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Olamide_Iroham
This book is amazing. I love how you didn't make the female lead to be weak when it comes to her opinions and to stand her ground. Please update more.
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Kade_Brown
You really surpassed my expectations with this novel. I really love this, the characters and the way you write, it's beautiful. Keep up the good work
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Pinkyprincess
I've become obsessed. That's the only word I have for your novel. I never thought if come to like a superhero story. You have done a great job! keep it up.
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Mynameistina
I am truly impressed by your write up. It is a really interesting story and very captivating. I do hope that the female lead gets her fire back as the novel continues. Keep up the good work
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lildaisy
I have never read a story like this before but I am glad to have clicked on it. I have a feeling there is going to be a lot of interesting things that are going to play out as this book progresses. Please keep posting.
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Kylie_Mekwunye
Obsessed cannot even begin to explain how obsessed I am with this book. This is amazing for real. I feel like I can relate to the main character a lot and I really cannot wait to see what is in store for her.
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gabby_lesley
Update stability, check. Nice story plot, check. Amazing characters, check. Grammar fluency, check. This story is a masterpiece, I will highly recommend to anyone looking for a fantasy novel. Keep it up.
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whitney_park
This is an interesting novel, the writer knows how to capture the mind of the readers and keep us wanting more as the story progresses. The characters are well developed and the female lead is strong and not easily tossed about. Good job.
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riri_riri_3394
I love your novel. Everything about it is so captivating. I can't wait really to see what happens and I can't lie and say I don't have a thing for Kaden. Keep it up.
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Faysal_Ahmed_5058
Captivated by how you wrote each chapter and how described each character in the book. Story telling is good and it catches the reader's eye easily. Good work author and keep on working hard. Great book.
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Ariana_spencer
I am a new reader and I just came across this from the writing contest and I love it. I love how you explained the characters so well, your grammar and how captivating it is. Definitely would recommend. Please update soon. Thank you.
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Aeipathy_02
First, the story plot is intriguing and interesting. The female lead is sandwich between the hero and its killer which is really interesting.
Second, writing quality is not bad.
Third, world background is detailed. And the character's introduction is great.
This story gave me some sort of thrills and I look forward for more updates.
Keep it up author!
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angelicdemon
The writing quality is top-notch for me and everything reads well! The story is interesting! Definite add to my collection! I recommend to everyone who wants a different read from the whole cliche transmigration/system troupes. The female protag is very strong and the ML is also interesting especially with the mysterious identity he has. Looking forward to seeing how this develops later on.
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LadyDuboisWrites
I definitely got hooked by this. I do hope you win this contest, I am slowly falling in love with the book. The grammar is really good and your ability to explain every detail without giving much away is amazing.
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