I like this new view on system story it's refreshing. The world background is also well develope with new type of monster. The only downside in my mind is that Walker could be a bit more egoist (his party gain a lot from him and his system), but that is just my preference. (I am french so if my grammar is bad i am sorry).
I've only read a few chapters, but I've read some system esque books before, and I can say this is going to be a great read. The Backstory is super helpful, and the greatest thing about it is that this is the first time I've seen anything like everyone having a system. I think it's a unique book, and I look forward to reading More!!💯💯
Love it. The characters in the story actually feel alive. This includes side characters and background characters. We can actually see the mc and his party learn and thrive every time they train/fight. The only minor complaint I'd have is the grammar sometimes but it isn't huge problem. Truly a hidden gem especially if you like stories w/ rpg elements.
i read like 13 chaps imma just review what i got from it so like the mc is a `naive guy it seems like and as you know everyone has a system if u don't like your mc spouting out all his abilities and skills then your not gonna like this one but hey maybe there's gonna be something that's gonna make him change i would prefer him getting beaten or almost dying from getting assassinated from jealousy of his system it would be good maybe he'll start hiding his system and make a fake system and go solo instead of a party not that i mind about joining a party but it would be complicated to hide his system unless he wants to only use that class' skill
Honestly this is one of my favorite novels on this site and top 5 all time novels. I just wish it didn't lock at chapter 40, I would love to continue reading but I cant really afford to buy chapters atm.
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i picked this gem up yesterday highly enjoyable his system seems way to op but it isnt really it does have its limit now they are loose but still🤣 but yea he also has to learn stuff on his own and develop it so it counter acts opness so to steak its good and i highly recommend
The story so far is a really good one. I've been reading a lot of dark and heavy fics lately so this story is like a breath of fresh air. I just wanna see the main character do his best and get stronger with his friends. It's a 10/10 book to me! ❤️❤️❤️
A very fun read. Fun enough that I can gloss over the fact that every time a word should be translated as now with the connotation of (present, right away, happening right now) it is translated as not with the meaning or connotation of (opposite, impossible, not happening right now).
This isn't confusing in this novel like it is in others because Not is never used correctly and now never comes up. Just read each Not as Now and it all makes sense.
Spell check was used, at least in the earlier chapters. But it didn't fix any incorrect word replacement errors. The smarter auto-correct gets, the more evil the incorrect words become when it fixes things to be wrong. This whole book needs edited by a human.
I'm stilk at chapter 7, but from what ive read this novel has great potential, if the author follows the line of thinking of the character that focus on expanding the horizon meeting new things exploring etc . A bit more of character dev would be nice
A true hidden gem. The novel starts out rough in writing quality, but it gets much better, and continually improves (hold out until about chap 50 if considering dropping). The story is fairly lighthearted, and simple, and most importantly it is fun. The imagination of tye author shines through with many of the system names, and it is a unique take on a concept that hasn't been explored by many that I have seen. Over time I have grown accustomed to MCs in books dealing with severe tragedies that affect their character, but this novel, once you get past the bad writing quality at the beginning is a breath of fresh air. I look forward to seeing this novel reach 500+ chapters, and hopefully author will edit starting chapters with their current writing prowess. Overall, it is not a heavily impactful or emotional novel thus far, but it is charming and in my opinion, very much worth a read. Keep up the good work author, and throw some challenges at MC that he will face alone, like trying to learn some creative monster skills like a flame body skill from a Phoenix or something.
One think that I always like to see, but rarely do, is a fun story told in first person perspective. And this is a fun story! Told in first person perspective. The MC is a likeabe person, it's very pleasant to spend time in his head. The RPG-inspired system and character stats are really effective at giving the story an appealing, quirky feel.
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