The novel is really great, its like a breath of fresh air. I spent the whole day reading because i was so engrossed with the world and characters. Its really relaxing and fun reading. Keep going author, you're awesome!
Made me read a genre Iβm really not into. The characters are a bit cliche, but pretty perfect execution though. The English isnβt amazing or complicated, but that is also a nice thing in a way. The world background is a bit too cliche, but Iβll give everything aside from the update part 5 stars until more chapters are out. 4.6 feels abysmal compared to some of the trending smooth brain novels at the moment.
<3 chef-kiss <3 If you guys want something new and have a very wide and interesting background and deliverance setting to a story try this YOU MUST try this love it <3
The consistency and overall really good pacing of the novel really makes me interested to find out more and I hope that the author continues to put in the same amount of effort keep it up!
This story is different from the other story I have read before and it's really interesting. I like the flow of the story and the author has done great job. Keep up the good work author.
You should totally read this novel. It might take a few chapters, but soon you'll be hooked. You can trust me on this, I happen to be an expert on the matter. ;P
(jokes aside, thanks for reading!)
For any harem lovers, this would be a one out of thousands of books to have a well thought out storyline with the comedy and dialogue to boot. With absolutely or frankly none that I could see grammar errors, it kept me immersed in the mcβs world.
Despite the fact I dislike harem, even to other readers who are the same as me, I would still recommend to at least read since this is literally perfect in any other way. Quite an excellent example indeed
So keep up the good work, Author !
I rate this five out of five. Harem stories usually not on my agenda but I really like this one so far. Love about the tavern, and how anti-hero our MC is. A different type of fantasy that I had never read before. It kinda brings me to medieval era with templars and such. Nice one, ey! ππ»ππ»ππ»
It's very different from any fantasy novel I've read so far. Anti-hero mc is one thing, but a selfish and self-aware mc who's looking at the world with his (over)realistic view is the best, has its own "aura". Really like how mc treat his harem, not like any typical harem mc out there.
Overall the plot is "eccentric" not because it is bad, because it is different and being different ain't a bad thing.
Writing a fantasy novel must be chalenging... but you've successfully created a different reality. The plot is captivating and characters are expressive. also interseting descriptions of the backgroud.
I wish you all the best with the story!
A sleek and very interesting writing style. It feels like reading a traditional novel. The skill and word mastery are there and it's clearly showing. Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and even earn more.
Harem is not the type of genre I generally like but the plot got me hooked! I had fun reading it. Well constructed plot and humorously creative concept. Nice work author!
I like it, some of it is difficult to understand and some parts need more context. The dialogue is very good. I can't wait to see what happens next. You've done really well. Keep it up.
It's truly intriguing with ******** women like Elsa. It's truly well written and such an easy read. Keep up the good work author, looking forward to more uploads.
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