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MSUN
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Madyan_wani
First your cover is really cliche. Your background is too amazing. The spiritless sounds good...It is my first time reading such novel. But it is perfect. The characters and their vengeance is really on spot. Highly recommended. Keep updating author
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mozza_mello
Aye this novel is really well-written! :D
First off, the writing is impeccable. I barely found any mistakes, if not at all! :D Punctuation use is also great, making for a smoooth read hehe! :D
I almost never read cultivation novels, but this book did a great job explaining the details so I could understand what was going on.
The characters are unique, and I love their interactions, especially the dynamic between Zhou and Ye hehe! That being said, I kinda hoped there would be more interaction between other characters, too, tho, but that's just a personal preference hehe!
Oh yea, I also love how the author described their past and their training so I could feel more sympathetic towards them, and love them more ehe!
Great work, author! <3
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TitanMaster
Really solid story overall. The way the mc is shown based on his backstory is really spot on and I admire the author's job of character development.
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the_tea_pan
Heres my heart 🖤 It belongs to you now so take it! This story is so beautiful already. You are very gifted. The flow is so smooth and the grammer is spot on. Ive not read a BL on this app yet so yours is goong to be my first!
Keep going this story Is definitely going to go somewhere fast 🎉
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sam_8896
I was really impressed with the first chapter, usually I kinda skip few words when I read a book and get the gist but I read every single word here! I'll look forward for more UwU
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TheUnknownEntity
I like it so far hope it will bloom soon nice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Bad_Totodile
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Croco likes disgusting color white change the intensity..
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blue_butterfly_14
I really enjoyed this one. Even it's only a few chapters it's a great Novel! hope u soon update. keep up with the good work! [img=recommend]
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Raashi_Saxena
Wow...The grammar used in the story is damn good. The scene narration was done so beautifully that I can close my eyes and imagine the story. Amazing job Author.
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Aby_jsbbs56
Great Novel! It is very detailed and I like where it is going. Just a few chapters but it is really good it's worth your time waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Xyenox_chip
Ok, the first thing is first to damn it is very detailed. And another good thing is that by the way, the story is going the author knows what direction he is heading in but then again he only has 3 chapters so he needs some time to flesh out everything. Good Luck man! Keep it up!
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Decree_Woods
The beginning really got me hooked. I love how your very descriptive about your world background, giving reader's insight and proper understanding of your book was a great addition ++
With only 3 Chapters you've captured my interest. I really like these kinds of troupe where an innocent boy slowly begins to change as he seeks vengeance for his family's death. Your writing style is really great and really descriptive giving me the impression that I was like watching the scenes play out inside my head. Long chapters is great addition++ Are you maintaining these kinds of chapters? If you are made sure to set certain days to update so you can rest as well. Waiting for more Chapters! Keep up the great Work Author!! [img=update][img=recommend]
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Nomed_Forcraziness
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Woah. ... the prologue ish great.
I want more. ..
please write more....
please. ... please.
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TacoKun
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.
I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...
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