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This is by far the best novel I’ve read here. I was actually sad when I got to the end. That’s how much I wanted the story to keep going. Great characters, great plot, and great development!
i have really enjoyed this web novel, to the point where i hope to purchase a hard copy someday, even if you end up only allowing us to purchase a huge PDF version I would still be extremely grateful.
This story is phenomenal. I literally teared up, realizing it was over. UnrivaledArcaner, you have created a truly amazing story. From such colorful characters to the plots and twists to the world itself. There are some grammar errors in there. But that doesn't matter in light of such an epic being created. Thank you for your hard work and dedication to creating something brilliant. Good luck on your future endeavers, I wish that they are each better than the last.
This was such a nice journey. I really enjoyed John as a character. Jack was also pretty cool. My favorite part is where he slammed the emissary into the ground. Anyways, this book is worth reading. Enjoy.
Captivating from start to finish! I hope the author turns this into a series.
I stayed with this book for 3 years, and it's as been an amazing experience, I grew so attached to this book that I can't wait for the chapter update, am sad it has to end all the same kudos to the author!!!
I finished this book from start to finish and it was a amazing read 10 out of 10 recommend you won't be disappointed
This narrative is truly remarkable. The characters are meticulously crafted, and when combined with the intricately developed world, they become incredibly lifelike, enabling readers to deeply understand and connect with them. The author’s writing style immerses the reader in the events of the story, making them feel like active participants. Additionally, the plot remains unpredictable up to the final chapter. Unlike other stories where characters become overwhelmingly powerful and the plot loses its tension, this story maintains a continuous and engaging challenge. It is exceptionally well-written and highly recommended for all readers.
I have been reading this book for years. Through many troubles i have always loved this book. only thing that held me back was waiting for another chapter or waiting for my pay check. This book has been the most amazing piece of art work i have ever read.
The story is good. A MMORPG turned real setting, but not the general kind. Though many may find some things hard to accept logically, most of the story is well thought and interesting.
really good book. had a well thought out progression a great protagonist and antagonist. and most importantly the author didn't drag out the book.
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great story.love all the skills and classes. mind if u add the special classes skills to the introductory page? sometimes after reading the chapters, iIforgot Wat does Wat for special classes
Read until chapter 30 and as everyone said, the mc loses ATLEAST 90 IQ points. Like his brain was turned to liquid and emptied by 70%. Idk why the author decided to make him an idiot out of nowhere, from what I've seen it doesn't further the plot, so its not lazy writing. Its just a right hook from out of nowhere. I will keep hope as some people have said it returns to its previous quality. I will make another review after like chapter 300 just to confirm for myself.
I do like the series. the main character is a bit stupid but that is okay I suppose...my main issues are with the way he is tough on his enemies but a yes main for everyone else...please grow a pair. Also improving friends, lovers, family etc is important but you should never self sacrifice to boost them when you have a very real threat in "The master" who already has more classes then you. I really don't see how the main character is special to be honest I mean..with martial artist his grandfather, leavemealone and even several of his guildmates seem able to keep up if not surpass him..his only real claim to power is the extra levels he has. martial arts? John can keep up when he actually tries, leavemealone seems to outpace him, even Jeanne catches up quick..where is this skill his grandfather keeps talking about..plz help me understand here...otherwise it is an entertaining read, i just had a few small gripes
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very good story but there were some updating issues not long ago,I'm not sure they've cleared that up, otherwise it's a very nice novel
This is an amazing book! I couldn’t put it down! The characters are very individualized and well developed. The world setting is fascinating. There are some grammatical errors which pull the reader out of their immersion but it’s easily overlooked. All in all, I wish I had the complete book for my library.
Hi...hope this message meets you well, I am a great fan of your wonderful book, have read it twice from chapter one to the last update, that how much I love second world....I will love this novel turn into movie someday great work bro I love everything about the book, Jack is a great MC!!!
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
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The author introduces the MC as some knowledgeable second rate player. It doesn’t take a lot for anyone who has played at least 1RPG game to understand basic mechanics and roles. Why on Earth has this guy who has been playing the greatest of RPGs for years have to be instructed on every single aspect of this world in this forever tutorial he has with his fairy is beyond me. The MC character starts off as being ok not too smart but not dumb either. He receives a fairy that is supposed to help in quest using the knowledge of the world. The fairy only tells him things when she feels like it. He asks questions about everything. There’s so many examples but you’ll get tired of seeing them 5-10 chapters after receiving the fairy. There are many times in which he doesn’t use his knowledge gained from the fairy to his advantage instead he wantonly tells anyone he’s had a positive experience with. The writer creates forced reasons to keep the rest of the world around the same level as the MC. Very much so the first expedition outside of the city. There was zero reason to bring any other players and even if he decided to the close group he always worked with was enough. Instead 21 more randoms pop up. Much of the writing feels as if the author wants drag out his word count. So many meaningless conversations that last way too long and fail to introduce anything worthy in the world building or connections between individuals. All in all is a readable pass time due to the grammar being ok although there’s some bad moments of grammar throughout the first 320 chp atleast. There’s a lot more things to say but I’ve already said enough.
all and all not a bad book the mc started of strong using his mind to make it but after he got his fairy companion he became overly reliant on her after a bit the strong mindedness of the character kinda diminished and he became very reliant on a luck rock to succeed all and all not a bad sorry but some chapters definitely feel rushed.
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best novel I've ever read. Cool action a lot of interesting threads, just worth reading. and the best part is that there are two episodes every day
I have to admit this is literally the best book I've ever read and I dont mind spending coins to purchase privilege chapters, the author is very consistent and doesn't rush things and also keeps the readers entertained. in short there are no words
I haven’t enjoued a book like this on this app before. The author updates the story daily but given that I can’t put the book down the updates don’t keep pace with my reading speed. All in all one of the best books on this app and it doesn’t get the attention it deserves!
i was kind of surprised by the first reviews and comments i read. i do get what they are saying but the reviews saying the character is a moron and they are critical of unrivaledarcaners- those reviews are pretty shallow.
This book does not get the credit it deserves. The writer is very consistent, does a lot of research and brings several characters to life in a sensible and believable way. I would recommend this book to anyone, especially rpg players. The world building is excellent and the mc is truly human, i.e. he makes mistakes and is not omniscient or unbeatable.
Honest review from chapter up till 301 currently This is a good read, it has some really exciting moments. The world itself it's ok it a standard MMORPG video game. The characters are great so far. Yea you got some of those annoying characters but like. It's a MMORPG world filled with mostly gamers no sh**. Some complaints I heard about the mc. Yea he isn't super smart just average. I see people saying gets summer when that not true, at least so far. And no he isn't a pushover if you actually read untill 300 you can see that. Yes he does spare some people, but that's only like two people and he kills everyone else. Plus it's a video game world so here comes some spoilers ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ spoilers They do respawn death isn't permanent so it's not Sao. So like if he kills them or not doesn't really matter all too much. He has a guide that helps him. I see people complaining that he asks the guide alot of questions. When thats literally the guides job, and is why he always has an edge over all the other, as they have to search for them information he can just ask. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The mc has character development, so if you're looking for a flawless perfect character from the start it's not him. The MC is one of the strongest players that we know of. But he also not op meaning he has to work to stay the strongest. But this story is a good read so far, if you want something to read, while you wait for your favorite novel to stack up this is the book to read. This mc compared to the MC from there (Earth greatest magus). Is way better, you wanna see a stupid idiot main Character read that. You'll never complain about a character again.
This is by far the best novel I’ve read here. I was actually sad when I got to the end. That’s how much I wanted the story to keep going. Great characters, great plot, and great development!
i have really enjoyed this web novel, to the point where i hope to purchase a hard copy someday, even if you end up only allowing us to purchase a huge PDF version I would still be extremely grateful.
This story is phenomenal. I literally teared up, realizing it was over. UnrivaledArcaner, you have created a truly amazing story. From such colorful characters to the plots and twists to the world itself. There are some grammar errors in there. But that doesn't matter in light of such an epic being created. Thank you for your hard work and dedication to creating something brilliant. Good luck on your future endeavers, I wish that they are each better than the last.
This was such a nice journey. I really enjoyed John as a character. Jack was also pretty cool. My favorite part is where he slammed the emissary into the ground. Anyways, this book is worth reading. Enjoy.
Captivating from start to finish! I hope the author turns this into a series.
I stayed with this book for 3 years, and it's as been an amazing experience, I grew so attached to this book that I can't wait for the chapter update, am sad it has to end all the same kudos to the author!!!
I finished this book from start to finish and it was a amazing read 10 out of 10 recommend you won't be disappointed
This narrative is truly remarkable. The characters are meticulously crafted, and when combined with the intricately developed world, they become incredibly lifelike, enabling readers to deeply understand and connect with them. The author’s writing style immerses the reader in the events of the story, making them feel like active participants. Additionally, the plot remains unpredictable up to the final chapter. Unlike other stories where characters become overwhelmingly powerful and the plot loses its tension, this story maintains a continuous and engaging challenge. It is exceptionally well-written and highly recommended for all readers.
I have been reading this book for years. Through many troubles i have always loved this book. only thing that held me back was waiting for another chapter or waiting for my pay check. This book has been the most amazing piece of art work i have ever read.
The story is good. A MMORPG turned real setting, but not the general kind. Though many may find some things hard to accept logically, most of the story is well thought and interesting.
really good book. had a well thought out progression a great protagonist and antagonist. and most importantly the author didn't drag out the book.
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great story.love all the skills and classes. mind if u add the special classes skills to the introductory page? sometimes after reading the chapters, iIforgot Wat does Wat for special classes
Read until chapter 30 and as everyone said, the mc loses ATLEAST 90 IQ points. Like his brain was turned to liquid and emptied by 70%. Idk why the author decided to make him an idiot out of nowhere, from what I've seen it doesn't further the plot, so its not lazy writing. Its just a right hook from out of nowhere. I will keep hope as some people have said it returns to its previous quality. I will make another review after like chapter 300 just to confirm for myself.
I do like the series. the main character is a bit stupid but that is okay I suppose...my main issues are with the way he is tough on his enemies but a yes main for everyone else...please grow a pair. Also improving friends, lovers, family etc is important but you should never self sacrifice to boost them when you have a very real threat in "The master" who already has more classes then you. I really don't see how the main character is special to be honest I mean..with martial artist his grandfather, leavemealone and even several of his guildmates seem able to keep up if not surpass him..his only real claim to power is the extra levels he has. martial arts? John can keep up when he actually tries, leavemealone seems to outpace him, even Jeanne catches up quick..where is this skill his grandfather keeps talking about..plz help me understand here...otherwise it is an entertaining read, i just had a few small gripes
Reveal Spoiler very good story but there were some updating issues not long ago,I'm not sure they've cleared that up, otherwise it's a very nice novel
This is an amazing book! I couldn’t put it down! The characters are very individualized and well developed. The world setting is fascinating. There are some grammatical errors which pull the reader out of their immersion but it’s easily overlooked. All in all, I wish I had the complete book for my library.
Hi...hope this message meets you well, I am a great fan of your wonderful book, have read it twice from chapter one to the last update, that how much I love second world....I will love this novel turn into movie someday great work bro I love everything about the book, Jack is a great MC!!!
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
Reveal Spoiler The author introduces the MC as some knowledgeable second rate player. It doesn’t take a lot for anyone who has played at least 1RPG game to understand basic mechanics and roles. Why on Earth has this guy who has been playing the greatest of RPGs for years have to be instructed on every single aspect of this world in this forever tutorial he has with his fairy is beyond me. The MC character starts off as being ok not too smart but not dumb either. He receives a fairy that is supposed to help in quest using the knowledge of the world. The fairy only tells him things when she feels like it. He asks questions about everything. There’s so many examples but you’ll get tired of seeing them 5-10 chapters after receiving the fairy. There are many times in which he doesn’t use his knowledge gained from the fairy to his advantage instead he wantonly tells anyone he’s had a positive experience with. The writer creates forced reasons to keep the rest of the world around the same level as the MC. Very much so the first expedition outside of the city. There was zero reason to bring any other players and even if he decided to the close group he always worked with was enough. Instead 21 more randoms pop up. Much of the writing feels as if the author wants drag out his word count. So many meaningless conversations that last way too long and fail to introduce anything worthy in the world building or connections between individuals. All in all is a readable pass time due to the grammar being ok although there’s some bad moments of grammar throughout the first 320 chp atleast. There’s a lot more things to say but I’ve already said enough.
all and all not a bad book the mc started of strong using his mind to make it but after he got his fairy companion he became overly reliant on her after a bit the strong mindedness of the character kinda diminished and he became very reliant on a luck rock to succeed all and all not a bad sorry but some chapters definitely feel rushed.
Reveal Spoiler best novel I've ever read. Cool action a lot of interesting threads, just worth reading. and the best part is that there are two episodes every day
I have to admit this is literally the best book I've ever read and I dont mind spending coins to purchase privilege chapters, the author is very consistent and doesn't rush things and also keeps the readers entertained. in short there are no words
I haven’t enjoued a book like this on this app before. The author updates the story daily but given that I can’t put the book down the updates don’t keep pace with my reading speed. All in all one of the best books on this app and it doesn’t get the attention it deserves!
i was kind of surprised by the first reviews and comments i read. i do get what they are saying but the reviews saying the character is a moron and they are critical of unrivaledarcaners- those reviews are pretty shallow.
This book does not get the credit it deserves. The writer is very consistent, does a lot of research and brings several characters to life in a sensible and believable way. I would recommend this book to anyone, especially rpg players. The world building is excellent and the mc is truly human, i.e. he makes mistakes and is not omniscient or unbeatable.
Honest review from chapter up till 301 currently This is a good read, it has some really exciting moments. The world itself it's ok it a standard MMORPG video game. The characters are great so far. Yea you got some of those annoying characters but like. It's a MMORPG world filled with mostly gamers no sh**. Some complaints I heard about the mc. Yea he isn't super smart just average. I see people saying gets summer when that not true, at least so far. And no he isn't a pushover if you actually read untill 300 you can see that. Yes he does spare some people, but that's only like two people and he kills everyone else. Plus it's a video game world so here comes some spoilers ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ spoilers They do respawn death isn't permanent so it's not Sao. So like if he kills them or not doesn't really matter all too much. He has a guide that helps him. I see people complaining that he asks the guide alot of questions. When thats literally the guides job, and is why he always has an edge over all the other, as they have to search for them information he can just ask. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The mc has character development, so if you're looking for a flawless perfect character from the start it's not him. The MC is one of the strongest players that we know of. But he also not op meaning he has to work to stay the strongest. But this story is a good read so far, if you want something to read, while you wait for your favorite novel to stack up this is the book to read. This mc compared to the MC from there (Earth greatest magus). Is way better, you wanna see a stupid idiot main Character read that. You'll never complain about a character again.