I am loving your story. I have found a few errors but they are mostly typos and havent affected the readability at all. I will start splitting my power stones saving some for you as well. keep going with this. I find it riviting.
gosh, I love this fic and can't wait for more. I think the chapter is a little short but not in a way that makes me irritated or mad as I just lose a tiny bit of interest or happiness Temporarily. like I said cant wait for more tho.
although grammar/typos are somewhat frequent they are not half as bad as many other novels on here, nor my own autocorrect fails, which are extremely frequent. That being said, improvement is always appreciated. The benefits of having an editor some day will be a relief to you I'm sure!
LadyMirfain