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SabergKeys
Notes by the Author This is my very first time writing a story, and even writing in English is my first time too, so if you see any error and misspelling remember that I'll edit it right away if I reread it again. And as you all can see my story uses real-life religions, so if you're religious and been offended by my story, I'm truly sorry that I offended you. And I hope you can understand that my story is just fictitious and are not real. Writing is just my hobby and I'm still a student, so I can't really post new chapters daily. About Myth: ADPR 1) Just like I said up above, this'll use real-life religions and mythologies, but most of the stories in the religions and mythologies that I used, would be change a lot, so don't expect that all of the Gods in the mythologies I used will be added. 2)The chapters will have tons of POV changes, mainly would me the main character Haruki and his enemies and friends, and I'm gonna us both first person for Haruki and third person for the others, but other times it will change. 3)Like in many mythologies, side stories which are cannon will be created in the future so that you'll know more about the world and the characters more. Spoiler 4)Not only mythologies are gonna be added, but also famous stories and real-life people in the past are gonna be added too, so there's gonna be a chance that some of the heroes in your country are gonna be here. Also you can comment about what you like and don't like about my story, don't worry I take suggestions and criticisms.
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Tieria_Liu
This story makes me want to keep reading it. all the characters really make the story cool. especially the setting. one word I can say is amazing.🤩
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Photosphere
Interesting premise, be careful with the punctuation marks... I actually have a novel that's almost about the same, the name is Assassination Through the Netherworld, I encourage you to read it and review it, thanks for the swap.
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Claudia_Harlow
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Ice_Princesss
All I have to say is "WOW". This was an action packed story. Everything is interesting, from the plot, world background, and all the characters I can across. It shows how much time and effort you put into this story. I hope it gets more recognition.
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DaoistFlevoi
I just started reading about Haruki. It's interesting from the very beginning so I'm looking forward to go through the journey!! Keep it up!!
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WhiteVest
I really love this concept, I don't read alot of book like this so I just know how unique this concept is but it threw me for a loop, especially the first two chapters.
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perilousindulgence
Looking at the synopsis and the pace of the first chapters, I can feel that this story is promising. The situation the main character is put in pulls me in, especially with the presence of many religions. Keep it up, Author!
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Ergelina
Other than spotting a few grammar mistakes, it was an interesting story to read - especially if you're into gaming stories, then this is for you. It's got all the necessary elements in. Lots of chapters that won't let you forget the story, and well-thought characters. Nicely done!
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Aravind_S
Good Plot. Though there are errors here and there. The interesting story plot makes readers keep going. It would be better If the Author do stable updates. Finally, it's a good novel. Give it a try.
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Darine_ALRAMMAH
This story is really interesting and captivating. I love the fact that you feed on culture and religion. I feel like this is something everyone should read! The style is really good and unique. Going back in history is something that requires really hard work and research. I really admire this book and the author. Praise the author of this book and praise Mythologies: A Devil Prince's Revenge. 10/10
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Allister_Nelson
This is such an action-packed, thrilling story about a devil prince, with tight pacing, plot like nobody's business, romance, revenge, blood, grit, gore, and keeps you glued to your seat!
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MayDreamer
The story in one word is just A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !!!! The storyline goes in a flow and there are always cliffhanger in the end which will make you attached to your seats. The world description is perfect so goes with the characters and yeah a little bit of humor in between is just like a chef kiss. Thou there were some errors but still the story was so good that I wasn't able to stop myself from giving a five star rating. Keep up the Good work Author!!
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Shico_rai
First of all the the story is very interesting, the mc has a good moral even through he has given up his life. I find that your also a fellow Filipino and it's not easy writing English with all the grammars, that even for me feels confusing. But the way you write your story is very clever. keep up the work man, I like your story. The story has also many chapters, I'll continue reading your story. keep up the good work.
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Anotoki
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The story has a good concept! I just hope the author do very well and never stop reading. And also keep the story consistent, not without a plothole and steady.
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Dark_Scholars
What struck me first was the Intro, a really emotional start, makes you immerse yourself. Your writing ability is one of the good ones here. Just started the book and it seems really good, nice plot, interesting characters. I will add it to my library, it looks like a book I will enjoy. Keep it up.
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Williane_M_P
Sorry for the delay in giving you a review. Your writing quality is wonderful, the descriptions of the environment made me travel in the story, and I am a big fan of isekai. I will keep reading.
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Dvanzy6
This book was a masterpiece. I enjoyed the concept and I certainly loved the way the author portrayed the characters. Isekai is a great genre, but it's difficult to put together. However the author did it perfect well! Good job 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Shico_rai
The story is pretty good and will thought, the development of characters, i really like ready, to add up you have made over 90 chapters. keep up the good work man
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AniTian
I love the tone of the story and the protagonist. I especially like the way he thinks about death and his act at the end of the first chapter. From the beginning, it is not clear what the story will be about, and this forces you to read the novel further and further.
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Devanshi_Rathod
Amazing work Author!! The first chapter piqued my interest right away. Secondly, Characters are very well crafted as well. I appreciate your creativity and insights ! KEEP UP THE WORK !!
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Tangerqueen
Writing Quality (4/5): Really sorry to start on a bad note, but as I was reading, there were a lot of tense issues with the writing. I tried to paragraph comment some of them, but it was no where near comprehensive of a list. I don't think many readers will have these issues, but for me, it was a bittt distracting as I read the story. But as you said, English isn't your first language, so that's completely understandable! Good luck, and you got this! Stability of Updates (5/5): Nothing much there Story Development (4/5): I must admit that I was a bit lost at some times with how the story was progressing. From your first auxiliary chapter, I had a general idea of what was going on, but I still was just a tad lost because of all the point of view changes. Character Design (5/5): Despite what I said about being confused about the initial POV shifts, I really enjoyed the internal dialogues and how they really helped flesh out the characters. World Background (5/5): This part was genuinely amazing. When I first read about how you were going to take inspiration from that giant list of religions and turn it all into something of your own, I was really amazed. And what you delivered in the story didn't disappoint either! Good luck with the rest of the story!
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Yanie_Long
From the first chapter, my emotions got sucked in. The writing style had me invested in the character and storyline. The storyline is not easy to predict and I find that refreshing. Good work.
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Heart_Made
This book took me by surprise by its unique plot full of intrigue and mystery. The plot develops really well and with its cool characters this book is really worth the read.
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YIANUWANGXIAO
I enjoyed reading this story. The first paragraph definitely hooks the reader in, and the rest add a layer of mystery. It keeps you intrigued. This story has serious potential to going premium and I'm shocked not many people read this yet give it a shot since it's free it'll give the author a reason to keep writing this hidden gem. The story development is superb with an interesting plot, steady update and well detail character description. I love your work, thou I don't read this genre but this got me hooked. Great job Author keep going ❤ [img=recommend] FIVE STARS ❤
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Web_Novel_977
Starting of the story was really interesting which makes one read more and more. The leads character is very well designed. I'll surely read this book till last. Great Author👍👍👍
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dinoriii
Overall : the concept of the story was unique and the plot line was interesting! The synopsis really draws the attention of the readers to dig in more into the story! Writing quality : the story had little to no mistakes made in the story, even there was a mistake, it wouldn’t affect the reading of the story. The writing style was unique and easy to read with good words used in a first person view. Updating : the updates are stable! Characters : the main character was described well in the auxiliary chapter, there were details on how the he looked like and what family background he has. He also has his own set of personality which can be seen in the story! The character dialogues were also interesting and fresh to the eyes~! World background : the magical background of other things were well written and described out by the author in the auxiliary chapter! The details given was understandable and great. The imaginative creativity put into this was great as it is created by the author! My thoughts : the story definitely has the potential to soar into great heights! Though I am not a type into action kind of books but this one was a good read and would definitely recommend it!! hope to see you continue this amazing story, keep up the good work author!!! ✨☺️
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H0racio
Very good writing and easy to read, the world is well constructed and a first person romance something I rarely see. I recommend you read this history.
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KayLillyt_1
For a first novel, It’s going really great. Very captivating. A story that leaves the readers hanging on every word and wanting more. Between the mythologies and the lead character. Both well crafted, It is great.
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Akira_Monadelle
This novel is so cool 😳 It's written in the first person which I have recently found out is very rare on Webnovel. The novel has a very complex and intricate plot. The author's writing style is very unique and can easily pull in readers such as myself. Overall a wonderful read worthy of tremendous success.
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Book_Pen
UNIQUE!! The amount of research you have done for this book is vivid. The writer has a good imagination, the plot has been well articulated to match the level of your creativity. Though it was my first time reading this kind of genre, the writer's study on various mythologies and prefect word-building interested me. Keep Going!!
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