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wakadanna
This is my first fan-fiction novel in which I was inspired by UchihaFanatic. I love One piece. just like his work called, Shinobi lIfe! the mc doesn't have a system, just a  pokédex to monitor his pet(pokemon) and his strength or check the strengths of other creatures. Doesn't work towards humans except for him Also, there is no harem in the story. Koby role in the crew will be boatswain that is in charge of the ship's anchor and ship boat and more. if there's advice for his role. please advice me [img=recommend]
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ImProcrastinating
I think it's really good! The grammar and execution could be a bit better, but the concept overall is great. Also, if you ever need a beta reader/editor, you can PM me, and i'd be down to help out.
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dragonstorm09
this book is the best it has one piece and pokemon i wish the author would update again I've been waiting two years I was reading the book when it first came out
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Jacob_LIBBERT
Hey I love your work on this story I was wondering if you will complet it or not.
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Anshel_Plateiro
La mejor historia que e leído en mi vida ojalá no la dejes sin terminar porque Osino no ce que voy a leer para pasar el tiempo porque hay muy pocas historias de koby
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skoll04
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skoll04

this is great. well written and very interesting. the characters didn't feel like npcs. while it follows the adventure of the strawhats, it gives a good twist in it.
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Aulia_Jazz
🐹🐹🦊🦊(๑ↀᆺↀ๑) good story, still waiting update story and story development is a bit monotonous. still waiting for a meeting between whitebeard's army and pokemon.
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Gild_Rakingh
Very good novel, although I expected you to get a dragon from the island of dragons that was in one of the one piece films. Although you've already gone to Grand line and you can't help it
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homeofthelostqueen
love it PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it [img=update]
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dio_brando_6470
this is a nice fanfic no harem no xian chinese stuff no young master syndrome very good actually im thanful you made it non harem so here a stone thank you and continue with your story [img=recommend]
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vicky111mudi
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Mch
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Mch

I like the idea already without reading it....................................................................................................
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Flaminfiend
This seems really interesting and here is five stars to counterbalance that one dude that gave you one star just because there wasn't a harem.
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PUERKO_Senpai
NO HAREM???????? FUCK YOU AUTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ..............................................................................................................................................
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alice27
nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
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heystar1098
For not being a shameless author and rating yourself take 5 stars .....................😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😋😜😜😜🤪🤓😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ ...
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Twin_Star_12
Exp....... Please don't drop........................ It's good..............................................................................
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Overseer123
good story for me but hey everyone is different. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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ipar_noob
usually don't write a review but i just had to because this is by far the best one piece fanfic I ever read! aside from a few grammatical errors it is perfect in my eyes. it follows the original plot with coby in it, the pacing of the story is great, the mc and his pokemon have lovable personalities and he writes all the characters really well like they are original characters. and if you don't like systems like me don't be scared the system here is not really a system it's more like an afterthought than the primary focus of the story. So in summary the story is a great read. I really recommend it! keep going author-san!
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Moe_Moe_9274
B/C The author is a savage and doesn't go by the rules(didn't give himself a 5 star), we got to give him a 5 star before even reading! IF UR WITH ME GIVE HIM A -5 STAR-
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mugi19
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mugi19

You have done it so Koby is truly a strawhat and doesn't take over the story and replace Luffy, he has his own place and own story. So many fail at this and the pokemon are great. looking forward to seeing all the pokemon you add and if the animals ever evolve themselves.
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TRex
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TRex

Great work hoping to see more of [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]it
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Jack_Dvol
one of the great fan fiction i ever read....... i really enjoy the story good background story good character development weak to strong got a lot of potential to go further hope this story will not be drop (english not my first language so sorry if non of review reader didn't understand)
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Kurumi21
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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DaNepz
Love the work so far. The pacing is really well done compared to other one piece fanfics. keep up the great work.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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WolfantChaos
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