it's too much fast paced it's lost the quality like that if it was little more slow pace it may have been in a character gets intrduced all the things happen fast
this novel sucks. it's a good premise but the execution is hardly acceptable in the first arc... and every arc afterward sucks, the author can't hold down a plotline/storyline +continuity to save his life. if you wanna read it, read until he reaches chaos town and then drop.
I don't understand how there are so many junk novels like this one with 4 stars. All equally repetitive and with nothing new, it looks like fast food (bread, hamburger, cheese and mayonnaise) ___ (reincarnates in an X way, he will take revenge on bla bla bla bla, a system appears that comes out of nowhere or an explanation very stupid, etc etc etc.)
The story was decent at first. Then the quality of the grammar went downhill wayyyyy fast. The characters became stupider and even worse and the plot became redundant and cyclic within 40-50 chapters and the whole book is pretty much garbage by the time it hits chapter 100.
How should I say it
It's always the same pattern like first the MC got targeted, he defeat then ruthless plan from enemy then counter and defeat the whole clan.
I'm also confused about the MC we don't know much about him just a reincarnator but that's all !! Wtf it's been +100 chapter and it's only a the beginning that he talked about it then after there's nothing, such joke... .
I've also a problem with this stupid MC he can't even predict the plan of his enemy even though it's been 3 years he's in this world and he got bullied a lot bc of his trash skill at first no? But now right after he got his "Super amazing incredible system" he became arrogant and disdain other people even thought he really didn't do anything to get this power just grind and forge. Anyway back to the topic the protagonist doesn't learn much from his past experience and is still and always making bad decisions and don't make plan to prevent these accidents .
He doesn't even train his technique to be stronger, the Chara dev is too messed up from my opinion there's so many problems that I could write a book with it.
True title: Forging the path to the shit
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Even the brick from the strongest system novel has better craftsmanship than this sh*t!
How the f*ck do you melt leather? Why does he keep making swords? Why is there activation chance on magic skills/spells? Why am I getting angry?
Its bad, really bad. honestly cant think of one good point to this novel. its so fast passed that all and any relevant information is left out and ignored.
The MC is also an idiot, its nothing these people tried to kill me but i just let them go every time then eventually he will take care of them down the road because it just gets worse and worse until he finally might decide to kill them. And then repeat this over and over.
It seems like a middle schooler wrote this, then had an editor fix any mistakes and send it off.
to be honest, i dont really know how to review this novel. Seriously, most of the novel foes not make any sense. Any other character aside from the protagonist is braind dead, keep in mind that im not saying they are dumb, but they really do not have any sense at all, npcs in mmos have more personality than most characters in these novel. or sense tbh, their actions are totally retarded as in literally. the world building is ahitty for now. Even the system bonus does not make any sense as in blaze point gives the mc sharpness. The only good point i found on this novel is the system idea, as i like this life skill novels.
If u want to read this novel ....
it doesnt have any actuall plot.
poor character dev.
cringe + cliche storyline
overall it fell like , it was writed by 13y kids with anime complex
I bet that some work of a junior high school student is a lot better than this what ever you call this trash is
I mean the basic plotline is forging = lvl up = villan without a clear reason becoming enemies with the mc and then repeat that
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Literally read the first 20 chapters 4 times changing the enemy names, and you have the first 80. This is complete trash so far, would not recommend to anyone
the Concept of the story is good but shitty wroten... the development is repitive and forced. The Character designs are stagnant and lame to my ttaste n contrast to the story titel..
Martial God Asura is better than this trash.
Martial God Asura is better than this trash.
Martial God Asura is better than this trash.
Martial God Asura is better than this trash.
Nice there should be more blacksmith novels ooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Grammar is fine but when pov switches it is awkward. No world background information besides the mention two cities. No descriptions of characters. I don’t know what anyone looks like. I don’t know anything about the character’s personality, features, and past. All I know is that he was new to this world.
The story and MC development very bad, there is no clear information about cultivation and magic training or upgrading, the story should be about blacksmithing, but 2/3 of it about useless fighting and killing. All the time when he's blacksmithing someone will assassinate or make trouble for him.
At beginning with small materials the MC gained a lot of skills, but after 2nd level no skills and he's not even using 5% of them.
Realy not worth reading and the story till now free on qidian.
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