Reviews of Hitman with a Badass System by don_offl - Webnovel

really enjoying the story so far. Hey author if you reading this can you please give me an email or something? I need to speak with you regarding some business matters. Thanks.

The Author can't count. I have the habit of writing down everything that happens in novels like creating my own personal wiki in my notes app. In that I always count the age. With 1 week as the smallest unit. Although I can be a bit unaccurate. But of the dozens of novels I have read. Only in this one there is a big discrepancy between the age of MC and the one given by author. Currently I am in chapter 220. But every time the age is mentioned it is always a few months ahead of my counter. Like I am pretty sure I am accurate. So the author doesn't seem to be actually keeping track of age. But is just guessing.

This book is quite enjoyable. Ghost says what he means and then sticks to his word.

I really cant understand why there is no relationship between the MC and the mother of his child? Is the Author perhaps a fan of broken families?

Really good. Hidden gem. Should be way more popular! In terms of constructive feedback, I think the pacing has been a little fast, but that is just my opinion (also probably because I binged it). It feels like the novel might be better if there were some chapters that just develop the characters (especially the Winstons). I think there were more of these earlier on, but from 700 onwards they have been sparse IMO.

really enjoyed reading this book till now.. nice work my dear author..thanks

Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be a ntr in the work (I hope not), is the fmc a yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?

I am a very picky reader. I hate MC's who are not ruthless enough with a hero complex . Such heroes most often tend to be idiots/ simps . Hence , this novel provided me with a refreshing take on the usually bland MC genre. The MC in this novel is ruthless to his enemies yet loving to his family members. He most often keeps a cool head and does not rush into fights that he know he can't win . He keeps his calm and then dishes out revenge in the most satisfying way possible. He is not a hypocrite and is not aversive to killing for achieving his objective. The writing quality is excellent without much grammatical errors. His power progression is well paced ( does not make you feel bored) . The only suggestion that I have is to include the other girl as his wife as well ( since she bears the child of the MC ) . Eventhough MC had no direct physical role in the conception of the child, he should take responsibility . Moreover the attitude of the girl seems to be good and seems to care for the well being of the MC. Also, I would like the author to explain the stages beyond celestial stage. It seems confusing. We don't have an idea regarding the power levels of his enemies beyond the immortal stage . It seems vague. Also a little bit of kingdom building will do good to the novel. Let the common people understand that the MC is not heartless as his enemies seem to project.

very nice.. compare to other books that keeps on dragging their story with non sense items..

the story was good at first but it lost its spark because it was only about killing the MC has no character development

really love it but the only problem is that the authour is dragging the story literally like alternate dimensions,universe and others except that it is really good 😊.

good novel with a great story development

this book is awesome.....one of the best books I have ever read....currently just in chapter 402 but this book just keeps getting better with every chapter. good job author

Good story, but the MC becomes kinda dumb after loving that gaya. MC doesn't have the resolve to do anything to achieve what he wants. The romance is author's real life fantasies that he is writing in the novel. The romance subplot kinda ruined the story. The mc doesn't have to train he can just fight anyone without any prior experience is kinda stupid.

Dear Author, please make this a happy ending. hiks... hiks... 😭😭

Great novel, please don't drop it ............................................................. ..............................,............................. ....... .. .....

This is most interesting novel i have read in a while hands down it has everything characters,action,hype,comedy, action,thirller, romance and every character is interesting and it gets even better with time

good novel but the author is introducing multiple universes which is kinda bad and dragging the story a lot except this reasons the novel is one of the best i have read so far☺

Very solid novel, the author actually put thought into the development of characters.

all i have to say is one of my favourites so far

the author has created a fantastic world. Character design and development is top tier. Read this book!!!

I don't really like how the Noah character is written, it's makes him and everyone following him look like Hypocrites.

Honestly, I enjoy reading the novel.But I see the shortcomings of the novel and it saddens me. Personally, I think the author reflects his personal feelings too much in the novel. The side characters are well-constructed but not well-explained.World building and character stories are well designed and thought out I can only say that not all characters reflect their full potential.Even the system that mc has sometimes does not provide accurate information, for example, the total score is always in whole numbers and details are skipped.In my opinion, the author has a good imagination, but he cannot write this wonderful fiction and the world well because he has no experience.Although I enjoy reading the novel in general, I don't mind its shortcomings. Normally I think it would be better to give this novel 3 or 4 stars, but I give it 5 stars because I believe the author could do better.My only regret is that the author did not write this novel as a more experienced and advanced writer.Some people say that mc is unnecessarily overstressed and exaggerated, I agree with them.

great novel, at first I didn't like it because of the grammer issues and how chaotic the whole start was but I came back and gave it another chance, which to say the least, I wasn't disappointed, although the pacing is still fast from time to time. The core and essence of the story is nice and you know how to keep reader's attention while setting up future plot points well. The only thing I can sincerely advice you on after 300+ chaps of reading is pretense. Its just you switch pretenses a quite often, You seem to be good at writing past tense and I sincerely hope you stick with it as it makes your story flow better.

Pretty good novel, but it gradually gets more complicated and messy, then it gets even more messy as it tries to resolve some of the mess/plot holes/complaints. The author definitely puts a lot of thought and effort into the novel and looks at comments and feedback, but tries to do too much and eventually got lost in all of the stuff they were trying to juggle at once. Maybe I'm being too quick to drop it, but I skimmed some chapters to try and get past this filler/mess to get back to the good story, but it never did. Dropped on ch 279

author I want Noah crippled and u are making mc the bad guy here author

The level of hypocrisy and incompetence by the side characters is what ruins this for me it’s almost like the characters are preprogrammed robots