The idea here is pretty good. The MC's death is a nice way to grab attention right at the beginning.
Story looks like it will be interesting, and the release rate is much better than your average 1 or 2 per week.
If author has an editor follow along, this novel has a good chance of gaining traction ๐
Hmm, I must say you do have the ability to come up with awesome plots and settings! Reading through the chapters I could feel that you have a good sense of writing as well. The characters were well made and I hope he can get his revenge haha. Best of luck with the book! [img=recommend]
Man, you made a powerful mc who is supposed to be vengeful but he didnโt even avenge the death of his family... he could kill every one but he doesnโt... he isnโt dark he is a little coward...
Your mc is a pathetic beta Iโm sorry I canโt continue I understand you want character growth but your mc is a mamas boy and hides his power wich is annoying .
Quite the good read. The MC somewhat reminds me of the mc from a manhwa I once read, Demonic Master or something.
Expecting more badass scenes and faceslaps!
There are a few grammatical errors, but not enough to distract you from reading. Good work!
Love this story author ๐ everything is good with a great explaining skill ๐ everything is super good and exciting ๐ character design is also good ๐ looking forward to this story daduuu ๐๐
Hello all, this book will be updated almost daily with interesting twists.
There might be a few typos or some grammatical errors but i promise that ill rectify it as soon as pointed out.
Do stick till the end!
Ullyr