Chapter comments on the chapter A Gift? of the book Alchemist Chat Group

This chapter was A LOT BETTER than the previous chapter 6. The previous chapter gave me a depressing vibe like I just read something depressing, watched NTR, or something like that. This chapter was much better, left me cheerful and now I won't be able to sleep until the next chapter. Than repeat... Chat group novels in my opinion are supposed to make your mood better and jump worlds all the time. A chat group without world jumping is like cookies without chocolate chips and sugar. It's not that fun. The story, in my opinion, should be about world-hopping and having fun with the group chat and once he comes back from the world they hopped his homeworld is a base to relax and maybe a slice of life. Maybe make the MC not become a ninja. :o (This is naruto, so I wonder how that would work)

I read a fic where a MC had a barter fruit. Where he can sell anything that isn't owned by others by mere touch. Where he'll get energy in return that can transfer any object of equal value to him or store the objects he has touched. Like a legendary named weapon that is already owned by someone can't be 'bought' until it is ownerless. A few interesting mechanics is that he can trade/trick others for their possessions. Also when touching an object, he can estimate how much it is worth based off its energy value. However, that devil fruit was a pair of cherries. Honestly this could be a great fruit to use if you want some interesting character interactions while keeping the MC relatively powerful in certain situations.

Okay, this is absolutely not White Beard. I understand that not every author can reproduce the character well in a fanfic, but everything has its limits. This servile guy is absolutely not the White beard.

i know you edit the chap, but i think there's missing thing between chapter 5 and 6. i mean in the last chapter 5 he call kurenai because she stare at him, but in the beginning of chapter 6 he suddenly arrive in his home. Something missing.

I actually liked the previous version -_-

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Thanks for the fabulous chapter! Glad you re-wrote it! Continue the fascinating work as always!

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

..i'm woried about all this Leader shit...tell them you are weak now but will get stonger it is no shame cause everyone at some point was weak...that scientist is like him...and why is he acting like he doesn't know their worlds???

Thanks for the chapter

hope it's an animal type. It's so cool I get elemental powers in all but you can get stuff like it in other worlds. but the animal one has so many uses like a dragon or a wolf those both would even fit into naruto

It will be great if his fruit give him growth, adoptability and energy abilities. Which will allow him to learn chakra and other kinds of power from other world.

There was one in which mc had an Overlord fruit he could eat 9 devil fruits in total so 8 more and not be affected by seawater,and seastone another one had record record fruit

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Moar