Reviews of Village Building Order Frenzy by Lazy Bird - Webnovel

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3.93

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Josephmemes
Story hasn't had time to develop, translation isn't good but it's not mtl like the others. Characters' appearances are mostly ignored outside of combat, the world is interestings there's plot being laid out. Though it plays into a lot of troupes if your looking for turn your brain off monkeyness this is legit very good. Just ignore the small details the author ignored and you'll have a fine time. I just can't in good faith want to read this, I like consistent characters, if someone fears death, better make it impactful if they are ready to sacrifice themselves. If a guy kills people for no reason, I'd expect him to not have morals. Maybe not insane but minimally a uncaring person. But then in most novels here, it's two dimensional characters that has a goal and morals that will never bend nor change. This probably will get good at 120 ish to being bad at mediocre.
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SSSaberz
Interesting storyline with great translation quality. Kept me reading on and on. Hope this novel gets picked! *Need to hit word count........................*
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anon88
This is a review of the first twenty-seven chapters. The story is based in a magical world where different civilizations are fighting for dominance. The main character, Zhang Yang, is bound to a village building order(a system) and has to build up a village that can last for 300 years along with other tasks inorder to return home. Many of the antigonists are also bound to a similar village building order. The plot feels like a story version of the game Civilization. The Protagonist’s character fluctuates between a laid-back acceptance and paranoia. Even with the author’s explanations, not all of Zhang Yang’s decisions make sense. Overall, the story is entertaining and doesn’t require you to understand how the “system “ functions to enjoy it.
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Daoist_Paradox
A narcissistic person like me would always try to find faults even in the best novel and grumble about insignificant things. However, this novel is really something, a real attention-seeker. This novel is one of the few ones which made me stay awake until 7 a.m. in the morning. Let me tell you! Going to sleep at 7 a.m. is not good! Webnovels usually lack the tension which classic novels have, despite the heavy bloodshed and horrifying monsters. But this novel fulfills that. Although we know that the Protagonist is obviously going to create his own village in the future, the Author doesn't simply let his creation grant that wish easily! The Protagonist is tested, again and again. The tension is high in the beginning, and you can't help but root for the Protagonist. The world around him is very ruthless, and antagonists are extremely scheming. A thing worth applauding is that although the tension in the plot is similar to classic novels, the flow of the story as well as wish-fulfillment factor does not deviate from the standard web novel pattern. Western web novels and their writers, for example, The Wandering Inn, does not provide this. Although the writing is good, it provides no wish-fulfillment. I hope this novel gets picked and we get to see what our Village Head does in the future!
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Spectra134
i could point out a bunch of thinks like how others said, there's bot really a proper description, or how I'm annoyed at like how the mc is being dumb (my own opinion) but still I still like it
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Weirdo
I have read this mtl one.. Its kind of nice kingdom building genre with the enemies coming at him. Not to say that it's bad, but once you pass a certain chapter(I had passed the certain chapter), it suddenly feel repetitive... But it still a good read, but not for me I guess..
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The book has a lot of potential at forty chapters. The main character has a decent head. The descriptions are good and so is the quality of writing.
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tjblinkz900
would really recommend this one to anyone should be very interesting and elaborate in the later chapters........................................
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Piratepete
I like this new book alot. Different take on village building. Author also keeps MC grounded in his growth. it's not just OP as hell system shenanigans
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stop_looking
I quite like it. Its a nice story and it can definitely be good as the story progresses. Its a good base building story and is has a very quick pace.
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JaegarMaxim
Build a village, survive, save humanity? If you like base-building, army growth and civilization-building novels then this is likely up your alley. I think this webnovel has promise, particularly it's world building element and the brutality of the environment, but it struggles with describing what is occurring. Simple errors such as incorrectly stating the number of enemies killed, or referring to critical system upgrade pathways for the village or buildings in passing in the next volume makes it feel like sections are missing at times. Catchy overall and will keep you reading but it needs a good editor.
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kinggaming
its got potential and it's alright it's has some small kinks other it's fine along with being apart of the small number of kingdom building novels which I wish there were more of
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Jazimo
I don't know why this novel has a low score evaluation. I very much enjoyed the first 14 chapters. The novel events are very intense and interesting from the get go! Please give it a try and don't hesitate to read it because of the low score. I hope this novel be selected for publication .
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iron_lost
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Iron_Baclao_3152
el trabajo es trabajo, lo sientoEstoy listo, hazlo rápido e indoloro ..el trabajo es trabajo, lo sientoel trabajo es trabajo, lo sientoel trabajo es trabajo, lo siento
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DontWant_SayIt
el trabajo es trabajo, lo siento¡BUENO! Mátame, pero no dañes a mi familia, están desorientados sobre lo que está pasando¡BUENO! Mátame, pero no dañes a mi familia, están desorientados sobre lo que está pasandoel trabajo es trabajo, lo sientoel trabajo es trabajo, lo siento
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Iron_Baclao
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Davros92
Mc starts with a magic brick. Comedy? MC summoning MOB soldiers. Monsters (Silver, flame, giant, lord ... Some animal or insect). The writing style is devouring the reader's patience and fast enough for the author. I do not doubt that he is abandoned in the hundreds of chapters because he has nowhere to go. Scenario? Florest. Maybe Viridian. Other Character? Why? The MOB is easy to decribe. They eat, fight and maybe, just maybe sleep. Like a trainee.
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SweetJette
I cant say im a fan. I found this book lackluster at best. The MC has this strange lack of concern for his lackies, and their characters are as flat and dead as paper. The lackies are also very willing to throw their lifes away by following the impulsive desisions and orders of the "village chief". I could understand it if these people are genuine NPCs with no thoughts of their own, but if so, i can only imagine the boring future of this novel. I will probably not continue this novel.
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14st16hn
The writing style of the author is impersonal. It doesn’t let me immerse myself in the world and it feels like I’m just reading a documentary. The author is also very insistent on shoving information at you over and over again. C+ soul, increasing difficulty, feels bad but I’m calm, 800 something people died before me... Yeah, yeah. As if you haven’t written that for 5 times already. It’s not worth reading and this goes to show how Webnovel is choosing books that are deteriorating in quality
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SMomoTempest
Hahaha... this novel is interestingly exciting!!! "Crying tears of....(left at your own imaginations) [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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DeadSaltedFish
Fun to read The MC is just an ordinary guy who suddenly got transported into the middle of nowhere. He does get scared but he's decisive. Understandable. Can't say much about the plot for now but his cheat is akin to having an RTS system in real life. He could recruit soldiers instantly and they even level up. Looking forward to the reaction of the natives once they interact with the village.
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TheNormalMan
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Once_Upon_A_Time
Awesome! Very good novel! No other words to describe, strongly recommend!
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Mythfury
This Novel is quite interesting. Mc goes to another world and build village, kingdom e.t.c which must be last 300 year. Story quite good.. MC have to face different enemy and race who wants to destroy the village or kingdom. but later story is because sometimes like repeat in middle. I strongly suggest you read this novel or Levi hates you. also give it a like for Levi.
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