I have decided to write my second review after having 63 chapters so far and I want to let you know a few things. One, this is my first novel so it's not a surprised for you to see so many flaws in it. Two, I never written a novel chapter format before but I have learned as I continue to write more.
Now let's go to the pros and cons of this novel.
Pros
Stability in update of course is great and the storyline is unique in it's own way as the protagonist does not "follow the book" rules.
It has some comedies and light-heart moment in a serious situation. The MC may seem like a simp but he's not because he has no lover like many male out there. Therefore, it's hard to know how to act around a female considering his inexperience.
Not much pros as this novel is just the beginning of me writing in an impulse.
Cons
Let's say the grammars and tense could really make the story a bit confusing but smart readers should understand my meaning. Of course, if you found some wrong use of tense, do let me know so I can fix it and not look like a fool.
The POV aka point of view does changes multiple time through out the novel but as I'm writing this review now. I have fully decided to get rid of the first POV to third POV as it's easier and gives me a wider range in story telling.
The fight scene are not that great given I don't specialize nor have experience in how to portray one. But I will try my best to improve it and please be lenient for once.
Overall, I didn't rate myself highly since most of the category is either a 3 star or 4star except for my stability of updates. I just hope you will give me a chance as a new writer in here.
Thank you for reading my really long review. (However, a review should be this long to begin with xD)
I found the mc very irritating, at first it seemed like it would be something else. I only saw 4 chapters, after that I didn't read on and just scrolled down while trying to see if it got better and I honestly didn't like it. I'm stopping here but wish you luck.
Its better than other novels, just not by much. I find the MC obnoxious and his actions dont really make much sense. Theres quite a few tropes in this novel that i personally find extremely obnoxious, i.e MC goes nuts for random girl #7, the world building is alright, but nothing to fawn over, and the English is confusing but not hard to read. Overall its average, but as the author stated, this is their first novel so its to be expected. Pretty good for a first novel. Though, I will be dropping it because of the tropes. I personally cant stand them.
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Very good novel I love it all the characters are awesome and they are good.
Very good novel I love it all the characters are awesome and they are good.
Very good novel I love it all the characters are awesome and they are good.
As an avid reader from wattpad , I just came here to have a look and I was dissapointed to find this hidden gem.
As an avid reader from wattpad , I just came here to have a look and I was dissapointed to find this hidden gem.
As an avid reader from wattpad , I just came here to have a look and I was dissapointed to find this hidden gem.
I am giving 4 stars to write a review because it will not be good for the rating and as I see many people are liking this. but I say this novel is trash for me. Way too much teasing which I don't like, and the ch 37 was breaking point when she pulled his ear like that, I mean just how much selfish she could be. He was thinking for herself yet she has to do that. And that pet what could I say for that animal I don't want to waste my time. again 1 star from my heart.
Ayo fam, novel rily gud, but locked chapters need to use coins, not gud ma friend. In normal condition I write proper rEwiew, but author moster of locking chapters. bad
Overall a solid story, sadly the harem is a weak point of this work. It is one of those harems where women with great minds become stupid after the MC conquers them. The harem size might get out of control too, the MC is in his first kingdom in this lower world and he added 6 women to his harem, before going to this kingdom he gained 3 from the starter town(potentially a 4th was referenced there). So if you are the kind of person who doesn't want to see girls fading into the background (no matter how 2D they are), you might want to avoid this.
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Author should really delete these 2-3 star spam reviews with no actual review in them, it lowers the rating despite how many people enjoy the novel.
Those who’ve made critic comments make fair points, if you somehow get to my review first you should take them into consideration.
Always remember : if you dont like the novel then you can always leave it
This is also a personal guideline, any novel below 4.5 is an easy pass
Nice story and mixup of magic and cultivation world just waiting for mc to go into higher world ....
Also don't make much big harem in this world keep them for higher world goddessss.......
Also don't make too much big harem 10 to 15 is enough....
Another interesting book that I am going to add to my library. So far so good. Will continue to follow up! :-)
Thank you for continuously improving it too!
What!!?!! Definitely a five star. The first three paragraphs of the first chapter already got me hooked. I enjoyed the story flow among other things. This is a good one.
Hey readers, come check this book out. I assure you enjoy it
Oh this is one of the interesting novel I read. It makes me want to read more so hoping for more exciting chapters ahead! The synopsis really made me curious.
Not really a fan of transmigration and isekai genres on Webnovel, but I think this novel is a very fresh start towards this male lead genres and I think I will continue reading it ~~ Well, best of luck with your lucky book, author!
The author pulled off the story nicely. Even though I only read small chapters, I can feel its potential nonetheless, You gave me a wonderful novel to read! nice!
Ayeee that was a good read! :D
The premise is interesting ngl lol
I'm curious what will happen in the MC's journey hehe!
Also also, he's pretty relatable so me likey :D
Great work, author! <3
Wow I must say that this is... just wow. I've never read anything so amazing in my life.. I'm awaiting more chapters because I just- I just need to read more!
Master's writing skill is top-notch... This is a good book with an interesting plot. I love the mc's luck.. 5 stars because it deserves it. Keep going master, disciple had an enlightenment after reading your book 🤗
What a nice mixture of fantasy, great plot, interesting character and subtle sense of humor! :) Don't worry about errors, we all make them.
You're doing well!
Idczhen