GOOD BUUTTTT COULD BE GREAT PLEASE USE GRAMMERLY IT WOULD IMPROVE THE STORY IMMENSELY BUT OTHER THAN THAT THIS IS THE BEST DANNY PHANTOM FF I HAVE READ...........
This story at first glance seemed like a good idea but then I saw Harem tag and just knew that this story will disappoint but still tried reading it and then by every paragraph my motivation to read it got lower and then the moment author wrote "Betty blushes" I dropped. this is for people who like dumb and low IQ novels
please continue to write this work, very good, an MC who creates his own organization, recruits people and an author who creates new characters instead of simply copying existing ones in the universe, even if it is a fanfic this should not negate the creative creativity
This is a good piece of work and should be read if interested in something new. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ππ
π Tia May......ππππ
Natasha.. Gwenππ...
es una historia entretenida.. ya no el tipico hombre araΓ±a.. ahora es el Amigable Fantasma del vecindarioππ....
diablos cuando lei que el MC encuentra a su tia May atractiva realmente espere que intentara conquistarla ((π las historias de incesto hacen daΓ±o je je je))....
Not a fan of this one. Having read only 2 chapters, I knew it was bad. The author keeps mixing up He and She. With the bad grammar and the confusing POV change, it is barely readable. There is just too many mistakes and the Author doesn't fix them. I get that English is not Author's native language, but at least try and fix it. There are commenters telling you what to fix.
Cool powers for a Marvel fan-fic, but it's ruined by Harem and the awful Character Design.
Betty Ross (30-45 yrs old), Hulk's love interest, blushes instantly after seeing MC (a teenager) during a fight between Hulk and the Abomination where people should be panicking. This part alone shows me that the rest of the story will be full of cringe and Author's lust fantasies. (It ain't romance if it's more than one person, that shit is lust.) (I hate harem but I still gave this a try.)
If you're into harem and low iq stories such as this then cool. You do you.
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I havenβt even read it yet but i just to hyped that there is a eanny phantom power set story... its a rare thing to find especially if its a self insert
At the time of the events of Iron Man 2, Peter Parker was about 8 years old !!! The boy in the iron man's toy helmet is Peter !!
Translated to google translator!
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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH SO FAR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
for those of you who have seen Danny phantom and like marvel this is the book for you and if the author is so kind he can join my writers community π
It is a gathering of writers and fans.
dm me with ur response(the group is a discord community)
Little_El