Reviews of Harry Potter(being rewritten visit new version.) by kandepi2 - Webnovel

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really liked where the storyline was going and the characters were really good. the plot was very good for a harem fanfition. this is a story that needs to be continued.

I could tell there was a fair bit of passion involved in the writing, but a story about a seven year old running around threatening people and fixing every problem with ease head on didn't match any reasoned expectation of plotting. It was almost campy in the way it fully embraced every fannon trope and cliche. Unfortunately, despite the obvious passion, the story is a sequence of insane temper tantrums. Much respect to the author, will give the rewrite a go.

I really like your story, I dont know of any "plot holes" that you mentioned, however I really was not dissecting your story looking for mistakes, just looking for a good Harry Potter story fanfic. so I really like your story so far keep up the good work. also please continue the story until completion I really hate uncompleted works, finish your project you started please. so many disappointing unfinished fanfic. so if you could make a long completed story that would be awesome, lol. Keep up the good work. remember haters are going to hate its everywhere and a fact of life.

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So Simon from Gurren Lagann is not a champion huh. Too bad, I want to see a robot battle that can destroy the universe and throw galaxies like shuriken.

while the the writing in the beginning of the story could be better I do like where the story is going very creative I don't see a lot of on this site

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the only thing I can say about this fic is the sudden jump of 5 years nothing else is all in good ten the story progresses well on the way greetings to the author

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Hello there kandepi2. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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Why does MC get sad/mad about his new parents death... they are complete strangers. MC is so full of angst its too cringe ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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support Author . . . good story . . . stable update . . . little OP, but this is fanfic, so far so good a bit NTR there . . . (is that Author dream ?) hope this story have good ending. God bless u all

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SHAMELESS PROMOTION! NAME: THE GRANDSON'S JOURNEY Who was responsible for dissapearing underwears of girl's hostel? Which thief has hundred names? Why does all dog howl at moon at midnight? Who rob the ATM near the police station? Why does old ladies faints when they see Johnny depp?Why does women underwear has red spot? TO KNOW THE ANSWERS, BE SURE TO CHECK MY NOVEL!!!

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I really like this fanfic and the mc although i find he is too young for certain things hehe. The writing could be better but it is ok. I hope the author doesn’t try to steal wifes for the mc harem. The novel is overall good especially the lewd parts hehe and i am enjoying the relationship with Nymphadora and the mc.

why not, stable update so far and good story. 🤨🤨😤😤👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

best story, better oriom mc, putting all pure blood to cry, insane rating, just 5 stars to the author