Shameless review from the Author here. This is one of my first works, i'm a long time reader of fantasy novels trying my hand at writing. Would love feedback and am open to criticism. Thank you all so much
Your characters are so relatable it seriously drives me to keep reading this book. Kudos author, I'm glad I hopped into the forum and stumbled into this book. I don't reject choosing this one out of all the others.
Great piece of writing for Author's first proper novel attempt. I love that there isn't a massive information dump at the start, the information is fed through the story and dialogue. Although some parts seem a little forced I believe the Author will learn as he writes
So, a 5 stars from me because there are many qualities to this book. The characters are well depicted, and very human. Banter and bound between them had been cleverly wrought, and the plot is unravelling nicely. Not predictable as well, which is a nice change from so many novels.
This is such an interesting and creative story. It even has constant update which i find rlly nice. I think this book will only get better. Keep it up author. I wanna see more chapters from you. Great job.👍😊
This story has a light comedic tone in the beginning which is enjoyable. The author does a good job to showcasing the MC's personality and creating imagery for the world around him. This story has good potential and is a solid read, keep writing!
Nice. I was so engrossed reading that I only notice, I'm already at the last updated chapter. The narratives are so clear and easy to read, from their dialogues, world-building, the details of classes and ranks, the awakening. Greatly done! I also love the characters' different and well-written personalities.
Overall, this book is a great read and definitely going to stay in my collections.
Greatly recommended to everyone who loves magic, knights fantasy stories. And I tell you from this review you will not regret reading this.
Great Work author!
I can tell you right away, I dont read novels like these, at all. I prefer **** romance novels, but I occasionally like to stray away. This is one of those novels where you don't really expect it to turn out the way you think. Reading the title I wasnt sure about it at first. As I continued to read, I found myself being more invested into the story. The author executed a well written storyline and plot as well. This is a original and unique style to bring. I honestly think I will finish this, its one of those "I need to know what happens" books. This author has definitely peaked my interest in reading more of these type of novels!!! Good luck!
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This is a quality beginning. Love the fictional world the author has created and the protagonist is a likeable character with a fascinating past the reader can't help but cheer for. I do hope and expect he finds success in the knights academy. Nice world building through dialogue and interactions rather than just throwing in a massive info dump at the start. Very well-written, smooth prose, clean dialogue and an all-round pleasurable reading experience.
Nice nice nice nice! A very creative imagination displayed at the plot of the author's wonderful work. This needs exposure to more readers and I think it needs to be praised!. I am hooked with the first chapter!