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Munga_Munga_254
😡Fuck is this the same guy who is calm and rational 😡he was distracted in battle and knocked out likea pussy....the system status is really misleading..when you look at you thing this guy is one tough ass but was knocked out like a kid even if it was an ambush he still has his instinct for fuck sake😡
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TempestasUmbra
No cliche, I remember..? So after his first intial success there appears to be a war/larg scale conflict, and immediately after the ‚war arc‘ began, we have a ‚young master-situation‘ at hand, followed by an ambush and betrayal.
I mean really, your excuse is that the leader is stronger, when he has almost 5000 FPs in the bank? And you tell me, that he can‘t just spend them to get a technique, pill or some treasure to grow stronger than the leader? So either way, we have a dumb MC, that didn‘t even try to geow powerful in his 11 years living in this world, or qe habe a System that nerfs our MC so he can‘t even grow stronger than some backwater barbarian tribe leader, while he had more than ten years to try?
Also, he just ‚trusted‘ the shaman and the leader? Are you sure the dude was a military man? Because if he were, he would habe seen the ugly side of humanity enough to understand that power always corrupts. Especially if you are shown up by a little kid, which threatens your position and is growing up to be a more than qualified contender.
Author your chapter called, it said it was drowning in cliche...
Wasted my time on this book, f*ck...
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Nyareh_Grant
Ffs the mc is a pussy he doesn't even have any desire to get revenge or see his family again its just oh well at least there OK
Tmii