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MarvinCole
Hello! Editor here! I'm simply here to explain how our story works. First of all, there are character changing scenes. What I mean by that is we change characters in some scenes, while it's Ryuu in one scene we might need to change the story's perspective to Hiroshi or Lezlie or even other characters. That allows us to make our story much better and simpler to tell. Second of all, there is place changing. And what I mean by that is there is place changing scenes, when that happens environment and the characters changes. We have to do that to introduce the other places of our world and our other characters. Thank you for reading and supporting our story! Have a good day! (And also the MC is Ryuu.)
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MarvinCole
In our story when there are POV changes, there are --- lines that we use. That means our POV on the story changes. We do that to introduce our other characters in the story. And a quick reminder our story has mistakes too, that is because the writer 's main language isn't English. Thank you for reading our story, have a good day!
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MarvinCole
Wolf Bloodline is now officially under construction for a while. We will be editing every single chapter starting from the first to give the readers a better experience. Thank you all for reading till this time and have fun reading!
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bakaj79
This books is amazing love reading it.. I really enjoyed it very much..💐 [img=recommend][img=coins][img=update] [img=fp][img=recommend] [img=coins]
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MLPsA

The beginning of the story and the mystery is quite good and the world seems to be big, but if you're like me, you might want to read something else because the book is more Shōnen in mind, but I'm a Seinen fan. So that's the thing.
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DragonCaTt
IT'S ONE THING TO SAY IT'S ONE THING TO SAY IT'S ONE THING TO SAY IT'S ONE THING TO SAY IT'S ONE THING TO SAY IT'S ONE THING TO SAY IT'S ONE THING TO SAY AWESOME
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CharlotteOlivia
Author are really good at writing. The MC truly feels like a hero. I felt a hero's light in him [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Batmanfan
Action packed and suspenseful to the max!this novel os really highly recommended for your reading list..dont miss this one[img=recommend] 🦇
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BartWww
The Story has a good flow with great and relatable characters with understandable relationships and the action scenes are interesting with excitement and flair
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KJIishere
Really worthy of 5 star ratings. The plot is incredibly good and so is the world setting. I especially like the bad guys The MC is also good
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ReAeV
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ReAeV

It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author. My middle name wolf by the way.
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H9RXCar
The story lines in this novel are very interesting and lovely. very easy to assess and reliable. There is need to improve on the update of stories
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tanger0
Really good so far. Well done author! Keep writing and keep posting. Don't give up. Will be waiting for you to post more chapters! Keep up the good work!
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cibeks
It’s really a good novel. Starting is really good and have won my interest completely. I am really looking for more updates. Great,don't stop
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TNFe

This is easily one of the best books ive come across on this app. Every thing is really good from the amount of detail to the characters themselves. Its all so amazing and honestly enjoyable to read that i dont want to stop.
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K9szuyu
An interesting beginning of the story. Background quite interesting. Interesting idea. I recommend reading. I will wait for the continuation [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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VdMale
Great book so far, I look forward to continuing to read this one! Keep up the good work, author! Now, to reach the word count needed to post this review... Gday mate.[img=recommend]
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MZ3Z96
Love the story so far. I am looking forward to how it develops and based on how things have been set up so far it should be extremely enjoyable. Do yourself a favor and give this story a shot, I am expecting it to turn into a very popular story!
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Candy_Man_8584
I'll support u. Make high iq villains Don't make the plot armor thick pls Make high eq mc Make high eq n iq fmc Don't make mc too op .............................
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Fahrenx
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Fahrenx

Only 5 star because you seem to read all the reviews... and many of your reviews are useless.... Finding it hard to get into a first person story. i can't put myself into the MC's shoes because the narration puts "i" as the MC instead of me building an emotional connection to the character.... becoming impossible to empathise with the MC strugle...Also when "i" switches with POV... it makes it worse... "the curse of first person narration" might explain it better, google it. Plot/concepts are good but not presented well. For example. When the MC gets mad at injustice and steps up... if the grammar is bad it loses its effect. The wrong grammar kills flow, becomes choppy. The "chosen one" feels rushed because of the structure of your novel, and because again i built no connection with the MC... MY example of good structure would be.. ISEKAI/Transmiration to another world have an easier time with structure because the reader learns the same time the MC does, less info dumps more growth type chapters. The circle starts at the MC discriptions of what he/she sees then expands outwards to people, magic systems,  places, history.. all on a need to know basis, gained organically by another character and not info dumped. Also Your 1st chapter needs to separate the history of the kingdom, and the beginning of the MC in like a volume 0: Prologue... because it looks like its all one and the MC dreams about the history. i do not envy your poor editor because your chapters are so big, break em down more, tho im not sure trying to fix a first person story will help. on this site atleast, the title of each chapter has one point broken into parts like supreme magus or is short and direct to the point. Try winning one of thoes webnovel awards will get you into the recommended at least to build your fanbase, if you plan on starting again.
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_VOIDLESS_
to be honest I only can here because you friend recommended the story on multiple sites and I happen to see half of them she said your story is worth reading so don't disappoint her author
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Rayne_Rue
What a novel ,great work Author!loved your book the characters are great ,the description and the story development is great good work 😊😊☺☺☺
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lindsayaaf
At first, when I read the book, I wondered why it received so many stars, but now I'm reading it, I really think the book deserved it. But, unfortunately, the self is not a book. I'll change my score if there's a little love incident.
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942oi

I don't know, but even though this book was very popular, it still didn't get the attention.I'll give the book a chance. Note: It was worth
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TtolZ
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TtolZ

It's quite a good story and the plot in the chapters are pretty nice, if there would be more twists, it would become funny and interesting. Overall I liked it.
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MikeVapoyo
A good read, I have enjoyed every chapter and always look forward to more, the only thing to complain about is the lack of chapters, give me more episode.
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HarryTerry
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OLAuKR
I'm not going to pretend that i'm good at writing reviews, but here i go. AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
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jjtmmv9
Great characters and fantastic storyline. I love this type of stories. Can't wait to find a similar novel.Good job author,and have a nice day
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