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good story for some, but a big no for me, there is no logic, a boy asleep for 9 years knows a lot of information, dad don't question his abilities, personally I don't recommend this book, when I read the synopsis it give me a high hopes for a good novel, pure torture reading 26 chapters.
First: Good story, it is certainly interesting, and really great. Second: THE MAIN POINT - FIX YOUR GRAMMER PLEASE!!! Seriously, this book is amazing, and its story is currently rivaled by your terrible grammar in the first few chapters that I have read so far. I look forward to reading more, but please it is as though I am reading a puzzle in many points and cannot figure out what is going on.
Temporary 5 while I give it a read, the bio and author comment gives me alot of hope though!! .........................
This story seems really god the man character is interesting (although did you mean for him to seem so sociopathic in the early chapters? I mean he says hes okay with being an npc because he was getting bored) but more than that, please god run the early chapters through grammerly or a read-to-text or something cause this story is great but my god i actually can’t understand what you mean in some of the paragraphs without like 10 careful rereads
The premise and novel systems are really eye-catching. This really seems like it has potential to break the mold. But for the love of my life, the grammar and the abstract wording used here are life-draining. Author, please edit your chapters from the beginning or pay someone to do so. You can hire mw if you want. The only good thing I can say about the writing is that it is at most understandable. Too bad, the plot is nice.
Maybe include spoiler !!!! Not recomend for ******** action-game like readers. No OP MC. The first chatpers are storybuilding arc thats why its lack action scenes. Differrent profession between NPC and Players is quite interesting idea (will take long chapters to explain all system anyways).
i was curious about this book at first, but my curiousity died quickly because of the extremely poor grammer. the spelling is fine. but the sentence structure is awful. please get an editor to help you streamline a sentence, so that is isnt so cluncky.
Applause! An inspired author with great imagination! Simple, straight forward and creative. If I may, here is just a suggestion, more dialogues to keep the story more interesting! :)
Full marks for the effort. The first chapter was detailed and imaginative and transported me to Tolkien's world of dragons and secret treasures!! A recommended read!
➽ This is the first book that I am reading! This is a great book! The story is interesting and he gives deep information on characterization. Makes better for imagination.
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What collection? Obviously add it to your library fool.
This author has good imagination! :D Story is interesting! Recommended to read. I will continue to support this book! Cheerio! Have a nice day!
Great story I really suggest you give it a read. at least the first chapter. pretty please 🥺👉👈 if you can also drop a nice review that would be great 🙂
Interesting Story Concept and detailed explanations....Loved the description of the Big Bang Evolution along with Adam and Eve with a twist. The main character is strong, conflicted and can't wait to find out what happens next.
The story is interesting! A 5 stars rating for all from me for all your efforts! Thank you for continuously improving it! I hope to read more of it! Cheers!
Overall it's a good one! Your narrative style is unique which makes the story more great! And pardon me for giving the review late haha, anyway, you are doing a great job! keep it up! support u author! !👏[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Overall, I'd say that this is an Awesome book. The story was detailed and very light to read. The wordcounts are also huge and satisfying for every readers. Keep up the good work Author-san👌
Interesting Idea I look forward to more content so I can give a more in depth review. Thanks to the author for sharing your story!!!!!!!!!!!
Author here Pinning the review/message for people to be aware of the existence of discord server available to ask questions, give suggestions, or have fun and enjoy some of the art of the book that is prepared. https://discord.gg/5aPjRYx5hK Have the Map of Enerias (the world of the game) btw xD
good story for some, but a big no for me, there is no logic, a boy asleep for 9 years knows a lot of information, dad don't question his abilities, personally I don't recommend this book, when I read the synopsis it give me a high hopes for a good novel, pure torture reading 26 chapters.
First: Good story, it is certainly interesting, and really great. Second: THE MAIN POINT - FIX YOUR GRAMMER PLEASE!!! Seriously, this book is amazing, and its story is currently rivaled by your terrible grammar in the first few chapters that I have read so far. I look forward to reading more, but please it is as though I am reading a puzzle in many points and cannot figure out what is going on.
Temporary 5 while I give it a read, the bio and author comment gives me alot of hope though!! .........................
This story seems really god the man character is interesting (although did you mean for him to seem so sociopathic in the early chapters? I mean he says hes okay with being an npc because he was getting bored) but more than that, please god run the early chapters through grammerly or a read-to-text or something cause this story is great but my god i actually can’t understand what you mean in some of the paragraphs without like 10 careful rereads
The premise and novel systems are really eye-catching. This really seems like it has potential to break the mold. But for the love of my life, the grammar and the abstract wording used here are life-draining. Author, please edit your chapters from the beginning or pay someone to do so. You can hire mw if you want. The only good thing I can say about the writing is that it is at most understandable. Too bad, the plot is nice.
Maybe include spoiler !!!! Not recomend for ******** action-game like readers. No OP MC. The first chatpers are storybuilding arc thats why its lack action scenes. Differrent profession between NPC and Players is quite interesting idea (will take long chapters to explain all system anyways).
i was curious about this book at first, but my curiousity died quickly because of the extremely poor grammer. the spelling is fine. but the sentence structure is awful. please get an editor to help you streamline a sentence, so that is isnt so cluncky.
Applause! An inspired author with great imagination! Simple, straight forward and creative. If I may, here is just a suggestion, more dialogues to keep the story more interesting! :)
Full marks for the effort. The first chapter was detailed and imaginative and transported me to Tolkien's world of dragons and secret treasures!! A recommended read!
➽ This is the first book that I am reading! This is a great book! The story is interesting and he gives deep information on characterization. Makes better for imagination.
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What collection? Obviously add it to your library fool.
This author has good imagination! :D Story is interesting! Recommended to read. I will continue to support this book! Cheerio! Have a nice day!
Great story I really suggest you give it a read. at least the first chapter. pretty please 🥺👉👈 if you can also drop a nice review that would be great 🙂
Interesting Story Concept and detailed explanations....Loved the description of the Big Bang Evolution along with Adam and Eve with a twist. The main character is strong, conflicted and can't wait to find out what happens next.
The story is interesting! A 5 stars rating for all from me for all your efforts! Thank you for continuously improving it! I hope to read more of it! Cheers!
Overall it's a good one! Your narrative style is unique which makes the story more great! And pardon me for giving the review late haha, anyway, you are doing a great job! keep it up! support u author! !👏[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Overall, I'd say that this is an Awesome book. The story was detailed and very light to read. The wordcounts are also huge and satisfying for every readers. Keep up the good work Author-san👌
Interesting Idea I look forward to more content so I can give a more in depth review. Thanks to the author for sharing your story!!!!!!!!!!!
Author here Pinning the review/message for people to be aware of the existence of discord server available to ask questions, give suggestions, or have fun and enjoy some of the art of the book that is prepared. https://discord.gg/5aPjRYx5hK Have the Map of Enerias (the world of the game) btw xD