The MC, despite being OP, doesn't like conflicts, and will only show his power once in awhile.' Also mc apparently being a 'great demon satan' who almost conquered the world; Ente Isla. Wtf???
To start off the review,
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I would like to say,
I criticize the author sometimes in the comments, it's mostly bias from myself. But, one should know, you cannot expect to have everything in a single work.
And even when I say that, It doesn't make this work any less amazing.
When you read the story, you will find some details you will not like, or it wasn't how you assumed it to be.
For an example, there were some of us against the harem, and we voiced it, but the author has his own plan. And we respect that, as he calmed us down with his own explanations.
So, if you don't have patience to read the A/N, then you will have trouble with the story.
As for author and story evaluation:
1.Wrtiting Quality: Like I said writing quality, decent, good grammar, no repetition and details are well-kept, up to the end of volume 1.
2. Updates: The updates are quite fast. But, I do know, it might just be because, the author had more free time, and he too insisted he will do his best to update daily, but life and school catches up, so keep that in mind.
And my deepest respect to you author, updating so frequently while writing on a phone. Wheew! I know I can't do that.
3. S. Developement: Story developement is subjective! Not everyone likes all the details that the author thought up. You might like one thing from the meshups while abhore the other. But the mix of the elements have been good so far and I assure you the quality.
4. Character Design. For this I have some criticism. Author did create an OC who was reincarnated as Maou from Hataraku, But author has used the excuse of him being Maou and having his personality over his own. And there are some dissatisfaction about this in the comments, where I my self have thrown some jabs xDD, but he tried to explain his PoV and I can respect that. But hope you decide soon if it's the OC's personality or Maou's personality which is dominant. Other than that the OC at the start felt quite nice for a Demon king but at the end of the Volume 1 it was kinda irritating as his whole personality seemed to shift. A person who didn't bat an eye to sever a whole continent wud let some cat chick off when it tried to kidnap his daughter sheeh. Greater Good dumbledork shit.
5. The world is a meshup of different animes, where the main setting is in the world of Yuuragi sou.
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For a finishing peech, Like I said the story is quite good. You will not find everything going your way. The story belongs the author after all. And if he isn't having fun writing then, it will reflect on when we read. So hope everyone gives this one a read and support the author best you can.
Bless you all
Whoever read this far.
It's a really good slice of life story with a bit of action. I really liked it, it is a nice change after reading countless MCs with the "See God, slay God, see devil, slay devil" or the "Anh? You dare touch even a single microbe of my loved one? I'll make you die a horrible death! 'proceeds to kill a few hundred unrelated people' " or " You have antagonized me, even if there's a bigger picture to why you do so, I'll still kill you and deal with the consequences later" kind of of mentality.
I exaggerated a bit of the examples but you get what I mean. The MC of the fic though loves peace and silence, he is not one to take a beating without doing anything back or not act if something happens to his closed ones just cause he doesn't want conflict. He is calculative, sees the bigger picture and knows when to back out if needed. He is also OP so that's a plus.
Overall, the fic is a good read and I recommend you to try it. Just don't expect MC to be killing left and right cause of the smallest reasons. This is a slice of life fic after all.
I'm gonna rant a little bit down here but what baffles me the most is why a lot of people felt disappointed with the conclusion of the fight with the cat lady or the whole fic in fact. The reason and explanation is there in the chapter why it ended the way it ended and this is a fuckin slice of life for **** sake. If this is a wuxia novel then I get why it would be disappointing but come on, it is already written in the synopsis what kind of novel this is going to be. *sigh* I'm guessing people don't get what the meaning of 'slice of life' really is.
Anyway author, take criticism with a pinch of salt, change if you feels they are correct, if not continue the way you are. Don't just focus on the negative and continue just being you. This is your story after all.
Me gusto mucho tu historia ,algun dia la seguiras , estaba intrigado por el rumbo que ibas a llevar.......................................................................................................................................................................................................
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still waiting for the sequel...............................(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)(`・ω・´)
When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue? When will this continue?
I just finished the 2nd volume of this fanfic or so you called. Honestly, I only watch the anime of Hataraku so I'll be putting the review here now cause' I will be a stranger in the next chapter I read, even tho I read many spoilers in some chapters.
It's pretty much of an 5 star if there is more of the action than slice of life. it's pretty much interesting and plot is super duper ultra addictive!
Really enjoyed it! Thanks for the fanfic!
Es increíblemente espectacular
Realmente me gustaría que cualquiera que pase por aquí, lo lea
Parece quizás un poco largo, pero se te hace super corto,desgraciadamente
Me encantaría que le dieras una oportunidad
Se lo merece absolutamente
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the story is nice and all but I doubt it's going to be picking back up any time soon, the author just stopped updating for too long, otherwise the story is nice.
it seem to many people dissatisfied with the MC...How he strong but dont like conflicts...But in my opinion authors really did his best with this story you can see how the development of the story...and I kinda like this slowpace story where you enjoy their time and romance make you think what will happen in the future...overalls this novel is nice to read...sometime you to read to understand instead read to much review [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
How do you feel now that a new season of this show is coming lol, also good story i liked this anime so now i have something to keep me entertained🤷🏽♂️
Its been a month since the last updated and im still waiting i need this wholesome novel to come back any news author san???.....................
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what happened to author is he sick or is he just so busy? it's been a month since the last update. did author drop this or not?some one please I need answers!
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