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I and my poor friend, godzilla had a heart attack and died from reading this BAD WRITING
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If you could stop rewriting the story with only the mc being a celestial and the rest being completely different from the previews versions and simply make them into different stories that would be great. Also, I don't understand how, after so many different versions of the story, your english is still so horrible? One would think that you would improve your english after rewriting the story so many times...
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he keeps in deleting it and redoing it with is good but when you read it knowing how the other ones felt it feels like it's getting worse each re write with I understand but is annoying to read
I feel like the author either needs to have an editor or needs to learn how to speak and type english better. Even though the synopsis seems interesting I would not recommend this book because of the poor writing quality.
I'm enjoying this more than I thought I would. Also, maybe its cuz I'm used to mtl but the writing doesn't actually bother me that much. All in all, neato.
Looks like it was written by a child tbh
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I have tbh that the grammar in this story is horrible and I am more than willing to beta your novel just reply to this with your discord acc so we can get in contact.
I decided to take a break from marvel verse stories after reading to chapter 10 since the 2nd time I woke up today I thought (oh it's cloudy if it rains II'llneed to spray the windows to chase away that sentient white mold parasite. wait ...WHAT )
I really liked this story and it made me really interested in the celestial and I find it unique as its the only celestial mc fan fiction I have ever seen
The Story Itself is really good and all but the Writing Quality kills it all really and if I say this iit means something because Ive read a lot of bad MTL but this Writing Quality is so bbad that you can at most read 2-3 Chapters Uninterupted before your head begins to hurt and you'll stop. However this Story has good Potential. Btw Those That Think Im wrong jjust need to read the 1st Paragraph.
Well here is just my honest review :
Pros:
+ The idea is new nothing so far abused that much so it feels fresh
Cons:
- Bad execution of the idea
- Kinda short chapters ( but that is not a big problem)
- Some grammer mistakes
slick