Reviews of Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction) by keanu_eugene - Webnovel

Wow this is a very good fanfic so far. I usually skip the forst few days of the leader boards so The good books rise but im glad i picked this one because of the title, im glad i did because this is an amazing book so far with minor flaws that you could overlook. some flaws being that the author joined the hephestus familia to get a wepon made for him then making his class something like A magic monk (fighting with his fists and magic) (he should have an armour made with gauntlets or something unique not like a sword or sheild because that dosnt make much sense)(also i like the idea of a monk mage type character). but the positives overweigh the small bad things. some of the good things are a pretty uneque story, finding a good balence between op and not too broken and very likeable characters(very hard to do correctly). overall this is a very good story i would recomend to anyone 100% of the time.

forgive the poor grammar. as the first story I've read on webnovel i have to say you basically ruined everything else for me. this story atleast in my opinion doesnt do anything truly excellent but it does everything quite good. I've liked other stories alot but this one is the only one I've consistently read every single update as it came out and it's a story I imagine I will continue to read every single update. I think the author did a really good job and I would highly recommend reading it if you are even slightly tempted too.

Still find disturbing that Shen and Freya happend, good story however

This is my 3rd time reading it Ths how you know it’s good

Pretty bad to be honest, the first 50 chapters are barely readable, sadly the beginning is the best plotwise, I had to stop reading at chapter 89, it was driving me insane how bad this story is.

One of the best danmachi fanfict!! If you like the slow pace story and character development then it’s a great story to read. However, the volume 1 of the novel could be too much for some danmachi anime or LN fans. BUT, as the author said in the novel description it will be great after volume 1!! You can see the development of author’s writing in this novel as the novel progresses. Currently reading author next novel MHA:Horizon after finishing this novel(Recommend!!)

I initially felt conflicted about giving this novel a lower rating since I didn't read much of it, so I decided to settle on 3 stars as a middle ground. The story shows promise, but it becomes evident that the author lacks sufficient knowledge of the Anime, leading to some perplexing mistakes that avid viewers would notice. For instance, certain characters' personalities seem off, the leveling up speed feels unrealistically fast, and the protagonist's ease of joining the familia raises eyebrows. Additionally, the MC's (aka. the author's) word choice is peculiar and doesn't always fit seamlessly into the situation. It's disappointing to learn that the novel was completed a year ago without revisiting and refining its initial flaws, since authors do evolve over time, it seems odd to "abandon" a project and move on without addressing/fixing these issues. Despite these shortcomings, I've heard that the novel improves as it progresses. However, it feels like a well-built building constructed on an unstable foundation, making it difficult for me to fully immerse myself in the story. I hope nothing but the best for the author and encourage them to revisit this work with all the experience they have gained after completing it. Taking the time to refine and improve upon their initial flaws could potentially elevate this novel to a more satisfying level.

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really bad. 1st time in dungeon he lvls up. author doesn't understand danmachi at all

The character devolpment was great and I really loved the foreshadowing on certain parts

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While the beginning was bad, overall it was really good. It was confusing due to the fact that the falna settings changed in the middle of the story and I was also a Yang x Lefiya shipper but other than that, I loved the whole thing.

In the comments section are full of wimps complain about anything, if they just thinking that MC is a naive-Japanese-simp-retard with a loose mouth🤓, then they can't understand MC's character AT ALL!...... here I'll tell you.... first thing first MC is BLACK!🤦🏿 so he is just a chills and funny homie with friendly personally that can talk with anyone about anything, he doesn't know how this world work at all, so you should imagine him as American teenage Snoop Dogg that just lose his memory and suddenly get magic power, so he will just play with it like normal teenage will do in the hood (dungeon) and share with his new friends (everyone he know) how amazing his new magic is!!! and finally for god's sake🙄 what you virgin wimping otakus always complain about MC interested in Lefiya, when I reading their comments I just know that they are just some kids that don't know how to talk to a girl or have a relationship before from how they complain how MC choose the girl to date of how he can talk to the girl the ways that they can't do🫠..... anyways I'm ready glad that I give this fanfic a try and not believe in there negative comments from those who like to read about an Edgy-OP-harem protagonist that this novel clearly doesn't present.

It's great to read this but I can't give 5 stars, because yeah Maybe this is not your best work so I will read your other novels and thank you this story is really interesting

this one of the few stories here that actually strike a good balance between wish-fullfillment and story developement. The pace is good and any mistakes are easily forgotten due to the overwhelming interest in "what happens next". I can say that I found greater pleasure in reading this fanfic than I enjoyed the original. My score says it all really. PS: Reading this for the second time.

Top tier. Amazing writing, great characters, and superb storyline.

Writing quality:its goOd FRomm the start and it stays consitwnt throughout the story

Love it definitely top 10 material right here

I picked this up after reading the most recent novel written by the author and you can definitely see how much he's improved, even throughout this story you can see improvement. That being said this novel feels very mid, forgettable, and almost a waste of time. I find myself skipping more and more dialogue and skim reading to see if there's something I care about in the chapters. I don't really care for the mc or how he went from dominating everything to struggling even in a team against everything. Overall just a very average novel I might come back to but still unsure

why lvl 2 in one day?

The writing is fairly good and the concept is okay, but the characters are all off from the very beginning. He basically walks around and has everything handed to him while mentally being no different from a small child. Nobody who isn't mentally challenged would just say okay and move on when they wake up with missing memories in an unfamiliar place. Not to mention that nobody questions his background to find out if he has a troubling background or whether he is a spy for another familia. It isn't realistic and kind of killed the book for me.

Just amazing, thank you author for this amazing read, and I'm you mha one and it is very good as well. love you 😘

Very good but ruined danmachi fanfics for me as now whenever I read one I always end up comparing it to this masterpiece and they always come up short. Freya was my favourite character in this story as I could really connect with her and her singlemindedness in trying to achieve her dream. I also loved hefestues coming to terms with her looks and not changing it when she had the chance .

binge read the whole story and I liked it.

The characters behave and talk like NPC's.

I can recommend this novel. But I would tell people to skip the 10 or so chapters around the Chaos tournament. it was not needed and honestly takes away from the story. I honestly hope that it gets better after this arc.

HONEST REVIEW! Wow just wow let me tell you at first I just left this story in my library thinking it would be like every other cliché danmachi fic. The mc would be op with sharingan or a weak mc with a system who then collects a harem of unoriginal female leads. But no this story shows that while yes you can enjoy the original danmachi manga, with creativity a fan made work can give me the same feeling while reading. The characters were very flushed out with the mc’s companion’s giving there opinion in certain matters and telling the mc off if he is wrong. The characters backstory’s actually make you feel for them and even respect them in a way. The romance was shaky in the beginning but the plot twists added it became a solid with the reasoning the characters interacted with eachother how they did. Now the mc. The mc is smart strong and most of all actually stays true to his original reason for entering the dungeon. He is not there for glory or women he is serious when it comes to his goal. The magic ended up confusing me a little and I felt he should have unlocked a better end game magic but all and all the magic used in this story is reasonable. Overall I loved the story. I’m always iffy about danmachi fics because most of the time it’s copy paste with mc’s who just try to be cool instead of being a person. THANK YOU FOR WRITING! IM GLAD I FOUND THIS STORY!

Мне было очень приятно читать эту историю, автор продолжай в том же духе! ................................. ........ ...... . .. ...........

Great book. Would reccomend to anybody wanting a good Danmachi fic

Here's the promised mediocre review. The early chapters are rough, since the MC's uniqueness is one part not appreciated and other part is still mystery, so it comes off as ignorant, and not well though character. But after the rough 'understandable' start, it becomes more and more Amazing : -reading his power being used in many ways is really enjoyable; -the monsters are all really fun; -the conversation for me is actually part of the charm of this novel as well (it flows so naturally and the banter is nice); -the romance is not bad. the character and relationship is actually feels "ALIVE", in fact might be too alive, relationship is always complicated; -the MC's not alone, his adventuring comrades are unique and fun to read as well; -and i like the fact that some characters not forcefully introduced and make too much word for them for "thickening" up the novel since they're not that important for the overall plot. That's all, i guess. 🥺 i really like it and anticipating more works from the Author. The support that i can give is probably just Stones, and joining discord though🙏 i'm sorry. i'm a casual reader.

One of the best books I ever read. It has an amazing store progression and character development/growth. The history is well connected with part's that it's an important occurrence or tip for the future.