Chapter comments on the chapter FIRST PHASE OF THE ADVANCED TECH TRAINING. of the book THE CONSPIRACY OF THE ELITES.

Well written especially for a translation.

😁😁good

while i like the story itself. i think you need to expand your vocabulary more and use more sophisticated words for eg:using appalling instead of very bad. this isnt a criticis but its just something you should work to be better as a writer. also i recommend using grammarly(preferable paid but free also works) and you would notice an immediate improvement in your vocab and grammer

Your chapters are too short

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so far so far....it's been sub par....don't think I might go on

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