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Loniyo
I find this novel fun to read and entertaining too! Currently read 100 chapters.
Good points are the world building which is amazing, the skills and cultivation itself and the position beasts occupy in the world too without being just tiered walking resources.
I would criticize the main character though as being too much of an idealist even after all his shtty past, which is kind of weird. He cares too much about world peace and living conditions of people he doesn't know nor should he care about. Imo it would be better if he were just cold and consider only his self gain and the safety of the people arround him.
There are some minor spelling mistakes but not too relevant here and there.
To sum it up, it is a great novel so if you like the genre you definitely should give it a try!
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Agoraphobic_God
I've never wrote a review before but this one definitely deserves it. I have read 300+ chapters and just want to say what an absolute BANGER of a story. I was skeptical about it at first, and I didn't really like the info dumps that would happen constantly in the beginning. I took me a while to warm up to the story because of this. And I thought I was just going to drop the story because of how much I just didn't like the beginning.
BOY, WAS I WRONG!!
I can't get enough of this story. Seriously, if you are debating reading it, you need to. The writing grows so much from the beginning. The characters aren't just background but have actual personalities, which I find very rare nowadays with stories like these. There are a few arcs in here that I read in every story I find like this. Which is another reason I tend to drop these kinds of stories. But the writer does them so RIGHT I don't even care. Everything is so unique and out of the box. It's a nice breath of fresh air, this story.
I know this is a long review, but I just feel like this is a hidden gem on the app. I went ahead and started reading the other stories from this author and let's just say I found a new favorite.
I've wasted precious hours reading this, and of course a bit of brain mass
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Da_TuTuR
Tl;dr : overall i like it.
The beginning is good but too long.
Some part in the middle are not well done and boring but other part are near perfect.
The universe is well built but some part are inconsistant or missing imo (partly for futur project ?), the end is completly rushed.
The author is really good for writing some "sad part" of his story but more "epic situation" are needed.
Teasing for futur event is too much (like "this decision may change the rest of all living being") and i think the author forgot some.
Author need to better think on the balance of the story, and write the storyboard at the beginning.
(Spoiler : "adopted baby", Ark with the monarch "ok good luck, we leave, bb", the end complelty rushed. You can't do that man)
BUT for a first novel it's a really good start with lot of thing to improve.
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Olugbode_Ayotunde
its's one of the mind blowing novel I've read in a while.......... Really stimulating
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MookaLayla
Love the book but I hope there is more to his story. There are other books by this author so hopefully I see more. The author is a great writer and if it is what I think there should be more books about this universe but I hope there is more to Jason’s story that we get to read.
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Dalvatore
Good book! Really got me feeling so much for the MC, due to how invested I was. Would recommend.
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Jessica_Huffman
I loved this novel it’s wonderful I’m just stuggling to find other works with the soulbound world setting other recom mendations are welcome
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Ezioluna
One of the first Non-System stories I’ve actually enjoyed very unique wish it was still going but all good things must come to an end 😭
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alperen_baylan
I can't believe this is the first novel the author has written. Its the best novel I read till now.
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Lustifer_TheGM
after coming to the end of the novel the only thing that I wanted to know was whatever happen to Jason's adopted daughter Ann after he left, hopefully your planning to create a side story for her especially since all of your main characters seem to be male roles, it'll be interesting to see how you create a story based on a female character.
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Ryan_Schafer
Overall this was a great novel, my only gripe is that after chapter 1000 you can tell that they knew the end was near for this novel and it seemed that it became more of an after thought vs the rest of the novels in the universe that they're writing.
I will absolutely recommend this novel though even with my minor issue.
Read it and enjoy!
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j_why_sty
An enjoyable read.
It is clear as the book progresses that the author has a lot of good ideas but sometimes struggles to shape those ideas.
It was thoroughly enjoyable.
I would recommend reading this and will certainly look up his other works.
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DaoisteL5pOE
Man this novel is slow asf, I'm recently started the chapters, currently at chap 30 but i already felt bored.........................................
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Mustafa_Ferhat
yes I am going to be late to the charger for your phone call me when you get a chance please let me know what you think
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rukuto
Currently at Ch 395.
It starts interesting, and we can see that the MC is overpowered, but it is constantly reinforced that it is also due to hard work. His achievements could also be replicated by others if they were as hardworking as him.
But then it all falls downhill once the world building and concept of humanity is brought in.
If anyone has read Martial World, this also gives a similar feeling. The sort of depressing feeling that humanity has just no hope. This is a similar story. There is no hope for the society as a whole.
Spoiler: What humans treasure as Blessed Techniques are the basic techniques widespread by the foreign races. What humans think to be the foreign races experts are actually 3rd rate characters like butlers and servants.
The author, despite all this, has the leisure to play around with slavery and the evilness of humans. There is no positivity in this novel. It is just plain depressing.
Also, the MC is cold towards his Masters, whom he trusts, but is kind to strangers (who are likely to become enemies with him). There is also the sudden shift in mood changes of the MC and the tone of the story when talking about his soulbonds.
There are some spelling and grammar mistakes. The author has tried to put in so much and so many enemies that the situation is no longer a David and Goliath but more like Sheep and Goliath.
Also, now that the story is finished at 1115 chapters and the progress of his cultivation at 395, he has not even crossed through the first major step and there should be at least 5 of them .So I wonder how rushed it will be later.
Major Spoilers: To give an idea of how far the story has progressed:
From lowest to highest: 1. C-Grade City. 2. Capital City of Island Controlled by a Clan. 3, Mainland (which is also a side island compared to the world - think Hawaii) 4. Humanity (Multiple Clans) 5. Mainland on Planet 6. Planet is infant of lower worlds 7. Other lower worlds 8. Middle or Higher Worlds 9. Universe
At 395, he is only crossed through the second and is still not reached 3rd. And there is a war looming with foreign races (which is laughable).
So, now you know what to expect.
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Kayle_Mighty
Honestly, it's quite decent, and I love the authors attention to detail. Great idea, great execution. Top notch world building, top notch story telling. It has cliche plot devices, but the author used them properly at the earlier part of the novel. However, at chapter 300(after the mc left Astrix) the author started throwing cliches around like crazy. I kinda lost interest here. Will try to keep going and see, as this is actually a decent novel
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BoazBaaz
The story started oke, I loved the character development and the overall progression. Some great side characters. However I feel like in the last 100-150 chapter everything was rushed. Side character became accessory's, and the focus of the story shifter A LOT. I feel like the author just wanted to stop writing about Jason under the pretexted that all the story's are connected.
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Alec_Sutherland
Really great read looking forward to the other books, I just felt it ended a little sudden or randomi guess but overall great read guys!!!
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