rural village which is within a aristocratic society ( kingdom ) and his mother is definitely a high ranked one.. 《 This world becomes a VRMMORPG by the name of CHAOS in his urban world 》 --- before the start of the story he just wanted to live a simp life but he got transmigrated Into the modern ( post-apocalyptic ) world in the body of a child who has a mental disorder called interference ( soul instability) invasion of another soul in his body... ---- Personally I liked world #001 it was an entirely different world with a different background which really piqued my intrest.. ----- I only have to say that the update apeed of one a day is impressive and I have seen that the authour tends to use 11 - 12 chap. for each mini arc ( authour notes it down ).. The arcs shift from one to another with no interlude (there are fillers) but the mc is restless ----- Writing quality ☆☆☆☆ Story development ☆☆☆☆☆ Character design ☆☆☆☆ Update stability ☆☆☆☆☆ World background ☆☆☆☆☆ --- Highly recommend for someone who enjoys a novel which is filled with an mc who is minorly sociopathic... and sees the society for what it is... ----
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Ezio_Aline
Really enjoyed this, partly because of how much I can relate to the first MC. What's weird was other than the novel in general I found the way you write really captivating, it was really seductive I guess? but the fact that you killed off the MC is extremely disappointing, He was one of the reason I was reading the novel other than the way you write. I probably won't continue reading this unless the MC somehow revives which is not likely since the guy with no balls and less interesting Character got a system. Either way the plot twists and fights were amazing. it's solid 5 or 4.9 but you know what happened for It to be 4.6, tbh I was curious about his memories of his late father but whatever.
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PeachSaint69
Overall a good novel but it is just chaotic and you can't follow the reasoning slowly. all i could say its a pretty solid story line with a good background story I like it but its just Somtimes confusing to me
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Xenox
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Xenox

I just read through all of the chapters available for this novel, up to 247, and I must say that I have been thoroughly enjoying this novel. I didn't have a lot of expectations going in but the quality of the work and the depth that each character and situation had to them truly kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time, making me want to keep reading. It is a very complex story with a lot of elements that I know some people might not particularly enjoy or may be off putting to them, but getting past the hiccups in the beginning and understanding a bit more about the situation that isn't very apparent on the surface level has been a truly rewarding experience, and I recommend you if you have just wandered by this to give the novel a chance. Some parts of the story I didn't particularly care for (for example, *perhaps a bit spoiler, just scroll all the way down. I didn't mark the review as spoiler because the larger portion of this review doesn't have any, and this is just for providing some criticism for the Author* . . . . . . . . . . . . The introduction of the third world didn't really hook me in to much, and I ended up skipping to the end of the larger arc that happened because I wasn't as invested into it like I was with his original world and the second world he found himself in. It seemed particularly random at first, and the events didn't seem to have much of an important place in the story [though, I may just be ignorant as I hadn't read through it too much. I will say, I've been able to keep up with the story for the most part without getting any context from this part of the story]. Author, one criticism I'd have when you go about this again is to try and give a more solid connection to the new world and the character and his reasons for going there to create more investment for the reader. It seemed forced and out of place the way that it happened.) . *END of spoilers* . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Truly a hidden gem, it's a shame that it is so underrated as I am writing this review, and I can only offer words of praise to the author for giving so much effort into your novel here. Please keep going, I'm excited to see what happens next with the story.
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redkingtfk
This story is just....not my cup of tea. The idea is weird, the execution is also weird. So apparently, this story took place in two worlds. The mc did not get reincarnated into the 'future' world as I understood from the summary. The system is another thing. It has a personality and that's a big no no for me. Good luck on your story author.
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DemonataWI
I really like this but I wish that I didn't have to wait for every other day to continue reading. ........
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GOD_OF_ENAS
it's free right now but I am still not reading I read the first chapter and then I was bored it's not a idiotic MC butter truly idiotic MC I am not in this set goodbye beaches
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Dylan_Torres_0820
The story is pretty good and the plot is kind interesting. .........................................................................................,......
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Ancient_Egyptian
A very stressful novel... Don't get me wrong, The novel is not bad. It's surprisingly good BUT very had a heavy atmosphere within it ... The MC barely has any rest or relaxing time throughout the first 150-Chapters I read... The Major cause of this is his three identities. The others in the novel can't be measured easily as side characters or supporting characters or even background characters... The roles change so fast and unpredictably... Mr. author is not taking it easy on us whenever we feel that everything is okay and we can predict the next step a completely different scenario play for us and we become more confused... The MC has no real goal or plans just a collection of dangerous events and a war between his brain and his heart ... AGAIN it's very stressful and you absolutely shouldn't read it casually. The world is complicated and vague without any in-depth knowledge about it until it's become relevant to the MC. The only thing I feel for the MC for those +150 chapters is how miserable his life... no matter what fortune he chanced upon it, he always in very depressing situations.
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The Earth's moon is suddenly 70% smaller and permanently crescent shaped by a devastating and unknown force. For the students of E Class, Kunugigaoka Junior High School, the being responsible is known, as their teacher. The strange and very supportive entity has given the Japanese government a challenge to save the Earth from destruction. It wants t…
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Evander
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Evander

Thanks thanks again thanks thanks so thanks thanks again thanks thanks so thanks thanks again thanks thanks so thanks thanks again thanks thanks so
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Flamableslug
The main character i love his personality, but also hate it at the same time the thing that i disn’t like so far in the story would be that there is not enough character description for example: “hey how you doing” A random asked with consern. Instead the dialog i get is: “Whats up” “Nothing” Wanna hang out?” “Sure.” This ruins the story for me. Also i couldn’t get passed chapter 42 because i was finally getting used to the mc at earth and he was finally setting his foothold then out of nowhere he gets transported to a new world for bo becessary reason that i know of right now i only know thats its a “punishment” for dailing a mission. Honestly why i hate system but also ruined the whole story for me at the same time, the story its Self is good but can use improvements overall the reason this story got such a high review though is because of the plot and how i basically found barely any plotholes if not none.
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FallingStone
Actually i am feeling annoying when reading this novel,the mc jump from first world to transmigrate world and fake world i am feel so annoying because i feel like the world is not properly describe
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Aaron_McLeod_1690
Lots of grammar, spelling and syntax errors. story is plodding along dozens of chapters in. decent idea, not the best execution. character is your standard "ends vs means" MC, nothing amazing or unique about him. updates regularly, which is good. and the detail added about the world in the novel is wonderful. but the 2D character designs detract from it, and the poor writing quality prevents immersion.
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Zabne123
I like the story but for me it's too busy. It would be fine if the mc chose 1 or 2 missions each time or more if they were simple but it gets to the point where it is too much. Once the mc realizes that he needs to get stronger all of the systems require something. I stopped at chapter 45 because I couldn't keep up with the story or see where it was going.
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ZenLight
LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!
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Reo_remeriz
I have only read 40 chapters but it looks great! The characters are all fleshed out and the main character is very interesting. Author! Gambatte!
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harry_potter_0962
so far so good. tres bien jaja lastimosantente no aproveche los capitulos gratis pero hasta me ha gustado es decir has los capitulos libre. adelante veremos que tal
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Merchant0000
I love it already, to many it may be confusing in the beginning just as the author states, but just keep reading, things begin to get explain and pop out to you in understanding, this novel is very eye catching to a reader like me and i hope the author keeps up the good work till the very end!!!
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Glezeri
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Glezeri

Too many things keep popping up, no solution, currently on ch42, just transmigrated AGAIN,I don't even know if I want to read this when he just moved to a whole different fake world, sigh.
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InfiniteZer0
The story is not bad, but it has a ton of sudden jumps with no context. He transmigrates to another world (this is fine so far), he plays a video game once or twice (which I have a hard time finding why he got it in the first place, he may or may not be blacksmithing- I cannot really tell. He meets 15 different people and I still don't know who is who half the time. It does not really clarify what his systems are a whole lot
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Dust_Bean
RECCOMENDED! READ THIS!!! i don't know man..... slow and confusing are the words and oh... I read the first 10 chapters and jumped to the latest, the story progressed by 3%
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Big_Ouff
nice and good but need some work.wow nice novel good very good I don't know how to write so I am giving it and making the review spam wow nice novel good very good I don't know how to write so I am giving it and making the review spam
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Big_Yeet_8780
nice but it need some work.wow nice novel good very good I don't know how to write so I am giving it and making the review spam wow nice novel good very good I don't know how to write so I am giving it and making the review spam
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