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BigNovelBigDream
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Contractor_101
this story is awesome
Author olz tell me you have not dropped this story or some shit like that or else i might fall in despair
i really like this novel and its been a rather long time since an upload
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Theoz
Don't stop ignore the haters that try to discourage you are doing so well this is so good please continue. they are not worth your time.i the power and glitch is so good.
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youthfulLoki
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UnluckyDuck
Big fan of salt here. i love the books, pls don't stop.
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Aisumnetes
Ok i accident made an E, but good story love the idea, the cover, the writing, I just reallly like the novel. Only bad part is that Im scared he may drop it. Also love Jake's background
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ReclusiveR
Found this a bIt too late, author already demoralized :(. hopefully author comes back. I got really absorbed into reading it, I really liked it. Plz Come back author i want to see how the mc grows.
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one_punch_op
this novel is wonderful please don't stop.XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
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Roktah
im split on this novel. the idea is good, the grammar is good, it is original well as original as system novel get but the execution not so much.
the amount of chapters i skipped was a lot, 20-30 and the issue is that i could just seamlessly jump back in and i missed nothing.
that is a major issue. it means the pacing of your story is crap and/or you are too descriptive on useless content. i wouldnt know i havent read it.
this story feels like you read to the first taunt quest(ch15ish which can count as the prologue) and then jump to chapter 45 for the story to start.
you need to make sure not to waste too many chapters on one event, you wasted way too many chapters on that especially when the main character isnt even doing anything,
the mc itself is fine.
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AshuraMikoto
okay so the story flows decently i guess but the mc lets people provoke him without trying to defend himself or telling them to shut up he doesnt show off his power to people at all and stuff anyone that doesnt like such stories like me leave before you feel youre brain dying
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Rayama
I heard you get demotivated by toxic remarks?! So I'm here to motivate you to keep on writing. Heres my beutifull stars that will hug you in your beutifull dreams!
Remember no harem. Peace out...
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Book_Eater
This is one of those stories that brings me joy and when my mental energy(aka spoons) are low. As an Autistic Person it is very Stimmy to me. The main plot device of the system is novel and inspiring. It gives me ideas for my 'Grand Unified Theory of Bargain Basement Powers to OP Cheat Powers Scale'.
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Bell_Chan
yeah Good cover there bruhhhhππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Ultimox
It's a fun read, is not taking itself to serious but isn't to comical. Mc is not annoyingly dumb or anything so that's a big plus. I like the setup of the whole world as well is quite interesting.
The progressionspeed also feels nice and makes sense since no one would be just jumping into fights day 1 just to die. The reason the mc progresses is also sensable.
Concluding: the author may not be shakesspear when it comes to writing skills but he's also not an illiterate kindergartener like so many others. Until now there are may not be many things that make this novel standout from others, but due to its consistent quality and senseable story progression its a good read.
Currently my favorite novel, I hope the author comesback to realise that we all enjoy the book.
Also offering free cheer up service. If people rant just hit me up I'll compliment u and insult em online
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WooJiMin
A Hidden Gem for me
The plot is really interesting and it is not the same type of novel wherein the mc just flaunts his power and also just becomes immediately op well he is op but he is low key af and I really like it compared to the generic shit that is post and written all the time.
THIS NOVEL IS WORTH A READ
AUTHOR PLEASE DON'T DROP THE NOVEL
FCK THE RANTERS STUPID AF READERS WHO ONLY READ GENERIC SHIT
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PettyOfficer
Overall 3.3
The title, synopsis, system and cover are pretty much all lies. I donβt see clicking to level up or get points. The system is the default except it can level up with points. MC doesnβt use the system much to jam in background and characters. It is not easygoing, etc to read. Itβs dry expository, like reading a diary of someoneβs life.
Writing 3.5
Rounded up to 4. Seriously though, why with the sentence fragments, especially when describing the uncle?
Updating 5
It says 18/week. Quality beats quantity. Slow down and read over your writing. If you feel nothing, or it doesnβt have any moments that stick out, you need to fix that.
Story 1
When there is a system, especially when hyped up this much, readers expect it to lead the MCβs decisions. Since the premise is flawed and the system is both shafted and underwhelming, you get nothing.
Characters 3.5
Rounded up to 4. MC is shown to be mature but puts his golden finger second to his ongoing day, as if anyone getting a second chance wouldnβt try exploiting or even exploring their system in the spare moments they have. Too many people looking down on MC for my taste. There arenβt enough normal people to interact with, and MC is lowkey despite his previous ambitions of grandeur.
Background 3.5
Rounded up to 4. Moments get slowed down because passages must be dedicated to descriptions. The pacing can be improved if descriptions are more dynamic and concurrent instead of the static and stale showcasing there is now.
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Yasha200215
no locked chapters? you get my vote![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Yatz_13
If you've read 'spare me great lord' and liked it, you'll like this one. Although the start is a bit choppy and might confuse once MC begins the face slapping the story becomes interesting.
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Omprakash_Didel
i am loving your story and so far i liked how plot develops but at some places i think you can do better like he can let his relative know about his about his talent so they don't have to worry.
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maiibandar
broooo the storyline seems really cool and interesting but the writing style just doesn't work out for me at least. Plus about proving to Sam's fam he could have just shown the contract and surely even he could have understood that flauting his position in the guild could improve Sam and Chad's standing plus the ""how magical"" and "how troublesome" bit would have been funny if used less. Rn they just came off as irritating
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Exsive
The MC is powerful so why is he not showing it off to his relatives even when is underestimated all the time .................................................
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JimmyBlah
Letβs give it a test run and then Iβll come back to update this βπΌ
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VillagerNPC
Good story but doesn't make you go wow. Pretty good for passing time when bored. Added this to library. Will come back when more chapters................................
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mehdi123
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CodeW
Okay, in your synopsis, you did say that it was a light read.
I find your writing style in this Webnovel to be humorous. It got a few light chuckles from me.
The system is well built, I will give you that. I liked the character dynamics between Samantha and Jake.
By the way, KONO DIO DA!!!
-CodeW
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Darkjokes
Great cover, first of all, love it. The novel is a pretty fun read as well. System novels are rarely well done but this ones really interesting. Fantastic work on grammar as well. Hope to see more of it in the future :)
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WriterRoll
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SimmeringHours
The story is pretty good so far. I like the quality and detailed background and all, just MC needs to show off power more, though I get why he's not, reasonable motives. Maybe less buildup, more climax scenes. Or just write more, don't leave us waiting. Keep it up!
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