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DonDenis
Hi guys, sorry for the BIG delay in updating chapters, my device got stolen and I'm just managing in school, will continue updating once things get sorted. Peace!!
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shazueca
Love the concept of the novel. The first few chapters really keep you intrigued the whole time, especially the first chapter. Really well written!
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DarkseidEquation
The premise of the plot really intrigues me and the description of it really encapsulates what you're trying to portray and the pacing could be a problem but to me it's fine.
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Ana_musings
The story has an interesting twist to get the reader hooked in the initial chapters itself. The mystery and foreshadowing adds spice. Only, a few grammar checks and the story is good to go.
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Dara_Manuel
The plot is sure interesting, the writing style is detailed, you managed to let the reader's curiosity hang in the air with the mystery. The description of the incident, was 10/10, was really heartbroken. Only a few grammar errors but can be easily fixed.
The plot is a gem, so keep improving and it will surely be better than what it already is.
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LaDiDah
I am a fan of the slow build. It kind of grabs your attention, because it slowly reveals the plot. Gives off a “Happy Death Day” vibe that I really like, and the first chapter does all the cool foreshadowing.
I like it. It is different and attention-grabbing, and the MC makes just enough stupid decisions to create the necessary tension.
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Akia200
The first chapter reminded me of all the great moments l had as a kid at my grandparents house and all thr folklores they told me. And that's one of the reasons why l like this book. It produces feelings of warmth and family. Top tier content. I am not one who usually likes reading stories from third person perspective but the say you write captivates the readers attention. And the flow(smooth) , there aren't jumps in the time line, do thank you for that. Keep up the good work
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Luna_1101
The flow at the first chapter is good. The characters are likeable. I won't point out the minor grammatical errors since it is unnecessary. I wish this book a good luck! Cool book cover by the way.
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Aeipathy_02
First things first, I love how the characters were portrayed well. Reading Yvonne's emotions when after the bombing
scene happened makes me tremble in that tragedy.
I would look forward for more chapters.
Great work author!
I will now continue reading where I was left off in this😉
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Mystic_Dragon_
Oh , I love the story until now . I love the mystery that the author maintains!
Good work here . All the best .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Pinkyprincess
Good start. First chapter itself was too good! I was hooked! and that stir was also very interesting. It was as if I was present at the scene and listening to that story. Anyway, your story is going good. Keep updating!
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Madyan_wani
wow...amazing buddy...What a plot ! I myself love mystery and adventure. The scenario and characters set up are really great. Highly Recommended. Keep updating.
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Faysal_Ahmed_5058
Top notch writing and good quality story so far. The story pacing is nice and gradually dives into the story. The bombing is a good hook too. Well done author.
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Kohler_
This book really has great promise with its unusual plot, and the way the author maneuvers the plot to brilliance, and it already feels like there's more than time travel in the story with the sly hints left behind at different stages in the story. Really fascinated with the story so far and would like to see where it leads. Good job author.
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_AiRen_
Wow this Book is nicely done 👍
with great approach to the concept and plotline, the characters have it's own personality! So and so the novel does have potential.Good going author san
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Easy_Tiger
Top quality story here. Got a real sense of Groundhog Day. Always an interesting concept. The mystery surrounding the bombing is also an excellent hook for for the reader. I look forward to reading this as a complete work. Great stuff so far, and I really see it building up to something spectacular.
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mozza_mello
Really interesting concept! Also I love the peaceful beginning, and the suspenseful setting that comes after hehe.
The author did a great job in painting the atmosphere as well and I love how the author portrayed the character's interaction too, looking forward for more, author! <3
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author_aruel
Who's got a time loop when you need one? I know! This story right here! I am still to read all of it - so I added to my library but so far - oh boy! The character construction is done carefully and it is not over the top. By the 3rd chapter, you are already emotionally invested and truly happy for the time loop. Some English vocabulary polishing is needed here and there - but this author has a good sense of his story and I feel he invested time into developing it - he certainly manages to get the user immersed.
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phoenixhyperion
Well, the concept is kinda new to me. I'm intrigued, man. Here's wishing to read for more!
But if it's possible, space some paragraphs eh? Sorry for my defective eyes, it can't read many small letters cramp in one paragraph.
But it's good. The concept got me hook. Looking forward to how it will come out. Great job author!
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Mel_Aniv
The story was nice and smooth to read. Its story was captivating and heart racking that made me focus on what is happening. The only problem I can point out was to make your narration to become paragraphs. That way, it will not be cut halfway. You can check the first chapter yourself and see that it was forcefully cut. But all in all, It was a heartwarming story. Endearing and splendid.
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Gaureeey
Hey! I love the story so far, its really heartwarming right from its prologue, PRO TIP- DESIGN A NEW COVER! it'll help reach out to readers, truly underrated, ill be taking notes because the writing is brutally nice
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Write_D_Words
So far as I read your story and by chapters. The flow is looking well , less technical issues. And maybe as the other chapters has been release then I will understand more. Good Job!
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Dedz_
The writing quality is excellent though, some paragraphs are long but it's a matter of preference so, no problem with it.
The start of the story is quiet enjoyable. Though, I sometimes read romance but I'm looking forward to future arcs.
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THEGUYFROMVILLAGE
Nice story with a good flow going in the story progress. I wish the author will continue his writing regularly. Loved the characters. Different but not boring.
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DonDenis
Hello, author here, not for selfish reviewing tho😅, just wanted to ask that you please support the work with your valuable comments and votes. Thank you very much 😁
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Pam03
Good story so far, and the pacing and build up of the story has been nice. Hope the author continues to flesh the story out properly. Nice work.
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