Hi , I am a newbie author .If you find any mistakes , kindly tell me or highlight it . The novel is being proof read. I would try to publish error free chaps. Even if any mistake is left ,bear with it. Xoxo β€οΈπ€.
To be honest your book are amazing and wonderful dear author you are an amazing writer who one in a million best book are been liked by me I usually don't really read these kind of books but I give it a try and I was amazed with the talent and words that are in it it touches my heart and that I really loved it right now I am running out of words that I don't know what to say I will say I rate this novel 100% of all my time that I could ever do I did my best to rate it to the best keep it upππππππππππππππππ and continue to achieve perfection and all the best in the future thank you very much yours sincerely Vanessa dowlatram thank you very much for letting me comment on your book ππππππππππππ
This Is A Beautifully Written Novel. Which has stolen a big part of my heart π I can Picture all The scenes Which The author has writtenππthe Synopsis is Beautifully Written n well defined.π Character Development is Quiet Nice ^=^... I loved how the author has written the novelπ·It made A quiet Heartfelt Atmosphere Around meπ
Keep it Upπ
Your story was very good. It looks like all of your efforts in making the story were not a waste. You should just keep moving forwards. Good luck with your journey!
It's good. There were a bit of errors here and there but its not enough to hinder the flow of the story. Story development progresses not too slow or too fast. It's just enough for readers to follow along where the story is going.
Overall, it's starts good and I hope it'll progress well. Goodluck to the author and this novel!
Loved the book. Author did an excellent job. Need more chapters. Author please update more chapters. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this story feels so real and it is well written! it has me hooked already and i want to keep reading. the author did a great job in creating this story
firstly, i love the back and forth between Insha and Shaams in the first chapter. OMG so greatππ The word usage, description and pacing of the story was 10/10 Strongly suggest you read itππ
Every chapter is so well written, the plot is really interesting, background is well set up.The author writing style is great and easy to understand. All the expressions of the characters are well shown and characters are well described. I would say this is really a great work by author.
"Picturesque". The author did really well in writing a visually attractive novel. Not too flowery, not too complicated descriptions made it easy to read. I love it! Thanks for sharing your story, author!
well, that was something unexpected from a book well underviewed with 35k views- being bit descriptive, this story is really nicely elaborated with it's every ends meeting the crave of the reader.
I really loved this story and will look forward to read it.
Interesting read. For me first time reading about phoenix aspect. Wonder where it would lead? The names also pick the initial chuck making it more intriguing.
I've found your story very refreshing, it has picturesque scenes, the way you were able to write it off is fascinating. In terms of the personality of characters, they all are very unique, unlike the usual wooden-block ones.
Wow
I am finding it hard to describe your work. It's really mesmerizing. I have already fallen for characters. The way you have described them giving unique speech, connects the reader to the characters. The descriptions, plots are simply amazing. The content is well planned. Your hard work is clearly visible. Good luck with your work author!!
And those who like fantasy-romance, I strongly recommend them to add this book to their library just like I didπ
G'day mate.
This book is pretty good, kept me hooked reading it.
Good characters and world building.
If you are thinking about reading this book, I would suggest that you give it a try :)
From the very beginning the novel takes reader's heart by most proper quality of writing, and the naturality of dialogues. The characters are built steadily, and share their secrets at a pleasant exciting rate.
This is a book for any romance coneisseur, and as I'm not of such, I can only tell it as good, and that is saing much, as it leaved me in high spirits. (as I said I'm no romance fan)
In my opinion the world development could be more frequent, but I understand love takes the first violin. I really appreciate the handiwork of writer, and look forward as writes something more of mine liking. (as main topic, I liked that novel, just it's not my stik.)
I haven't graded stability of updates as I don't know about them.
Hope U found that review usefull. (just graded it anyways, coz couldn't post, but the total score is the same.)
This book is intriguing & unique...Very promising characters...I read a few chapters and it showed a mixture of magic, mystery, love, action, cliffhangers and many more...there are a few errors which can be fixed by the author...highly recommended book...Great work, Author!
Great start, really enjoyed reading this novel.
MC is likable and humourous.
The world background is creative and imaginative and the descriptions add to the story.
The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author! I will look forward to ur updates.
A well described story of kingdoms and princesses and princes. With a past full of crossroads, between personal plots.
Magic is the part that makes the story special.
Be extravagant, beautiful and powerful. Be Charismatic, GalΓ‘n and Intuititvo, What Characters!
Prose and poetry of kingdoms, kings and princesses that delight the eyes that read and the hearts that dream of living like this.
5/5 πΌ
The synopsis is good, as well as the world building πΊ
This is an imaginative, very creative work, and the author has successfully given the readers the actual feeling of being there in the lead character's scenes π Recommended! π³
hi author! your book actually deserve more than only five stars! i love the plot of your story and i hope you could publish new chapter but make sure to take your time! thank you for this amazing story! fighting! <3
At first, I thought it was going to be set in a culture similar to Ancient China but I was wrong. Still, it was a refreshing read. You broken down the usual trope and reassembled it to something unique. I can see the potential your book has. It still early to see progress but I'm sure your book will be loved by the readers.
I found a few writing issues, nothing to worry about too much tho.
There are some repetitive terms. Try to avoid repeating the same word all over again, it will improve your writing flow.
Apart from that, I think everything's fine.
Keep up the good work fellow newbie author ;)
the world background is nice and detailed. u can actually see how the author would want his readers to see the world that the characters were living in.
the story is fantastic and the development is thrilling.
just lessen the number of ellipses per chapter.
Just the first few lines within the first chapter got me thinking this is going to be good. Very clear and well written making it easy to understand.
usually i would struggle a lot when many new characters are introduced at once but the author managed to make it easier to digest.
Pretty clear the author took the effort to proof read and make it easy to read and visualise the world the author is trying to portray.
A really interesting novel, a little confused about the family tree though?. The story's flow would be easily improved through a couple of easy fixes in punctuation and grammar but these pale in comparison to thought-out world-building :). the only critique would be the overuse of "highness", it gets a little repetitive.
Hi everyone this book is from my friend who happens to be an amazing author. The story is set in a beautiful place with a strong female character. A clear cocktail of thriller, historical and fantasy which any one would love. So go ahead i can guarantee that this book is worth your time.
The book is really good Author has done a brilliant job, go guys read it, it's worth reading. once you read it you'll definitely and surely come for more
Very intriguing story synopsis, a great start and I really like the brilliancy in the aspect of character development. I wish there were more chapters so I could read on and on! More grace to ya authorππβ€οΈ
Wow, I can't believe you are a new writer. This is story is great, the writing, story line, characters, everything! It got me hooked from the beginning, the author did a great job!
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