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phoenixhyperion
This is seriously one of the best book I've ever read. π
I can't detect a single flaw in the pace. Its cohesion amazes me, like, wow, this author has talents! I can sympathize with what the character is going through, I can vividly see the world from her perspective, I can understand why she becomes who she is now, seriously, you have the touch that could evoke the feelings from your readers that can make them feel what your character is going through.
And that's so amazing! Hats raised to you author! Splendid job on this book. Keep up the good work! Hope you keep updating for more!
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lakeslate
Just started this story and Iβm enjoying it! Iβm a little on edge and worried about our FL and MLπ«’π«£ I really enjoy the Magia BGround and great writhing so far and Iβm barely started!π₯π₯βοΈ
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mrant12
Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
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Kafilat_Bello_7549
Am sure this novel will be interesting β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Samantha_R_Samuel
I am so much in love with this book, I have been glued to my screen since I started reading it, I am far from done but what I have seens so far I would suggest everyone should give it a try :)
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JiyuYami
excellent novel, nothing to say, the characters are endearing and the world context is intriguing and interesting.
continue.
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Proteety_Promi
The writing is good and the story has a very smooth pace which makes it really amazing. Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!
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26stars
What a beautiful book! Everything in this book is wonderful! The way the author described the settings and wrote the dialogues are truly talented. The writings are neat and clear without a single mistake.
I also love the way the author re-tell Adam and Eve's story. It's so smart and interesting.
Five stars are not enough for this book, but I just have five stars to reward the brilliant author βββββ
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Venusean
The Forbidden Fruit is a well-written story that immensely appeals to people who like romance, mafia and non-braindead characters.
I haven't seen any noticeable flaws as per the writing and such.
The character design is great and boosted by the author's take on perspective and POV which allow us to understand and deeply relate to the main characters.
As for the world, it's a modern setting with underground society elements and seems compelling and interesting so far.
Keep up the great work, author.
Given it a read, everyone!
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meixiaolian
Author, you're great for writing this book. Descriptive words is enough for your readers to be hooked in. Your cover is cool to be noticed too! And I like the prologue too!
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Campoccino
This is just absolutely breathtaking. I mean, you did study literature right? Because this is definitely something I'd see a real literature major make. Thank you for this geeem! I'm also learning a lot on description building so extra thanks!
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Rachael_Olawale
I Love this book. The girl is so poetic. I see a lot of allusion and all and his book is actually the full package. I lovveeee it. Please add more chapters....
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Adwaid_Nambiar
I am going to be very honest here, I have read a of of books. Some from very big authors, some from not so well known authors. I often find some very well written novels on webnovel that are written better than those big writers, and this is one of them. The world building, the character, their characteristics, their dialogues, pretty much everything great beyond explanation. This is the kind of story that intrigues me the most. Never have I been so invested in reading as I am on this novel. And the humor is in point and the parallel it creates are also very good. A special shoutout to the writer for such a great work. Please continue the good work ;))
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evilantonio430
I'll have to admit that, when I read the prologue and found out this author was ESL, my expectations weren't too high. Surprisingly, though, the story was quite well written. everything else aside, I found myself not needing to play localization expert for long. aside from mistaking new jersey from an NYC burrough, her stuff is super accurate. case in point, I had thought the whole 'fancy nightclub in a warehouse' was total bunk. I thus went to my dad, who lived and worked in the NYC area when I was a kid; not even a full sentence into explaining the premise, though, I found out this was a totally real thing which I imagine only fellow new yorkers would readily know off hand. And if that wasn't crazy enough, after the pov switched at chapter 6 I think, I found no more localization errors. you can tell this author has put tremendous work here to make an engaging experience. the saying may be 'write what you know,' but for the author here I feel it really doesn't apply. Good luck and keep at it!
signed,
totally not a sock puppet for review swapper
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Sailow_Sanchez
The plot is great and update stability is fairly decent. I love the leads character can't wait to see further development. [img=update][img=coins][img=recommend]
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EruRizen
Want a badass heroine? This is your stop! A novel with great potential. I am at loss for how beautifully written this is! Great job, author!
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winterdaisy55
Oh my god.
This is one of the best books I have ever read! Like seriously, I really like the way you write, the way the plot flows so easily.
I have never read anything related to mafia or some sort, but this book surely made me become more intrigued about the life of a mafia. The suspense, the humor, everything is perfect. And not to mention, the two main leads are absolutely wonderful. I have no other choice but to like them!!
This book is honestly going to be one of the best book out there! Trust me! You don't even need to think twice before reading it.
I am definitely keeping this one in my library! Keep on writing, author! I'm rooting for you.
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Mineva
This is definitely one of the most interesting stories I've seen thus far here on this website. I loved the characters and how they interacted with each other. I hope that the author builds more upon this dynamic and give us more enjoyable chapters to enjoy.
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ling_baobao16
Great grammar, author-chan. I couldn't even detect a pea sized fault. As for the book, it is on par with the best sellers.Personally, in love with the female lead. Good job.
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E_Stunner_Official
This book is awesome. Books that manage to illustrate a good psychological attraction to them are always welcomed by me. And books in which love stays at hand but still hard to get are love, dude. Keep the awesome work going! Hwaiting!
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Zuwx
Damn, that was incredible. This story has a lot that isn't exaclty my cup of tea. Although I don't mind romance and multiple POV, I wouldn't be as immersed as I am here, if the writing quality wasn't top notch. I wolfed down 8 chapters and I have so much to do today. I was planning to check out the first 3ch and continue at night.
The female lead is very relatable at least to me.
The male lead is irritating to say the least. And that's what I like about him. I see so much character development ready for him that I just wanna see how they'll both change each other.
I have nothing to say about the writing quality except that it is ABSURDLY GOOD.
Honestly, I'm inspired.
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Lavvy
Well, I actually don't read mafia romances, specially those with darker plots. But this book made me feel that I've been missing on an entire genre of romance!
Now, coming to the plot, it's unique with occasional biblical references, action and sizzling hot romance.
The characters are not perfect, they make bad decisions, regret it and try to rectify their mistakes as best as they can.
All these make the characters more relatable to the readers!
The world background also shows the readers the background and daily life of the mafia families. We get to see Lorenzo's struggle about his own mafia backgroundβ how he hates and loves it at the same time.
The story also has a sense of adventure, as it is set when the characters are on the run.
And last (but definitely not the least), the romance, though it's just at the budding stage right now is already so intense, which makes me believe that it'd only get all the more blazing and passionate as the story progresses!π
Good job to the author for creating such an interesting plot![img=recommend]
I definitely don't want more, I need more chs!
P.s. A small request (sorry for being selfishπ
), can you please make it so that the story has a happy ending? Please!π₯Ί
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pshyyyy
I havenβt finished reading but Iβm already hooked. I donβt usually read this kind of genre but you opened a door for me. I really like how the story is so well written that I couldnβt write any flaws about it. Your wordings is really exceptional that it doesnβt look like itβs your first novel. I will binge read this for sure. Thank you for making this masterpiece π
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Tengu_San
Just started reading, and I was blown away by the quality, the pace, the creativeness. Good job author, keep up the great work!
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yu_chan_desu
so i came back for another review haha i absolutely love naomi hahahaha spirit animal for the savagery π the story gets a bit confusing sometimes but nonetheless super interesting each chapter! kudos to the authorπππ
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deleterduser322223
The biblical references used in the prologue are very interesting. it hints at the author's creativity and originality. well am not into romance but that prologue really made me want to read more.
The writing quality is great and so far I see no grammatical errors. overall great story!
Hmm the only thing I could suggest is to try and change that cover. i believe it may turn off some readers.(that's just my opinions don't mind me...)
But anyway I sincerely pray for your success author!
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kuhaku_sora
Your novel is very very veryyy engaging. I really like the way you tell the story of Adrena and Naomi especially the time where they were introduced as *cough* naughty girls. They're interesting ladies, if you know what I mean ;).
Indeed, this novel is for mature people that are open for various topics. So, advise you all to enjoy reading this fantastic novel!
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Maokitten
So I just started reading it. And for some reason l'm allI like, Yep this is good. I like the idea really and the way you write. Amazing effort. Well done.
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Ysabel_xox
Oooh! Your synopsis is good. I like the first line of it, it really set up the mood, the theme of the story. First chapter is great. I like how the characters' personalities are portrayed. It's smooth to read and it's not awkward.
Keep up the great work author!
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