Wow, the way the author delivers his masterpiece is really fascinating.
I mean, it is a truly good story, the conversation and the action itself makes you want to read more and more.
I like it โฅ
Hope to read more from you, author sama.
I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.
I've read up to Chapter 69 and I must say, the part about Qi deviation really gave this book a refreshing feeling... kudos to the Author... and for that alone, I give this a 5 stars โจ
I like the story. I'm rereading after taking a break for a year or so and I like it, but it's also confusing. The first 40 chapters or so are completely different from what I remember. If you look at the chapter comments of early chapters (like chapters 10-15) it discusses things that aren't talked about at all in the book. Can I just ask why? I mean I like the story, but I thought the original beginning was better. Just a personal preference. I still think the story is good.
Overall for me it wasn't a bad book. I like the main character hes an interesting guy. The story and the background are interesting for the most part. But now there are too many girls to try and keep track of for me. Though i appreciate your work author it's a good job for so far.
Ch. 1-13 don't seem to have anything to do with the rest of the story. Has there been some mistake? I'm confused. It's like somebody dropped those chapters in and deleted the originals.
i like the sypnosis of the book i will read this after down loading thanks author hope this will be a good book to read in my working time while my patient is sleeping๐๐๐๐....
Everything is perfect but where is the sytem? This novel has system tag. And also some comedy scenes and perverted in the beginning was funny why does it doesn't happen again?
I am dissapointed that like so many other books of this genre, the MC is a total idiot when it comes to his women, even when he has a veritable expert (Daniel) to ask at any time. Him not seeing or taking Min Qing were both huge mistakes.
He says he loves his women, especially Min Qing, but he doesnโt act that way. While his and Min Qingโs situations arenโt identical, the fact is that they need to stay together to help each other with their bloodlines as they are both going through the same things.
I am also really annoyed with his hypocritical behavior and attitude. He constantly โsaysโ he doesnโt like people who look for validation and praise from others and how he doesnโt need it all the while needing it more and more. His head is so big now that if it pops, he will be able to take out a medium sized city with the explosion.
The good:
The writing improved and became far more consistent as the story progressed. The plot is pretty original and well constructed. The people are fairly well fleshed out and have reasonable personalities.
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Review: 4.4 stars
First off this is an amazing book and while lacking some originality in the beginning (authors first book, so it can be forgiven). It really brings justice to the Xianxia genre. It manages to avoid most pitfalls that this genre faces while not feeling foreign to the Xianxia genre we know.
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Writing Quality: 4 stars
The writing quality is almost impeccable. From flow to just plain old English, it also has very few typos (which with the authors schedule is forgivable, praiseworthy even considering the authors schedule.(2-3 chapters a day)) The only reason I'm giving this 4 stars is because the author will occasionally tell readers to input their own choice off words which breaks the immersion in the story. Other than that though the writing is almost perfect.
Stability of Updates: 5 stars
The author is consistently making new chapters and updates regularly. The few time he has failed to he has had a valid excuse for such as being at a seminar and there being technical difficulties. All in all 5 stars
Story Development: 5 stars
The story may lack some originality in the beginning, but the author quickly makes up for it with unique (As far as i can tell) content. I won't elaborate as to not spoil the story but I think its worth 5 stars.
Character Design: 4 stars
The characters have flavor and depth most importantly the author follows through with it. (in my opinion at least.) There are however a few inconsistencies later on which causes me to give 4 stars
World Background: 4 stars
The world background lacks originality in the beginning but latter begins to diversify greatly. Due to the lack of originality in the beginning I would normally give 3 stars, but because of how the author turns it around and keeps it fresh I gave 4 stars.
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All in all I think its a fantastic read and I hope the author keeps it up. Anyone looking for a well thought out or entertaining story should read this. It does become a little too fast pasted in certain parts and too slow in others but this doesn't distract from the story majorly.
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Terrific for your first go, great progression so far. I am a pretty firm critic, and usually don't review before 100 so I will redo mine between then and 250. But any chance you could add a glossary with cultivation and mastery levels and such?
I have not read this novel.. but i have already given it 5 star. I have read your previous novel and found it really good..
Dude how do could u write 2 novels at once? I mean.. it takes me 2 hr to write one.. and i am only doing fanfiction.
Do u only make a living from these novels or do u also work on other things.. cause i cannot seem to comprehend u doing other work.
How do u manage time? Give me some tips
I hope u stay updatong this novel cause I love it. Hope u can release more chapters but honestly its fine already. I been using 4 accounts so I can read your novel more
great work. you can see the improvement of the author after 20 chapters and it's keep getting better. don't drop it as the concept is great even though a lil bit cliche but that doesn't matter. It was really hard to read upto first 30 chapters as I found it below par but glad that I stuck with it. keep up the good work
solo por la sipnosis te doy 5 estrellas por la mejor que eh visto, y yo bueno, no tengo nada que decirte asique bueno .....................................
this is story but why can't i unlock as soon as posible long story bu you can read only tiny part of these chapters What is inflation accounting?
โข โsystem of maintaining accounts just like historical cost , or Inflation accounting is the practice of adjusting financial statements according to price indexes.
2: What is inflation?
โ Inflation is persistent rise in general Price level
3: What is deflation?
โ Deflation is continuous fall in the general price level.
4: limitations of historical cost accounting?
โ A) Financial statements fail to disclose current worth of
enterprise.
B) Financial statements contain non-comparable items.
C) Creates problems at the time of replacement.
D) Mixes holding and operating gains.
D) Historical cost overstates income in times of rising
prices.
5: monetary item and non monetary item?
A)ย monetary items is subject to the recording of a net gainย orย loss.
Examples of monetary items include:-
๏ฑ Cash
๏ฑ Receivables
๏ฑ Payables
๏ฑ Loan Capital
๏ฑ Outstanding
B)ย Non-monetary items are those that do not carry a fixed value
Examples of non-monitory items include:-
๏ฑ Inventory
๏ฑ Buildings
๏ฑ Machinery
๏ฑ Investments
CHAPTER 2
1: 6 PROBLEMS or points for imporvment ?
A) The real significance of accounting information and evaluation
is not grasped adequately.
B)ย Financial accounts are prepared and often maintained for
purpose of satisfying law and tax authorities.
C)ย Accounting methods and practices usually are outdated.
D) Financial statements are prepared with excessive delay.
E) Inflationary tendencies often lessen further use of FS.
F) Shortage of qualified personnel and accounting and
management.
2:ย the conceptual frame work?
๏ถ A structured theory of accounting.
๏ถ States the scope and objectives of financial reporting.
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I've only read till chapter 20 but I've seen many parts thar are practically copy pasted from another novel I read, with some changes, like king yama being an earthling, the sun an moon tattoo but the method has a different name, the training method, and many other things, don't remember the name of the other novel sadly
I read a lot of long webnovels but only if they are intresting with great development this story checks those boxes and so many more im definitely gonna buy the rest of these chapters and read them right away
Overall (at chapter 312): Great read, worth it!
In the beginning it reminded me of stories by "I Eat Tomatoes" - but I like those stories, so no problem for me. Later on things diverge and the Author does a good job in his background building. The Characters seem interesting and well built - and so far none got "lost" (forgotten) as far as I can tell ๐.
There are not mistakes in the story, so it is pleasant to read (or listen to - if you also like to feed your favourite TTS reader with the chapters from the website - as the WN App one sucks ๐คฎ).
The story is taking a harem route - which is fine for me.
So once again: Go ahead and give it a try!
Everything about the novel is good... but you destroy smut scenes either you write it right or you don't write it.. those who want to read them would not want to see mall and car and different stuff in there... i hope you will change it.. of you write it then write it right
The way the author presented themselves gave me a feeling of honesty and down to earth something a lot of authors lack. Being open to criticism is valuable. Im about to start reading but no matter what this author deserves 5 stars.
All I have to say is great what a masterpiece. this good but I don't understand it says the min family is from the min clan and if win the age of ceremony you to back to the clan but it doest any of that
This is sooooooo good! I was reading this nonstop and canโt wait to see how this story develops. Keep writing Mr. Author![img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=update]
Is it me or is chapter 3 similar to the beginning of The Desolate Era? It quite literally has the same words but different meaning like "perception" and "spiritual sense". Did the author take inspiration from Desolate Era????
okay i gotta say, this is one of my favorite novels ever. I'm up to date at chap 258, and it's been super refreshing to read a novel like this. I've always been a fan of the process of comprehending universal laws/daos and the mysticism that comes with it and this has plenty of that later on. Origin-tan keeps the novel fresh, and there aren't tons of cliques throughout the novel. the mc end up in a relationship later on, and at least so far, they haven't used the worst clique ever (at least in my book) which is the main heroine being placed in a coma or kidnapped away from mc where he has to get super strong to meet her again. the character development makes the characters feel like living breathing people, and if you have some time and coins i would 200% recommend you taking time to read this.
also, plz gift stones and coins, so we can see the end of this story eventually. it would be really sad if this novel gets dropped.
Origin-tan we love you, and keep up the hard work!!! ใใคใใ ใใพ ใงใใ!
I absolutely love this book, and I will add them to my collection to follow up. Thank you very much for the wonderful story! The book cover is interesting too! :)
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