Chapter comments on the chapter Talking Slime of the book The Only Aura User In Magic World

the narration is pretty weak and lessens greatly the impact, but the concept is very interesting.

lol it's seems he really don't have talent in magic and aura he only gained aura because of his slime

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concept seems good but I feel the narration is too fast. I like the writing style.... also please improve grammar. those mistakes are really small and silly ones

No family or friends? Does this mean no meaningfyl dialogue between characters and all we are getting is combat scene followed by lucky finds then more combat? It prompted me to look ahead; pet/summon/slime is female. Chapter has female characters alone interacting with the MC. Harem? Is this the intention from the start? A world where by some odd coincidence he only meets females and males are as nameless as the chieftain who provided the MC food yet couldn`t be afforded a name?

All those slimes different personalities are likely the different Aura users and the slime is some kind of amalgamation of their consciousnesses. Also, the super strong mage who could murder every aura user and then claiming they could threaten him is weird/lazy.

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bruh what the **** is this conservation. They just say it directly and in one breath

I know the feels bro :(

Thanks for the chap

I really like the concept but you need to get an Editor to rewrite these chapters because of grammar and sentence structure alone I might drop cuz it's annoying I'll give it 20 chapters before I make a decision hopefully you have an editor by now and if you do please tell them to rewrite these first couple of chapters

Japanese mc vibes from the narration

bro is Victoria in the harem, I need to know before I read

I'm out. the summons name is Victoria. childish blob name is making my shingles act up. be well pervs.

Hmmmm.....

am i the only 1 thinking of rimuru when he was talking in the last part?

thanks

Poor english so far. Hope it will get better.

Thanks for the chapter

why did he have to go to school when in his previous life he had already studied it. this is useless and a waste of his time. it's not profitable you know (Google Translate)