Reviews of Pursuit of Immortality by LilLuffy - Webnovel

like it so far, the guy seems like he needs a beating, but so far, not much to go off of. dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

Since I'm the author, I am going to give me a 5/5, but I am new to writing novels and I made this novel for pure fun. It would be nice if guys gave me tips, so I can improve.