Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter One, The Prologue (rewrite) of the book Harry Potter and Grindelwald's Heir

Interesting first chapter rewrite, it's a bit more complex than the first writing, you're going to need to adapt Harry's training and student life to make him a Mc-equivalent opponent as the Harry of the books could never take on an opponent of that caliber. Good job.

Well wish I didnt read this chapter where I know the mc will have a group with the deathly hollows and fight a big battle against Harry