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The story is really good and I recommend but I personaly think that the author should switch to third person or maybe switch between the two depending on the events, they use “I” a lot it and it sometimes gets confusing when they switch to a different character’s perspective, but besides that it really good maybe just some grammar or spelling mistakes here and there but it really good
but that’s just my opinion😅
AmandaCCC