Pretty amazing so far! Good grammer and a interesting Story. I like the World building and thats our "Main" doesent habe like 269.754 abilitys at the same time and only use like 5.
My thanks to the author!
A very interesting tale of Evolution and the perks and pests that come with it. Theres rarely any mistakes and the quality is stable. Other characters get introduced to build up mystery und spice it up a bit . Ty for writing its very good!
We be throwing money in a spiral
every time your girl hear my song yeah turn her right into my ho
she shake her A55 do the eye roll
Got a skinny thong like a tight rope
I be blowing up like some pyros
Coupe 150, call it Kyro
I'm surprised you brought it to webnovel, but I guess scribble hub isn't really the best platform so fair enough xD.
As for my review, the story is awesome, so far there aren't many things to dislike aside from the occasional grammar mistake. The mc is a guy who goes from mosquito to a more versatile form in quite a fast manner so those worried about it shouldn't drop, just endure a little. The only thing I disliked was the Mauling part, although I see it's necessity, so fair warning for those who don't like seeing the mc tortured, that part ain't nice for him. The world is interesting as a concept but since the story isn't too advanced in it's plot I can't say much more about it, I can only wait for the future. No issues with update stability on my part and for last, the other characters are well made, though my favorite shall always be Bob, because I find it hilarious to think about a future world destroying mass of muscles who's not that bright and is named Bob xD
This was an experience and a very solid read. The way the main character has to actually go through things like the arena and that everything’s tied in and makes sense is great. The world is fascinating and the monsters are very similar to their mythical counterparts. But through all the mental duress and pain there are some wholesome moments and the emotions you feel while reading leave you longing for more.
La historia al principio es un poco lento o aburrido, aunque la historia se movía a buen ritmo no era muy entretenido, pero conforme va avanzando se vuelve mucho mejor tan pronto como evoluciona en humanoid, la cuestión del mundo es todavía muy incierta y de hecho el error del MC es que básicamente se queda en las partes más bajas y se relaja en vez de primero ir a investigar el sistema de poder del mundo, lo cual claramente paga caro en el volumen 2, esperemos el MC mejore en ese aspecto; la historia ahora bastante bien el desarrollo de poder y todo es bastante bueno, espero mas caps
I have already said it as a comment, but I like to say it again here:
I can only say it again and again great story hope for much more.
but I think it would be better if you would post new chapters every day so that you get more power stones I love it when you do a mass release but unfortunately that doesn't help you that much
To everyone else, the story is really well written and exciting to read, have fun
Good novel. Don't drop ! .............................................................................................................................................................................................
First few chapters when the main character is a mosquito are well written, but as it progresses into his first humanoid, the development becomes somewhat forced. The main character’s actions feel a bit too unnatural for his moralities unless there are some more elaborations to his actions because all until now, he’s been acting in a way to maintain his cold persona while there isn’t much clear reasons or details to why. It somewhat eased after his duel, but it still feels a bit too fast, especially on how the speed of his evolution does not complement his interactions with the world. Compared to his first interactions with humans, although not direct, is quite hesistant while his later interactions with humans seem a bit too “toxic,” if that is the right word. It’s like he took a complete turn in his moralities, which is understandable after the Mauling, but doesn’t make up for most of it because it only mentions how he have become more mentally challenged than morally challenged, like his interaction with Lily and the human who dueled him. It highlights that he is not morally challenged while his interactions with the mercenary group with Merelyn emphasize how it is quite right to kill despite not having any conflicts, or intimidations. The writing style is quite unique, I guess, the confusing part about the dialogues is the “Me” part. I think it would be better with “I said,” or otherwise emphasize it in third person through using the person’s name than in first person. Releases are slow, but stable, so there is not much problem with that currently. The characters are well-made except for the main character, but also not really. The main character just lacks awareness of his own moralities and philosophy, or otherwise, does not express it consistently. It’s like he has a split personality. The story is quite young, so there isn’t much expectations for the structural world, but the story exceeds it so far. It might change through-out the story, and to be honest, although it has some flaws, it is still a lot better than the overrated, “My Vampire System,” or it shouldn’t be compared with in the first place because it is like comparing trash with goods.
Couldn't wait checked out your work on another website, and i must say it's so well thought out. the pacing of the story, the way you jusy perfectly flesh out characters.
I noticed with this author everything that happens, happens for a reason. Although people are gonna find the "prisoner" Ark kind of annoying it's well needed for the mc, think of it like training for him.
(!!WARNING!!) Author is a well known on his other website for his sadistict ways, leaving the most painful and torturing of cliffhangers READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. Besides that it's definitely worth a try. :)
no complaints. non human MC trying to build a kingdom while picking up friends and lovers along the way. dope grammar and all that shit. only thing is, I hop author spends more time describing MC after evolution
This is absolutely amazing novel!!!
The main character only have two things that is unique for him in magical world and that is able to choose which one he wants to evolve and buy a skills from a shop in system.
The main character is not a beta and he doesn’t shy away from killing humans.
He would kill them if they’re in his way or they will benifit him but he wouldn’t blindly kill humans for no reason.
Btw so far, everyone have a system so the main character is not that special but he’s lucky to choose which to evolve and buy a skills in reasonable requirements that needs to be met otherwise he just have to wait to grow.
But I’m not sure if I’m right if everyone have system so let me know before I find out if they do or not. It just makes sense if they do.
Thank you for the amazing novel and keep updating more chapters!!🎉🎉