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4.78

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Mia_2550
Wel done author keep writing like this stories I really like this novel... πŸ‘ŒπŸ» πŸ‘ŒπŸ» πŸ‘ŒπŸ» Great job❀️ this story is commendable πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ» You are such a great writer ❀️❀️❀️
2yr
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Olivia_2650
Good job! Well done! Fantastic! Perfect! That’s great! Nice work! Excellent! That’s really remarkable. Good grades! This story is praiseworthy 😍😍😍 Very interesting ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ Keep writing πŸ™ˆ πŸ™ˆ πŸ™ˆ
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Amit_Verma_5670
Hats off to the writer of this story. I mean, how a person can write such an amazing story. I'vs read the story, but mentally I'm still in the story. Everyone should read it once and experience a worth reading story.
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TheDarkest_Girl
I am just in love with this novel, the characters are amazing and the storyline is so interesting, and the way the story is described is so beautiful, I feel like I can imagine every sceneβ™₯β™₯β™₯😍😍😍 , awesome work author, keep writing 😘😍
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RedCeiling
A respectable attempt. Nice take on sexual fidelity. Written in first person past tense (limited perspective). Pros: The characters have great integrity and loyalty towards eachother. Cons: Grammatical and punctuation errors in some chapters while others are good (perhaps some are yet to be edited), constant switching between POVs (I feel it is inconsistent; you might like it). I am at chapter 24 now and the while the characters have their strong points, they are rather irrational something (is love truly blind?) and the side characters show excessive care for the FL and ML alike. Perhaps the author wanted too keep the focus of the story intact but that made the side characters start to feel inanimate after some time. Overall, give it a chance. With some editing, it can turn out to be a great work.
2yr
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Mynxiii1
As I have read many chapters already, i notice that some grammar are wrong; however, I like the story, full of mystery and very confusing. Wishing a good luck for the author πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™
3yr
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Kayleigh_Harkins
The translation isn’t good. It make it very confusing. But I love the story. I’ve felt every emotion the characters have. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Doctor_Min
I want to rate this after i finished reading chapter 1, and I found this story interesting, i really look forward on the upcoming chaps, hoping i won't be disappointed, i know i may felt stress but that is normal for me since all stories will really bring you stress as a matter of factπŸ˜‚. So yeah I'm wishing the author a good luck on making this mysterious piece.... Fightin'πŸ’ͺ
3yr
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Rody_Amgad
The story is very great. I loved it. And the story is so interesting, cute and beautiful. I Advise everyone to read it because it is just amazing. β€οΈπŸ§‘πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ–€β™₯οΈπŸ’˜πŸ’πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’“πŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ’Ÿβ£οΈ β€οΈπŸ§‘πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ–€β™₯οΈπŸ’˜πŸ’πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’“πŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ’Ÿβ£οΈ
3yr
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